Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting plot! Thanks for the pm :-)
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chp 7 : the notebooks

We all need someone to talk about our day, a friend , a family member or a notebooks, some people have the habit of sharing their happiness, sadness, small adventures and pain that they had during the day in a Notebooks

Rano goes to her bedroom take a bag were she was hidding a few notebooks in different colors she take the black one that was last one writing , in the last page she read the last note.

"I could take back those moments that snatched you away from me or maybe just wipe away those ten minutes when you came to me for the first time and I looked into your eyes to realise what love is."

Mohinderlaal was behind her said " Rano why are still keeping Geet's notebooks , we agree to burn them after Geet's surgery "

Rano " I was afraid that a day like today come , i was keeping if Geet had questions , also i keeping to remember why we do what we do , i just want to make Geet last note true "

Mohinderlaal said " We try, but fate is not always in our Side"

Rano " Do you think that she will fall in love with him again ?"

Mohinderlaal " I don't know , lets hope that he will not break her heart again "

Rano " Do you think she will forgive us for lying to her ?"

Mohinderlaal " Geet cannot get angry from the people she love , even if she want to, she will understand , we are her parents and we were trying to protect her "

Rano " if he didn't reject her twice , one when he didn't saw her love and the second when he didn't remember her we wouldn't have to do all that "

Mohinderlaal "Ok Rano let go to take some rest , and dont worry about Geet , she always find a way the survive from eny trouble or trauma she face "

Rano smile a sad smile " Our Geet is realy a fighter, after all she had faced during her life , since childhood, she find a way to survive "

They both head to the bedroom that Rajji prepare it for them, to try to rest from this long day

Flashback ( From the notebooks )

Geet goes to the library, because she know that the only place that would be emty on lunch time , she sit on one of table and say to herself " Did i just said what i just said ? " then she add with an evil smile " i think all time of watching westerly movies and series , help me find a good feedbacks .But was i so rude ?" she said with a little guilt then her stomach

start to sing then to guilt was replace by pique and say

"no no she deserve it she throw my lunch's box on the floor, mom realy prepared all this for me with love and im still hungry , damn it girl did you have to mess with me when i just started my lunch , all the food is spoil, i will go home i can't study when im hungry "

it was just an exuse after all the clap and the attention that she has after that, she couldn't go back to the classroom she doesn't enjoy people attention to her, she is happy with her own world

She take her bag and the empty lunch box and go to home , she was lucky to find to bus soon , when she enter home , she head to the Kitchen when her mom Rano was busy , then she said huging her from behind " Hi mom, so when we are not home you spend your time on the Kitchen"

Rano was took by surprise" o god you scare me Geet , you don't come at this time from school, are you ok dear ?"

then she turn touching Geet forehead " Dont tell you have fever again "
Geet " No mom im not sick , i just decide to be brat today and
skip some classes , by the way im hungry there is enyting here to eat ?"

then she head to the Fridge searching for food

Rano "I give you a huge lunch's box and you still want to eat"

Geet " Lets just said that there is nothing left on that box "

Rano "you are so skinny, i wish to know when all the food that you eat went , you are always hungry"

Geet " by the way mom you are not going to scolt me, i just told you that i skip school "

Rano " i know how crazy you are , you just decide to do some stuff out of the blue like to day you decide to participe in that compitition that help you to win that schoolship, we all were shock when you were like " i will go to a knew school i won a compitition at school, and gess what im going the a high school of rich people " and your hair's cut for exemple you were like" i cut my hair alone last night because its to long and i dont have time to brush it"

Geet said mom " mom going the that school is good think for my future , the name of that school my file will help to go to eny art college i want , here or UK or USA.As for my hair its just that i want a short hair so i will not have to brushed every morning for a long time , or bother me while drawing or designing school projects , also it will grew again, i know that you want me to have a long hair so when you decide to get me married you wil be " Look i have a daugther who can cook and have a long hair too " im only 14 year old let me some crazy things"

Rano laugh " its ok dear, you are a Adolescence you need to do something like that once , skiping school cuting your hair, also you are always the first at you class , so im not worry about you if you skip a few class, "Art" are just your passion "

Geet "Wow mom you are realy a cool mom, since dad is still at work and sis is on college , and we are alone lets make some Snacks and watch a movie together, just the 2 of us "

Rano laugh " Ok ,by the way did you make eny friends at school you are there for a month "

Geet " Lets just said not yet" Geet think" i made a few enemies"

she was glad that her mother didn't ask her more, she doesn't want to make her worry

Geet and Rano have a good laugh that afternoon also a good

"Mother -daugther" time .

Next day Geet goes to School waiting for more ignorance from the student, but she was shocked when the student start to say to here while she was walking to classroom

"Hi outsider , you rocked yesterday", " you are awesome outsider"

or they give her a tumps up,

Geet keep thinking heading to the class room " O my god whats wrong with everybody , they even give me a nick name " Outsider " what the hell is happening ?, why suddenly everybody know me, is insulting someone on public give you popularity in this School ? ok this school is weird"

When she enter the classroom , she saw the teach wasn't there yet , the student were talking but when she enter they suddenly stop taliking and look at her , then a group of girls come to her and satrts saying

" Hi outsider, seat next to me "

" No next to me "

"Im Mansi " ,"Im Vidhi " ," im Sima" ...

They Surround her and talking all at once then she scream

" Be silent " then they stop talking

" Hi girls nice too me you, but i can't understand what you are saying when you are talking all at once , its to much information to take "

Then they start looking at eachother and laugh one of them

" said o god you are so cool outsider , im Mansi please seat next to me "

Geet "Why all the sudden ? im here for a month and i always seat alone "

Mansi" i know we were not friendly with you sorry for that, and after what have you done to Bebo we are now Big fans of you "

before Geet could said anything to teacher come the students take their seats , and Geet just seat next to Mansi since she insist

After that class , they to the workship , and Geet was surprise again to say people asking to be part of their groops when the teacher talk about the necceraty of working on groop to presente to finale project, she just end up again with Mansi and her group, at lunch time they insist that they she seat on their table , she just seat

And one of them said " Wow outsider what you did here is historical"

Geet " Realy ? you dont seem a big fan of Naintara "

Mansi "We are not no one girl in this school , yes she is like a diva here, but she is always mean to the girls "

Sima add " She make fun from the fat's girls on the dress room that a lot of them stop changing there"

Vidhi " She once threw a glass of jus on my clothes , just because i was wearing the same T-shirt as her , so she would make me change"

Mansi " the only reason that i was not one of her vectimes in because my big sister is one her selvage, i mean friends"

Vidhi "she never stop saying insulting stuff to us even if dont talk to her , she make fun of all the girls , she does that usuly when the no one of the teachers are around and the girl are alone, and when she go to a party she love to Insult someone on a way or another "

Sima " Last year a girl try to Suicide because she and her friends keep torturing her all year by there bully, but since she never does that on public , no one could prove that, the girl finally change to school"

Mansi " infact you are here today because of that, the school try to save her reputation after that inccident of one of student try to commit Suicide by giving a Scholarship to one smart student on Art since that girl's was Art's student , it a way to save Dignity of the school "

Geet " why didn't they just expil her ?"

Mansi " her father give a huge donation to the school , also he do a Settlement with that girl family , but dont worry she cannot touch your position at school since i hear my sister said that her father worn her that he will not fixe eny mess of hers again"

Geet " im not afaid or scary of her , if something is mean to be it will happen"

Sima " you realy have a positive attitude "

Geet start to take her lunch again

Vidhi " Cute lunch box by the way "

Geet " thanks but this lunch box is realy an ordinary india food

box "

But when she saw that they were having lunch on 5 start restaurant

style she understand why they find her lunch's box cute,

most of tables there look like a West's 5 start taibles and food,so many forks, knives, the taebles are well disignes, the food is made by a chef Then one of them ask her " Can i taste some for your food ? "

with there forks they all try to tasted and act like Tourists who try

some food for the first time

" Its so good what is that ? ", " Your mom realy can cook " ," I never try that before "

Geet smile " Im glad you like it " start to talk about everything they try

Then when one of those little box Geet stop her saying " Sorry i dont share Barfi its my favorite , the only reason that i will ever shared, if it a pregnant woman ask to teste it or a person who is about the die, no one of you is preganant , you look healthy to me so no Barfi for you'"

They start to laugh and one of them said " O god you act like joye from friends he doesn't share food, and you dont share Barfi "

Mansi " I cannot believe that we were not friends before "

They start talking and having fun, even Geet try some of there plat too,Geet was realy the friendly type that realy love to chat and laugh with people

Sima then said " O god the 4 Greek goddess are here "

Geet said while eating calmly without turning " Who ? "

All the girls look at her on Shock " We talk about the most hansome groop of boys on school , Maan Singh Khurana and his friends"

Geet keep having lunch and ask again " Who ?"

Mansi " You dont know Maan Singh Khurana , he is like movie star here ,and his group too, he is the most handsome , the come from Richest his father is on of the richest man on Asia, has a good classement over the world list of richest people too, wery big Companies, also his Aunt is married to one of the powerful Politicians on india , he is the only child on his family "

Sima " He has a good sense of fashion too , great on study "

Vidhi " and his attitude just wow , he is body perfect "

Geet start to laugh and said " Wow girls all you need is to make a fan club for this boy, you know so much about him" and keep laughing

Vidhi " Dont make fun of us , he is so cool , and also his friends,

2 of every 3 girl on the school dream to date him , the rest admit

that he is saxy, hot and handsome "

Sima "Infact all the girls try to have a table next to his at lunch"

Geet laugh again and said " why the girls of this school never saw a human having lunch ?"

Mansi " Just look at him once and you will understand"

Geet " i will pass i have no time for this " Geet just finish lunch and get up Sima " were are going ? "

Geet " Library, i need to retun some books before i go to the classroom , ok se you there"

The girls said " Ok see you outsider"

Geet " Just call me Geet "

Mansi " We like to call you outsider "

Geet smile and say " Ok if you like it "

In next following weeks Geet had become a good friend to Mansi , Sima and Vidhi , the students start to treat her like one them,she have people to work with in the art's project , her parents were happy when she tell them she has more friends

Then one day Mansi give her a birthday invitation, Geet couldn't refuse , her family were happy to know since Geet never goes toany party with friends

Geet " Thats is go to the party ? you are not worry , just go likethat all i said is one of my friend invite me to her birthday i may back late at night ?"

Rano " We are happy because you start to open on people , you don't do that before , since to girl study with you and your friends and its her birthday why not ? "

Mohinderlaal " And dont worry i will take to her house and come to pick when you call me happy "

Rajji " I go to my friends birthdays all the time i also have done sleepover in my best friend Roma many time, in high school having friends and going for birthday and stuff like that is good "

Rano " Its a good Improvement"

Geet "yeh for a girl who face a trauma as a kid its good in start to act normal "

When she realize that her reamarque start to wake some dark part

on her , part about her parents, in that day when she lose them ( thats is a story for later )

she chake her head and said before they start feeling sorry for her again , before they try the Consolation, she could feel they eyes that full with petty looking at her on that dinner table , she laugh and add to change the subjet " Ok i will go , mom i will need your help to choose a good gift"

Rano " wow great finaly you ask me to go shopping , i usuly drag you to do that "

Rajji said teasing Geet " Iets bay a Pink Dress too, i pair of high heels , and i will do your hair cut , and no glasses so you start look more like a girl"

Geet with a stem look " On my dead body" they all start to laugh again

On day of the party when her father drop her infront of that big house that Mansi will celebrate on it , and said to herself before nock to the door

" something is going to happen today , i have that feeling "

She didn't know that she will meet a boy on on that party, a boy that his name will Dig in her heart , a boy she will call later her first and last love a boy named Maan Singh Khurana

Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice update ! maan remembering the first time he saw her... can you pl. check the names before posting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 4

both fb were nice
toh if me not wrong maanu was geet's first crush
n ab b tha haina
n viku yuck me dont like this guy
it
bt he behind my geetu so me dont like
something ha[ppend in this one month haina
n geet n her disease

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab superb updates...well wriiten, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome ff
loved the start
so geet has had memory loss
waiting to see how maan reminds her of her past
n what did maan do that geet left him twice???

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
part 5
awow
wt does maanu mean
that she planned everything their meeting was planned😕
chodo
bt yaar me just loving this geet
she is relly too good no actually best n he humor mind blowing
maaneet s' kissi
\yeee😆😆
lvd it


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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6
maanu knew abt her lv
mai b na obviously geet ne btaya hoga when they were together haina
maanu's b wow
me toh just lvd geet's ans she gave to that nt
n geet made nt cry awww its fantastic
its amazing
waiting 4 more more more

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lovely part.flashback ws awsum.loved hw geet retorted bk to naintara.our sherni geet.bt whn maan told his full name y didnt geet recognisd him??as during date wid vikram,she had told dt she lyk msk whn she ws only 14.w8ing 4nxt,dear
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Fb parts r beautiful,jst like present parts,can you tell me who is arthi you mentin hr name again and again here bt never intriduce her as a charectr,bt u use hr name instead of geet again and again.nice lovely part.cnt sn...

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