Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17 and 18 reaaly nice partsπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is so funny...love her attitude...
Nt u r a super b...h...

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Posted: 12 years ago
finally,Maan's heart skipped a bit.i ws waitin 4dis moment.now let's c maan ka kya haal hota hai age πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one...
Geet is a unique...
Lets see what will happen in 3 months under same roof...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome part 18.loving maaneet cute little fights.maan saying please for the 1st tym.hayyee...cntinue soon,dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

so maan didnt remember d outsider

he is using her to get that palace of them

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17 - so maan has plan to get the palace back...oh so cheap is nt ...she is one year older to maan nad marrying his father only for money
Again I loved geet humor
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 18 - Lovely part dear
Again geet so optimistic and fun loving girl that sure she will him very soon and make him to fall in love with her
Loved her making him do what she wanted in her own way like accepting golden card
Loved their talk about their fathers and her view
Maan is slowly falling for her, omg he is J of wedding planners men
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chp 19 :The first night in our home
Part 1



Marriage is a very sacred relationship , it maybe based on love ,
interests or social impact , and we olso we leave our family behind us and our home , to go to a new one on a new home

Flashbacks

Geet and Maan has a busy 2 weeks, Geet was shopping for the preparation with her mother,Pinky and Rajji , and Maan was moving again to the palace with Dadi ma and Dev, making sure that they get their old rooms, so they didn't see each other, but Maan keep take care of Geet he had send a luxury car on her house with driver, he even send a card with it saying " Its your car from today please use it " and that realy shock Geet, also he keep reading a reports of all her purchases with the golden card that he give her , to make sure that she use it
Maan was on his office 3 days before the wedding reading on his I Pat like every day the list of Geet's purchases , when Dev enter to give him some files
Dev " What are you review this days Maan ? "
Maan with cold tone " I just make sure that Geet is using the card "
Dev " Are you spying on her ? sorry Maan but this is something personnal , giving her the card doesn't give you the right of ... wait a minute i never saw you curious about a girl before ok do you ..;"
Maan again with his cold self "No Dev i dont"
Dev " Hey i didn't even end my talk"
Maan he keep looking at his IPat " But i know what you are thinking , i dont love her Dev"
Dev " I was just hoping , but if it wasn't crazy love so is this because of what Pari has done ?, come on not all the girls will cheat on you like her, Geet is realy different and ..."
But Dev stop talking looking at Maan face who suddenly become red of anger and was looking at Dev with rage on his eyes
Dev realize his mistake then say " Sorry Maan , i know you hate when we talk about that matter realy sorry i did mean to ..."
Maan then look again to his Ipat and say with a cold tone " Its ok Dev im not spying i just make sure that she use it "
Dev " O I come to give you this files i will just put it here, you can see it later , by the way you are coming for dinner right ?"
Maan " Yes, its the first dinner that we gonna have after we comeback to the palace , i will not let you and Dadi maa having dinner with Father and Naintara alone "
Dev shake his head and say " They are not even married yet i don't know why she come to the palace every day ,and now having dinner , that Naintara is realy .."but again Dev stop talking since he notice that Maan start to get angry again so he say
" Ok Maan , see you at the house, the dinner on 2 hour "
Maan with a cold tone again "See you "
Dev went out , leaving Maan looking at the list, Maan was looking at it thinking "Its all a normal girls stuff,maybe Dev is right i should stop this crazy behavor,but why am i so curious about that girl ? ok i will stop this "But when he was about the close it his eyes fall on the last things that Dev had purchased and he smile then laugh and say " What ? that girl is realy weird, who buy a karaoke system, monopoly,dog's toys , video games wait a minute dog's toys she has a dog ?a fish bowl ,notebooks , and dvd of the all the seasons of Friends" he shake his head and say " All she choose the buy is this, she could buy more clothes , diamonds and Jewels, i have a feeling that my 3 months with her will be a realy long ones"
He say this then start laughing again


Meanwhile Geet was on her room, with Pinky and Rajji , who were looking at the things that Geet buy on that day
Rajji to Geet " you finaly find a chance to go to shop alone and you buy this "
Pinky " Wow all that a lot of vedio games"
Geet laugh and say" Adi will be happy , next time when we gonna play vedio games i will show him this he will go crazy, please dont tell him i wanna see the look of his face when he will see it "
Pinky " Geet you are going to get married i think you should stop plying video games "
Geet " You only say that because you want me to give it to you , so you could give it to Adi"
Pinky " No, i hate the fact that he play video games, it was realy hard the make him , play a limited hours a day if i give this , he will not stop "
Rajji " Its useless to talk with her , she love video games like a boy"
Geet laugh "Yes i love it, and i will not stop play it even after marriage , by the way Pinky this is for Sparky and Adgeety " she then give 2 bags to Sunita with the dog's toys and the fish bowl
Rajji " Whos Sparky and Adgeety?"
Pinky laugh " Sparky is my dog and Adgeety is my fish , thanks Geet but why all the sudden ?"
Geet " What you forget ?after 3 days its Sparky birthday, since my weeding is on 3 days i cannot give it to him, and i brough this for Adgeety since i dont want her to feel jealous"
Rajji " Are we still talking about a dog and a fish ? "
Geet look at her and laugh , then Pinky say " Ok i can undersatand all this but why a karaoke system ?"
Geet " Since you gonna stay with me for a sleep over ,Adi is at home watching Spake who is sick, and Tejji baya travel back to America for some work , i decide that i want to do a girls night with my favorite girls and i buy this to have fun , remember Pinky when we went to that karaoke's clup on Japan 3 years ago , we realy have fun there so i think we gonna have fun here too "
Rajji laugh "Wow, you realy have big plans for tonight "
Pinky laugh "We realy gonna have fun is that has a good songs lets start "
Geet " Wait we need Soda and snacks"
Rajji " I will bring it from the kitchen "
Pinky " i will come the help you "
Geet "Cool i will check the songs here "
After a while Geet, Pinky and Rajji were singing and dancing
Mr Dubey and Subha were on the living room when they hear the loud music
Mohinderlaal " O god , its so loud "
Rano " Im gonna ask the girls to lower the sound "
then she went to Geet's room the find the door open and the 3 girls dancing and singing , then she stand at the door watching them and laughing then when she was about the speak, Geet notice her and drag then give her a mike saying " Sing mom sing you know the song, look the lyrics are on the screen "
Pinky and Rajji start to ask her the sing too, so Rano start the sing then after a while she get realy on the song that she start dancing too Geet say " Mom move you lips , now your hips mom , mom you rock "
Mohinderlaal realize that Rano is late and the music is still loud then he went the room the get the shock of his life his wife was singing and dancing holding a mike like a rockstart , when the song end , he start the clap saying " Wah , Geet Wah , you did it your bad influence finaly reach to last sene woman on the house "
Rano feel embarrassed and give the mike to Rajji who was looking nervous with Pinky but Geet start to laugh and say " Yes dad im a bad influence but damn im Fun ! and you cannot ignore the fact that mom was looking saxy and hot, she just rock "
Mohinderlaal laugh and say " I have to agree with that "
Rajji and Pinky look at each other trying hard not the laugh , but Rano feel more embarrassed and pull Geet's ear saying " You devil, im here to tell to stop this loud music"
Geet "ah ah my ear , mom we are just having fun "
Mohinderlaal " Ok , you can have fun but make sure that the sound is not too loud "
Geet " Ok dad " then she take a mike and say " Dad lets sing a song together all of us "
Mohinderlaal " No "
Geet " we are not going to dance , its a song that we saw on one of the movies that we watch together and i know that you like it "then she make a cute sad face and look at him saying "Please dad , just one song im going to get married on 3 days "
Mohinderlaal shock everybody when he say " Ok , just one "
Geet say with a big smile " Just read the lyrics on the sceen"
Mohinderlaal "ok "
then Geet fixe a song and turn the music on ,and give mikes to all of them
Rano " You brough a lot of mikes" Pinky say "I know this song its from "stepmom" and "sister act 2" right ?"
Rajji look at her " Wow ,i love those movies "

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kP8IRXBymE[/YOUTUBE]

Then they all start to sing, they realy enjoy it even Mohinderlaal sing to lines on the end of the song, everybody was laughing then Mohinderlaal say "Thats enough for us Rano lets go and let the girls have fun "
Rano " OK " But Geet realize that her parents has get emotional because of the song so she look at them them hug them saying " I love you guys you are the best parents ever "
then Rano was about the start crying Geet break the hug look at her and say "Mom save the tears intil the wedding day "
Then everybody start the laugh , then they went after saying "Good night " Geet then went to close the door behind them and she hear her father saying the her mother on the stairs "Geet was right you rocked there "
and Rano start the laugh then Geet close the door and look at Rajji and Pinky and say "This 2 are going have more fun than us tonight "
Rajji then threw a pillow on her saying " You devil "
Geet laugh and say " Ok lets keep up "
Pinky laugh and say" This time i will choose the song , its my turn "
Pinky, Rajji and Geet keep singing and daancing till the morning , they were so tired that they do like little girls and make arrange mattress and sleep on the floor
After 3 days, finnaly the wedding day has come , Geet was on a room on the palace, wearing her bride outfit with the help of Pinky and Rajji
Pinky " Wow, dear you look realy beautiful "
Rajji "Realy beautiful bride "
Pinky" The wedding also look great, but its weird that a son and his father are going the get married on one day "
Rajji " agree, and this palace is huge , i cannot believe that you gonna live here wow, its like a royle palace"
Geet " yeh but i gonna get lost all the time, since i have a poor direction sense"
and everybody start the laugh the door nock Rajji go the open and find its Maan with some old man then she comeback saying " Pinky lets go i think Maan and Geet have something to talk about "
after they went Maan enter with Mr Arjun , Geet who was sitting and looking to the mirror get up and look at him , smile and say " Hi Maan wow you look realy handsome on the groom's traditional clothes "
Mr Arjon laugh from Geet remarque ,and say " He should be the one who say that right Maan ? you bride look so pretty right"
Maan was lost on Geet's beauty that he couldn't answer , then Mr Arjon say " Hi miss Geet , im Mr Arjon the former lawyer of Maan's mother im her for the agreement "
Maan say with a firm tone " I bring the marriage paper , with the agreement before the marrige for you to signe it "
Mr Arjon give the papers and a pen to Geet who signe the paper with a big smile and say " Miss Geet if you signe those you gonna get nothing after the divorce are you sure ? "
Geet keep signing then give it ti him saying " Call me now Ms Geet and yes Mr Arjon im sure "
Mr Arjon take the paper and went leaving Geet and Maan alone
Geet "All we need now is the do the rituals and this marriage will be complete , just give me a few minute to end my dressing up and i will come"
Maan then say " Dont take so long, i hate waiting "
Geet say joking "You dont have patience to marry me right "then laugh
Maan turn going and say with a cold tone " I dont have no patience to get this palace back, and dont worry i can never love a crazy girl like you " then went and close the door,
Geet just keep smiling looking at him going and think " He didn't change at all , his ego just grew with the years "
Then Pinky and Rajji come taking her ,to the rituals ,Maan feel proud of the fact that Geet stole the attention from Naintara when she come , after the end all rituals ,the dance and celebrations, Geet went with her family to consigh them, Dadi ma ask him to go with her on case she get sad of the good bye Maan then follow her
To findGeet joking again and making everybody laugh , he think going on her direction " Even on a moment like that, she laugh and jock girls usuly cry "
then he stand next to her , Rano was huging her saying " Come the visit us everyday Geet "
Geet laugh " Everyday ? now i know why Sis went to US after her marriage "
Everybody start the laugh again , Mohinderlaal hug her and say "I love you dear , take care of yourself "
Geet "Ok dad i love you too "
Mohinderlaal " Im gonna miss you "
Geet " I will miss you too dad"
Rajji was about to start to cry Geet look at her and say "Dont tell me that you gonna miss me too , we are not living with each other for years now since you got married and tomorrow you are going back to US "
Rajji laugh and say "You crazy , call me everyday ok "
Geet " Ok " then she hug everyne and they wenton their car while Geet wave to them Maan just keep looking at the scene from distance , then he come close to Geet after they went and say "And Dadi maa ask me to come on case you get sad and start crying like every girl but you handle it very well"
Geet smile look at him " Wow, Dadi ma is realy sweet "
Maan " Yes, she is, and you are weird "
Geet "Im not weird im a limited edition"
Maan just shake his head and keep looking at her , then Pinky and Adi come
Pinky " We were looking for you Geet and you guys standing here"
Geet " Hi, are you going now? "
Adi " Yes"
Geet " Adi give me your camera "
Adi " Why if you want the see the wedding pics that i took , i will show it to you later "
Geet " No , i want us the take one more pic, just the 3 of us, im on the bride clothes thats a good day for a pic"
Adi give her the camera, then she give it to Maan saying " Take a pic of us please Maan "
then went and stand between Adi and Pinky and say "Guys see chees, please Maan make sure to take a good one"
Maan take the pic thinking "What the hell ? now im taking pics for her and her friends, this girl is realy... "
After he took it Geet come take it and start to look at it saying "Yeh, thats a good pic thanks Maan "
Then went to show it to Adi and Pinky
Pinky " Cool pic"
Adi " Ok Geet , we have to go good night "
Pinky say winking at Geet " Good night dear , have fun, and congratz for the wedding "
Geet hug them saying "Good night guys "
Adi then shake hand with Maan saying " Please take care of her"
Pinky smile and say " She is a little crazy and careless, so please take care of her "
Maan just keep shaking hand with a cold face
Then they went to their car and Geet keep waving to them
Maan then look at Geet and say " Lets go Dadi maa is waiting for you ,to give you a proper welcome "
Geet " Cool i will threw the jar and make a mark on the wall like the movies wow"
Maan just shake his head , Dadi was waiting for her, after the ritual , she went with them with a few women till a hall leading to there room and say " Maan take your bride to you room "
Maan look at her and " Do i have to .."
Dadi laugh" Yes, Maan pic her up and take her its your first night at our home "
Geet smile and say "Come on Maan im not that heavy"
Maan then take Geet on his arms and say while heading to there room "Do you always have something to say ?" then he look at her Geet blush since she was on his arms and he was looking at her,she say " Only on 90 % of the times"
Maan smile and enter the room , while the sevents close the door behind them

For me marriage is a great way to find someone to witness your life while witness his,

Precap : chp 20 :The first night in our homen Part 2

Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
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