Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 13

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Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4 – geet & viku's alliance is fixed …oh …geet passed out…loved her sense of humor with everbody

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Part 5 - loved their second first kiss that too in plane...
Loved the idea of 'her clumsy list'
Loved how she is confortable with dev, calling him baya...
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Part 6 - Loved the brave girl who fights back to nt
so geet fell in love with maan when she is 12 years old
loved their initial talk
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Madhuri53 when she was 14 years old , she keep loving him for 12 years
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chp 15 : Will you marry me ?



Every girl dream is to hear " Will you marry me ? " from the man that she love , its one of the best moment in eny girl life

Flashbacks

Maan was in her car and Dev was looking at him with shock

then Dev said after a while " Who are you and what did you do to Maan ? "
Maan " what are you talking about ? "
Dev " Im not only talking about the fact that you smile and laugh and this is something that i didn't see on years, you offer that girl your shoe and you the perfect Mr Maan Singh Khurana , agree to walk to his car on the street Barefoot, WOW im shocked "
Maan with a cold tone " Stop your jocks "
Before Dev could said enything more, Maan's Cell rang ,he answer and see"Hi, Mr Arjon, see you at my house we gonna talk that matter tonight, ok see you "
Dev " Mr Arjon you mean the former lawyer of your mother , what did he want after all this years the last time i saw him it was when he bring her last will to you and help you to get your 20 millions dollar legacy , but what does he want ? "
Maan with a firm tone" There is still a Pending issue, i call him yesterday to talk about it , now we ganna back to the house "
Dev look at Maan confused but couldn' ask for more since he know that if Maan didn't give him the details of a matter that mean he will not say enything even if he ask him, so he just press a button and order the diver from the Amplifier to go back at home


Meanwhile Geet was still standing there looking at the vacuum, when she hear Nandini saying " Geet, Geet are you ok ?"
Geet comeback to earth and say " Im fine , so tell me did you call your family "
Nandini " Yes, a pliceman give me his phone they gonna come tomorrow to the hospital, infact i have the go the medic say that im the last girl, so im going by ambulance, i just came to say goodnight to you again before i go "
Geet " Goodnight dear and take care of yourself "
Nandini then hug Geet then go with the medic , then from the Crowds that was fulling the place Geet see Adi and Pinky and they look like they are looking for her, she wave the them till they saw her ,
Pinky run to her and hug " O my god Geet we keep looking for you for a while the police came full the pub and i hear some horrible things "
Adi " Are you ok Geet ? "
then Pinky start to look at Geet to make sure that she is ok then Geet said " Relax guys im fine "
Then Pinky notice the shoe that Geet was wearing and say "Geet, why are you wearing a man's shoe "
Geet laugh and say " About that , lets go to your home first and im gonna tell you there , lets go guys, its realy a weird story , i will drive"
Adi and Pinky look at Geet confused but they just follow her to the car , they know that Geet will not start to speak till they arrive at the house .



Maan and Dev arrive at the house they find the lawyer waiting for them on the leavingroom and talking to Dadi ma
Dev " Hi mom you can not believe what happen tonight sepicialy with Maan " then he smile and look at Maan
Maan " Hi dadi ma,"
Dadi ma " Hi beta "
then Maan look to Mr Arjon and said " hi Mr Arjon, lets go to my office please "
when Maan and Mr Arjon went she look at Dev and said " I was shocked when i saw Mr Arjon again, but why is he here after all this years ? "
Dev " I have no idea ma , he didn't say enything to me , but maa we have a very intersting night i have a lot to tell you ma "
He sit next to his mother and start to tell her what happened with them , and she was more that happy to hear about Maan's behavior with Geet
In the office Maan and the lawyer keep talking for a long time after a while Maan say " Is this the only way, is this even legal ? "
Mr Arjon " Yes , Maan its legal and its the only right way to do it, i know you have the power to destroy your father and take the family's Palace back , but i also know that you cannot since your mother also forbid you from doing that as her last wish, the only way that will help you to get the palace back without hurting your father is by Achieve the condition condition that she put on the will "
Maan then look at him and said " Thanks , Mr Arjon , i will contact later you"
They shake hand then Mr Arjon went , that night keep thinking about that issue . and thinking " Why mother , why ? why you put that condition on your will? was not enough that you kill yourself because of my father ? what im going to do now , i cannot let him live with Naintara on our house "


Meanwhile on the leaving room Pinky and Adi were looking at Geet with their mouth open on shock , Geet laugh at their expretion and said " I know i still couldn't believe that as well im wearing Maan's shoe "
Adi " Wow all this happened ? wow this is , this is ... "
Pinky" destiny, i mean the universe want to unite you with Maan "
Geet laugh " Yeh right, Maan didn't remember me at all "
Adi " I have told you that guy is stupid "
Geet look at him with anger and say " Dont talk about him like that 10 years is a long time, and i have changed a lot even me when i see my old pic i see a huge difference, i use to look like a nerd mixed with a tomboy "
Pinky and Adistart to laugh then Pinky say " You are so in love with him "
Geet" Yes, i madly in love with him, and my meeting with him after all this years make me love him even more "
Adi "You gonna meet him again on monday then lets prepare you to that "
Pinky "Lets start by clothes what were you wearing when you first meet him , do you remember now ? "
Geet " yes, a salwar kameez"
Pinky " perfect thats your style enyway "
Adi " Also we can use the shoe so after the meeting you can start a talk "
Geet laugh and said " Thanks guys for the help, you are great friends im realy glad that i meet you "
Pinky hug Geet and said " No we are the one blessed by meeting you , you change our life a lot, we meet thanks to you , and you help us a lot in the past with our love story, you also somehow change us with your friendship "
Adi siad jocking " Also you take care of the plants , the dog and the fish when we are not on town "
Everybody start to laugh again , and keep their talk till late at night

On monday Geet was looking breath taking on her salwar kameez, she was waiting for yash with Adi on the meeting room, after some time Maan come with Dev and a few staff
Geet's heart start to beat fast and say " He is here "
Adi look at her then the door knock and Maan with the others enter,he was cold like he is on all his meeting he just set on the seat that was for him after he say a cold tone without even looking at Geet or Adi "Hi "
then he add looking at the screen " Lets start "
Geet was shocked with his cold action but she remember that Adiand Pinky told her that he act like that at all his meetings, she look at Adi to Lights off, and she start her presentation, she show him all the slogan , to ideas with pic for the publicity, time to time she look at Maan face while talking , and saw that he was looking at the screen with a cold face , then after 1 hour of presentation, she arrive to the last one , the one for his telecommunication companies, the idea was simple, a girl and a boy who were on love on high school they get separated and after years they meet again using Products of that company , the publicity was simple and beautiful with a cute love story , but what Geet was telling their stry to him using it, then she say on the end still looking at Maan waiting for his reaction " And with that we end this presentation "
A silence full the room for seconds everybody was waiting to see Maan reaction he look at Geet smile and say " Thats an amezing publicity "
then look at Dev and say " You were right she is the best "
Dev then add " Miss Geet that was best work that i have even say , it will be great if use all the publicity for our Affiliates on india "
Maan then look at Adi and say " Infact i want that your company make a publicity for all my companies even outside india of course by Miss Geet "
Adi smile and said " Ok sir '
Maan then look at his Wristwatch " Lets talk about the details later i have another meeting "
He get up shake hand with Adi then with Geet
Geet " Glad that you like it "
Maan" Im waiting for more work from you "
When he was going to the door , Adi remind Geet of the shoe and said "Mr Maan , wait " he stop and look at her , she bring a box to him and say " Your shoe sir , i would keep it but its not my size "
Maan smile take the box and went out
Adi come to Geet and said " Thats great we gonna have more meeting with him , you are going to see him again "
Geet take a breatha and said " No , we will not going to meet again, i promise my parents that i will go to US for treatment after i meet with him once and we meet till now twice , so i will tell them today that im ready for the operation "
Adilook at her with shock and said " But you love him"
Geet then said " I know Adi but promise my familly, that if he didn't remember me i will go for the operation and he didn't , and lets face it even if he does i will be always the outsider for him, he didn't love me then,so how can he love me now ? and even if he does , he will suffer if i die, i cannot do this to him im going to US and thats finale "
Adi put his hand on his should and say " If this what you want "
then the door nock and Pinky enter one look to their sad faces she know something is wrong " What happened guys ? "
Adi look at her and say " Geet want to go the US "
Pinky " But why now ? you still have time ?"
Adi " Lets talk about that on lunch , Geet lets go "
Geet " Just go to the restaurant that we always went to, reserve a table and i will follow , i need to be alone for a few minute "
Adi and Pinky look at Geet then Adi said " Ok , we will go first but fallow us soon ok "
Pinky " We are not going to order till you came "
Geet with a sad smile " Ok , just go first "
Pinky and Adi leave the room , then Geet went to the seat when Maan was seting touching it with her fingers smile then set there and play the last publicity that she show him , thinking " I wish we have the same end as this 2, they meet again and got married but imagination and reality are different"
Geet keep looking at that short publicity again and again from Maan eat

Meanwhile Maan was on his car looking at the box that Geet give him and smile , then Dev " Why are you smiling like that ? "
Maan look at him and said " That girl remind me of someone i use to know "
Dev " You mean Geet ? "
Maan "Yes , Geet "
Dev " Remind of who ?"
Maan " lets stop talk about me and tell why do you want to go to the City hospital now ?"
Dev with an eveil smile " To get my jacket back "
Then the car stop and Maan say "Look we are on the hospital , go and get your jacket "
Dev " Dont wait for me just go to your meeting i may get late "
Maan " I know that the reason was that girl, ok i will go to all my meeting alone i give you the rest of the day off "
Dev say with a big smile " Thanks Maan" then he get out from the car
Maan then was heading to the meeting when he realize that his phone is missing then he remember that he forgot him on the table when he was on the meeting with Adi and Geet , he order to diver to went back there
when Maan arrive there he went to the Conference Room directly when he open the door he was surprise to see Geet there watching that publicity again , Geet was looking at him with shock and say "Did you forget something Mr Maan ? "
Maan said " My cell, o look its on the table "
Maan go and take it then look at the screen and say " You review this again , i have the admit its my favorite "
Geet smile and said " Me too"
Maan then add " Its like a fairytale or bollywood movie, and people love that crap "
Geet look at him with shock and say " What Crap ? what are talking about ? "
Maan look at her and said " You know, love that last for years, and meeting your soulmate again "
Geet " If you find this crap why did you agree on it ?"
Maan smile and say " Because people believe on romance and on all this , thats why romantic song , movies and series make money "
Geet shocked " And you dont believe on love ? "
Maan " I admit love exist science prove that its a realy feeling caused by our brain on reaction to some peoples genes , and it last 3 years , also its give and take relationship but on your publicilty it last 10 years "
Geet look at him and say " What about people who stay married for very long years "
Maan " They are stuck on the marriage, by the Restrictions of society, kids,Responsibilities, money , maybe for guarantee sex and reputation, come on Miss Geet no one can love someone for 10 years "
Geet "Infact im in love with a boy for 12 years and my feeling for him never change "
Maan " Realy ? let me gess since high school , and i thought that you bring your inspiration from some movie , and you meet him again and marry him like your publicity "
Geet " No, but i love him"
Maan " That stupid , you love a guy who you date on your high school days"
Geet "We didn't date but ..."
Maan say try to controle his laugh " Did the guy even know that you exist ? "
Geet say with anger " We were friends "
Maan "Wow just like kuch kuch hota hai, lets me gess are you waiting for his hot wife to die ? "
Geet " Infact i didn't meet him again for 12 years till lat..."
Geet stop talking since Maan blast laughing till the tears fall from his eyes and say to her " You need a Psychiatrist, its not love what you feel its obsession"
Geet " Its not an obsession its love "
Maan " O realy , you are single right now , no boyfriend or hunband, right?"
Geet " Yes im single so"
Maan laugh and say " I told you are waiting for his hot wife to die , or he meet you in some magical way , you realy need help thats an obsession that stop you from enjoying your life , let me gess you are also a virgin waiting for your first kiss from him "
then he keep laughing
Geet" I was going to get married to another guy that my parents choose for me, but some matter come up and the wedding was off"
Maan " Let me gess, you tell them you need some more time you are not ready for marriage yet "
Geet keep looking at him on anger and think " He didn't change at all, still the same smart ass that he was on high school "

Meanwhile Pinky and Adi were on their car when Pinky say
" I forget , i bring some Barfi for Geet but i didn't give it to her "
Adi " Geet love Barti ,it always cheer her, lets go back and give it to her"
Pinky " Yes, that would make her smile again and feel better"
Adi and Pinky go back to the company , they were shock to find Maan with Geet on the room she was looking at him with anger and he was smiling , then Geet notice Adi and Pinky on the door , she look at Maan take a breath to let go of her anger , then say with a Tardy tone " Its usless to explain love to you, because we only can feel love not define it , goodbye Mr Maan "
Maan look at her and say " Wow good Slogan make sure to use it
on the future "
Geet then shake her head and start walking away to Adi and pinky direction, but she stop when she feel Maan holding her from her elbow she look at him and said " What do you want Mr Maan ? "
they were standing looking at each other eyes then Maan say " Miss Geet , will you marry me ? "



Every girl dream is the marry the man that her heat love , and hearing "Will you marry me ?" from him but not everything that shines is gold


Precap : Chp 16 : the proposal

Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 7 - geet already has some health problem
loved mother-daughter bonding here
geet made friends b'coss of her fighing with nt...she is famous in one day
so now party time
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8 - geet's saviur came to rescue her from nt and she liked him on the first sight
omg geet put maan's face on the model's body...lol...
even maan started liking 'outsider'
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..maan is making fun of love..poor geet..maan seriously propose geet or what..😕😕 or for some other purpose...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...maan toh bahut hi ast nikla...usne geet ko seedha marriage k liye propose kar diya...gr8 maan...dekhte hai geet k answer kya hota hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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