Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
awesome
waiting for geet to patofying maan
lolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
awesome update so they hid the truth from everyone who knew her from school poor geet awesome update thanks for the pm
Maan Lifted Geet in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Awesome

Waiting for maan to meet Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
hey dear..thanks 4 da pm for chap 10 bt read chap 11 n1 2 as well! Fab updates! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
waiting for them to meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's pretty amazing n lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Dat ws awesome...

Lovd d last line of d update...

So 1st gudbye is done...


Conti soon

n thnx fr pm.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chp 13: Falling in love again





Love is a great feeling, and as eny feeling it can just fade, but what if it become stronger and time lead us to fall in all over again with the same person


Flashbacks




Pinky , Adi and Geet were setting on their table , that was Overlooking to the dance floor , the music was lound people were dancing and drinking

Geet " Wow guys , you are realy planning to have a hungover , i think you should stop ,enough "
Pinky said that then keep drinking " You are just jealous since all you have is soda "
Geet " Im not going to carry you to the car so try to keep your walking ability at least "
Adi "Dont worry , im used to this i will carry Pinky if she get drunk "
Pinky " My dear husband will carry me, i love you Adi"
She said that and lean to kiss him , then they start kissing each other Geet then look at them, shake her head and say " Seriously guys ,get a room "
Adi and Pinky break their kiss and start to laugh then , a new song start to play and Pinky said "I love this song, lets go to the dance floor "
Geet was holding her glass and when Pinky and Adi hold her hand and want to pull her to go with them, accidently the drink fall on her dress,
" Great , now my dress is full of soda ,and believe i dont have alot of dresses"
Pinky " Sorry realy sorry ,i will help you clean it"
Adi " Sorry Geet "
Geet smile and said " Its ok , just go and have fun on the dance floor, i will go to the bathroom to clean this and join you "
Adi " OK ,join us fast " he said then hold Pinky by hand taking her to the dance floor," Wait guys were is the bathroom ?"
The only thing Geet could hear is Pinky saying "There " and pointing to some direction,the music was lound and Geet keep looking for that "There" people were to drunk and lost on their world to ask them, even guys start to offer her drink eveytime she ask eny of them, then she finaly find a door opened and start to walk in , suddenly she find herself lost in a weird places of that Pub finaly she find another door when she opened she find herself on the Back on the Pub , that was the Back door of the Pub she get out and find herself on some alley ,she said
" O god i think im lost , its ok i will just go back from that door then go all the way that came from "But we she was about to re enter, she hear some girl scream
" Help , Help " the someone said " Stop screaming no one gonna hear you the street are empty on this hour ",
Geet then walk to the voices direction , she hide bihind a big Container and look , a few men were trying to force a girl to get into a van , the girl was pleading and asking them to let her go
Geet then think " O my god , those guys are trying to kidnap that girl , what im gonna what im gonna do, damn it i forgot my cell insine, if i go back to ask for help it will be probably late for her, they take her on their car , what im gonna do ? what im gonna do ?"
Geet then look down and we she saw her high heels she think "Im gonna go with the FEAR plan f**k Everything And Run,thank god i play hokey every week end "
Geet said that take off her Shoes then start to run on their direction , she threw her first shoe on the guy who was holding the girl and she hit his head then the other one on the guy who on her way , and she also manage to hit him on the head , she hold the girl's hand and start to run with her, everything happen too fast that those gang were shocked then just couldn't understant what just happen , but then after a seconds of shock one of them sceam " Stop standing like a statue and fallow them " then everybody start to run after Geet and that girl
Geet was running with all her strength from alley to alley saying to herself " Please god, no Impasse, please no impasse " and then she saw a street on the end on the alley , she smile and said " We are saved " but then the girl fall Geet stop look at her and said " Miss please ,just a few steps to that street , get up they are comming "
The girl said " Im so tired i did not eat for days, just go and let me, if they catsh you , they will not let you go "
Geet then said " Whats your name ?"
The girl look at her with surprise then Geet add " Hi my name is Geet and you ? "
The girl " My name is Nandini "
Geet " Look Nandini im not going to let you here since we are friends now , so stand up and lets run to that street , i never let my friend behind me"
then Geet help that girl to stand and they both start running but when they were a few steps away from geting out of the allay some hands pull them , the gang's men catch them , one them push Nandini to the ground then ask his men to fixe Geet to the wall , 4 men were holding Geet tigh and she couldn't move that guy look at her from the bottom to the top and said
" You are so beautiful miss , Are you virgin ? , even if you are not men will pay Wealth for you, your hair is so long and you eyes , no fear on your eyes even on this situation you are realy a unique Goods and you run realy fast" he said that with an evil smile them put his fingers on her cheek " Realy soft skin "
Geet then look at him and said " Bilieve me im not that good as Goods, i have a short Expiry date"
He start the laugh and said " You are realy unique , men we realy pay a lot for you "
Geet then start to sceam " Help , Help "
But then he put his hand on her mouth and said
" Chooo"

Meanwhile Maan and his friends were heading to the pub on his large lemo ,then stop on empty street because of the Traffic lights
"Why did we stop the street is emepty lets just across the red light " on of the boys said
Dev laugh and said " We cannot, Maan has already order all his drivers to respect to rules , since he never make mistakes , so lets wait for the green light "
Maan was hearing their talk with a cold face, then one of the boys add "you did not change at all Maan, you still perfect "
Maan just ignore their talk
" You still don't talk so much" another boy said
" Yeh he doesn't talk much but he will be the luckest between us on the Pub tonight , like always all the girls will drool over him " Dev add
everybody was laughing and jocking but Maan was not intersting to there talk, he is like that for years no matter how money he make, how many friends he has, or how many girls and girlfrinds surround him, he feel alone there is something missing on his life he never know what is that thing this feeling start on the night of his mother dead, infact he maybe feel like that since he was a kid the feeling just grew after that night so he think that by revenge from his father , that feeling may be less painfull , but he was wrong nothing was missing , infact someone was missing from his life he just never realize that,Maan then look from the lemo window ingnoring the talk of the boys then his cold face change with shock then anger he saw some men holdding a girl in the alley in a way that look like a kidnap he get out of his car and go to their direction
Dev " Where are you going Maan?" he said that then follow him with the others boys

Geet was still looking to that monster who just put his hand on her mouth, and the only thing that she could think of is " I may not be able to meet Maan again "
Then someone push that man then look at the guys who were holding her, his eyes were full of rage that they let her go from his one look, Geet was shocked it was Maan, Maan then start to beat the man that was talking to her , and Dev and the others start to beat the rest of the gang , Geet was shocked after a while she realize to man that Maan was beating pass out but he steal kick him, then Dev stop him saying " Maan, enough he is unconscious " then Dev saw Nandini on the floor she was shaking he take of his jacket and put it around her saying " Its ok, you are safe now "
Nandini look at Dev and said " Thanks "
Maan look at Geet standing and said " What the hell is happening here ? "
their eyes meet again and Geet's heart skips a beat , then she said " I have no idea "



Sometime destiny play tricks on us ,and with our heart they lead us to fall in love with the same person all over again
Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
U won't believe I was dying to read it further...awesome story...loved it...wanna keep reading it...nt is getting married to maan's dad...crazy...

Adi pinky as usual awesome...pls updt soon...anticipation is killing me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Wow!!

Maaneet gonna meet,dat too unexpectdly...


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