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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
wow double update yeee
n both parts were amazing n awesome
waise this abir scared me😆😆
bt thax god nothing sort of happen i thought😆😆😆😆
bt when he said na we wanted to perpose geet maanu n his gussa heheh lvd it
lv the ans. geet gave to that aunty
n that girl who insulted sam
wow
maahi the g8 baby ne accha lesson sikhaya aww it was too too too good
enjoyed mu self alot
n oops geet shouted at maahi haww n maanu
waiting 4 more
precap- waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Awesome updates
maan hearing the conversations going on in geet;'s house
and mahi happy over there
they all go shopping
and maahika pulling the sales girl hair, dress and earings
all tried to stop mahi but finally
geet looses her temper and scolds mahi
and mahi starts crying and maan takes mahi in his arms
poor geet hope maan does not scold geet
and how will geet pacify maan and mahi
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
thanks for double updates

abir sab ka mood light karane ke chakkar mai khud gayab ho jate agar maan phone pe nahi samane hota... like shiv i also wished kash abir hota painting ki jagah...
😆😆😆

very well said geet
👏... some people always bent on interfering n pointing others 😡personal life ... n we get other girl like that aunty

love u mahi ... that girl deserve that
mahi want every persons hair check if it's come out or not ...
😆.😆😆...SUPERB

maan enjoyed everything by hiding ... nice

ohhh geet dear u shouted on princess now face her angry dada

about SS ... hope shiv got maan's point n purpose sanjh ...

amazing updates
LOVE IT

waiting for next ... what will maan do??? he cant see her princess cry n not angry on geet so much too ...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Double dhamaka
both parts r SuperB dear:)
mindblowing
loved it to d core
eager to read wat will be d reaction of maan ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome update ...👏
Maahi the angel for turns sometimes devil for others ...🤣
ooops now Geet has to face daddy MSK for shouting on princess Maahi ...😡
waiting for next update ...
continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
honestly speaking it is bombastic update
maaneet shiv sanjh n other all are at their best
epecially maahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Congrats on the new thread dear.. as usual loved the updates.

P.S. if possible please PM the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Important note.



I m sorry guys if i hurt anyone


but from few days, actually from the moment i updated last part my life has gone hell... every day something or other thing which is making me feel low about myself... Ok without stretching it i want to share this... Some writer had said directly or indirectly that i have copied her scenes... i tried to make sense but again the topic is coming in front of my eyes.. i want to say one thing...

Babies are innocent soul and don't know the act is right to wrong so many babies have same similarities. usually all baby's behavior are same then why only one thing is pointing out..

here the writer is saying the WIG scene is same, but i can't see similarity except the thing babies pull WIG,, where the scene and situation, act everything is different then why i m being accused as copying stuff.. did u feel i really Need to copy anyone's stuff?? here i made the comparison for u guys. please see it and tell me did i copied the scene??




K3

Geet: baby aisa nahi karte, bad manner' maahika was on her own land, she just shook her head then again pulls a module's hair' maahika looked at it amusedly.. she looked at her hair as the hair comes on her hand then at geet's hair' for her its same, when that wig comes her mumma's hair also should come, she throws the false hair and tried to touch geet's hair' geet's eyes widen in shock, but soon she held maahi's hand' Babyyy aisa nahi karte, mumma will cry if u pull her hair' geet made pouted face.. aweee how can maahi hurt her mumma so she kissed geet's cheek making her smile brightly'

Waqt

Next what mansi has done' nobody even think she pull mrs.sinha hair and unfortunately or fortunately mrs. Sinha is a ganji (without a single hair) and mansi pull her wig which is now in her cute little hand. Whole area is fill with laughter and mansi watching maan and wig in confuse manner like telling him, she doesn't do anything.

"Auu fjf taaa rhh" said mansi and forword wig to maan.

Maan is controlling himself so much not to laugh. Our mansi is so confuse bcoz before also she pull hairs of many people but never their hair come in her hand uff poor soul and forward her hand to geet to take her and geet is also having a big time to control her laugh. She takes mansi in her arm and take wig from her and forward to mrs.sinha. here mrs. Sinha fuming in anger she is so much embarrass even don't have guts to meet eyes anyone she just put her wig on her head and go from there and maneet who is controlling their laughter burst out so loudly whole restaurant have a wave of laughter.

Mansi is watching all of them innocently like telling them main kuch nahi kiya.

Maan take mansi in his arm and kiss her and hug her so tight.

"u know mansi u r a saviour" said maan.

When mansi see everyone is laughing she also laugh.

K3

Geet saw her daughter's mischievous giggle' next second she hear someone's shriek, turning around she saw maahi trying to clutch someone's hair thinking it's a wig like on those statues' Aniee and nt widen their eyes with the horror filled scene, the girl was trying to take out the hair from the small fist maintaining her posture and calmness but maahi was hell bent on make her bend in front of her'

Geet: maahi leave her hair' maahi shook her head in denial like she understood what she said then again pulls her fist closer trying put it in her mouth'

Waqt (previous chap, not the same part)

Maan ' "mansi what is this how u go to that cabinet" ask maan and show his big eyes to mansi.

First time mansi is scared to maan her eyes go teary she is verge on crying, maan close his eyes in regret. Geet come as a saviour, she take mansi in her arm and scold maan which made mansi smile whole hearty.

Geet ' "maan sir how could u, koi chote bacho ko data (scold) hai kya haa".

"Mansi ur papa is really dusht"

"Haa haa haaha" said mansi in support

"kya" said maan glare geet.

K3 (same chap from begining)

Maahi was bored to pull that strap which wasn't coming to her full hand so she left it and started pulling the girl's earring' few girls came to help geet hiding their smile but soon they felt themselves strangling when maahi would pull their hair harshly like she doesn't like anyone coming between her and her prey' she would make different sound and give angry glare'. Geet felt helpless and atlast she shouted on maahi making the place go numb'

Geet: MAAHIKA Leave her right NOW'. Chodho Usse.. Kitni badmash hogayi ho tum maahi,, I will call dada and tell him what u did' and that's it maahi burst in to tears shouting on top of her lungs.. geet cursed herself for it but now she couldn't even hold maahi as she started throwing her hands and legs in air crying bitterly,, everyone got worried and few ran out fearing about their ear drums'. Geet tried to hold her but next min she was in the protective arms and Geet met with the most furious eyes right now'. Maan had securely wrapped his arms around maahi who hide her face in his neck crying her heart out'.



Please comment sincerely cause i can't stay with this accusation and burden and if u feel i m taking any other's scene then i better stop my fictions rather copying stuff which i really doesn't need any way..
Edited by tichPM - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
hi dear...I dnt think its da same! Pls dnt stress urself! thanks! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
i do not see similarity
apart from both babies being naughty

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