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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u for all the likes and comments on part 2...



me ready with part 3...but will post it tomorrow morning...


is any one waiting???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please go to the poll mentioned below...


PART 3:


raj came back from work in the evening. Savitri served tea and thought to talk now about geet's family.

raj: What happened savitri? Why are you so thoughtful?

Savitri: raj mall security called me.

raj: What did they say?

savitri: They said that geet's parents had an accident.

raj: Oh god. She is now only a small girl and all this.

savitri: Yes. I was thinking one thing.

raj: Yes Say.

savitri: Today maan scolded her and she cried a lot.

So if she stays here then maan will always get angry.

raj: I understand your pov. 5 years he was alone. He will not like to share our love with anyone. So what did you think?

savitri: why don't we give geet to any orphanage? there she will be safe from maan's anger.

raj: you are saying this. Are you sure?

savitri: yes i am sure. I don't want maan to hurt the small girl.

Outside maan was hearing this. He didn't understand what is orphanage, but he understood that bubbly is going to go. At once he ran to his mother's room where geet was sleeping.

maan: Bubbly i am sorry. Please don't leave me and go. Please i am really sorry. I will never shout on you. Please don't go anywhere(he was crying).

Savitri came in the room and saw maan crying.

savitri: What happened maan?

maan: maa please don't take bubbly and go.

savitri: maan, you only said her to go. Then why now?

maan: i am sorry maa. But please don't take bubbly and go.

raj: maan, bubbly will be with you. But promise me, she will never cry.

maan: I promise dad. Bubbly will never cry.

savitri: Ok. Now stop this. I will make dinner, when she gets up tell me. I will feed you and her.

maan: Ok maa and thank you.

savitri: hmm. Now go and do your colouring. Then geet will wake.

maan: Ok maa.

No one knew that the promise made by maan will be a life time promise. For this promise maan will go to any extent.

To be continued...

Precap:- bubbly and gullu going to school.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey just caught up wid ur ff n realy liked it lot..maan parents are realy so nice ..maan doesnt wanna leave his bubbly n also promised 2 her mother 2 nvr make her cry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very short but awesome part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was short but sweet
akhir maan ne apni bubbly kko jaane se rukh hi liya
i didnn't get raj's line maan unse 5 years dur tha means?????😕😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear, loved it a lot. Awww maan became sad and is crying when he came to know bubbly is going away... finally she is staying with him.. sigh!!! wow both are going to school.. continue soon dear, thank you for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow maan stop geet (bubbly) and promice to his mom continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia

it was short but sweet

akhir maan ne apni bubbly kko jaane se rukh hi liya
i didnn't get raj's line maan unse 5 years dur tha means?????😕😕


hey dear its not being far...it means alone...

in the sense he never shared their love with anyone...in the sense that he has no siblings...

hope i am clear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kingofme


hey dear its not being far...it means alone...

in the sense he never shared their love with anyone...in the sense that he has no siblings...

hope i am clear...


ok thanx for clearing it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN COULD NOT BEAR THE THOUGHT OF HIS BUBBLY GOING AWAY
SO HE PROMISED HIS MOM THAT HE WILL ENSURE THAT SHE NEVER CRIES

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