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Posted: 12 years ago
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sameera and maan?????😲
ab kya???
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PART 6 That was the last time i have seen i.e.before going to darjeeling.I went there for B.A in mathematics and maan went to Mumbai choosing B.Arch.Due to change of states n university our vaccation time was different.In 1st year when i went home ,while talking to Mom i realised the truth which filled my heart with guilt.The fact was that one day when i returned from Biology tution in class 12th all this happened. MOM-How was ur class beta? GEET-Fine ,why mom? MOM-No nothing beta actually ur aunt was saying that Maan got less marks in bio? GEET-Why?he is very good in class,he also response well in class.Today also he gave answer to mam's question which no one was able to reply? MOM-He attended bio class?I have not seen him returning with u?May be he will come by next bus. GEET-yes mom he was standing with a girl n discussing something.I think he will return by next bus.That day by a slip of tongue i told this things to mom.But as a good freind of aunt she told everything to aunt so that they can rescue maan from that relation due to which his marks were reducing.Then how all that things happened i also don't know.This guilt is now also killing me that due to me lovers got seperated.In between i have talked to him once,but my mobile with his number was lost.with that we never talked. And what should i say the college life changed my world.I was the most fun loving girl of college.now also i am a fun loving girl,who lives fully enjoy everything.After all this year now this proposal is coming on my way.what should i do now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey when u update please put the notice..
many people do not know that u have updated..

nice update BTW. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I AM THINKING N TRYING TO UPDATE TODAY.THIS IS TAKING MORE TIME THAN WHAT I HAVE IMAGINED
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PART 7
Tan-Tan-Tan-Tan
my break is over,i have next class.I was taking my class during it some loud sound disturbed the whole class.may be the sound is of the machine which mix the cement.I thought it will stop after a while,so waited there ,uff finaly it stoped.I started taking class again as i completed my first sentence.the annoying sound started again. My students were smiling by watchhng my condition.i said"okay class wait for me here silently,i will talk to the officers to stop the work for a while".I started walking towards the area of new building of our school which is under construction.The workers working there give breif glance to me n continued working.I asked one of the worker who standing near the noisy machine"excuse me,kya aap 20 min ke liye iss machine ko band nahi kar sakte,class mein bohut disturbance ho rahi hai(can u stop this machine for 20 min,class is getting disturbed)
.The worker replied"madam ji,aapko bade sahab se baat karna hoga"(madam u have to talk with our boss).The man pointed towards a man standing at a distance who was in a call.I went near to him,he was talking to someone,it seems to be his boss."no sir,there is no problem sir, everything is running smoothly,okay sir will talk to u later,bye sir".He turned,he was wearing big specs,n started laughing he-he-he-he(i have never heard this kind of lauf anywhere).He said "can i help u any means i m Aditya gupta,manager of Khurana construction"
Geet-class is getting disturbed due to loud noice.Can u stop d machine for 20 min,meanwhile school hours will be over"
Aditya-Mam i can understand ur problem mam,but if stop our work then it will be difficult to finish our work on time,but our...
His phone started ringing"excuse me"
Aditya-hello,yes sir,okay sir,i will talk to the principal,okay,bye sir.He smilled looking n said
Aditya-okay mam,u can take ur class we will not disturb you.
Then i took class without disturbance.And reached home happily thinking about Aditya gupta how nice he is.
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye ye proposal se pahle ka scene hai ya baad ka????
me confused.. so hamare aadi ki entry ho hi gai..
nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

oye ye proposal se pahle ka scene hai ya baad ka????
me confused.. so hamare aadi ki entry ho hi gai..
nice

proposal ke baad ka hi hai,actualy meine part 7 ke liye kuch aur hi likha tha,but by mistake delete hogaya aur meri update bhi late hogayi saath mein change bhi hogayi.:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fandeep

proposal ke baad ka hi hai,actualy meine part 7 ke liye kuch aur hi likha tha,but by mistake delete hogaya aur meri update bhi late hogayi saath mein change bhi hogayi.:-)


i know dear..
mera bhi epilogue delete ho gaya..😭😭
now writing again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 8

i am now a good freind of Aditya,although i meet him very less,as his boss had changed his duty to night shift so that there is no disturbance in school.According to him his MK had heard our conversation by mistake as he forgot to off the call to MK,when i have gone to him to stop the sound in school ,n MK was connected by bluetooth while driving.so after hearing he called Aditya n asked him to talk to principal of night shift.So when i reach school by morning,it will be the time of Aditya to leave,but in that due time we will exchange our greeting.Now the construction is over n according to Aditya today his MD M.K. Will come to see the constructed building with intereor designer n will plan for the intereor designing.But he will come after 3pm when clases will be over.Today the day was very hectic the exams r over now i have to check the bundle of answer sheets of students.when i was returning to home after the class in middle i remmembered i have not taken the answers sheet which has to be corrected.I returned back no one was present except principal sir who was occupied by some work.then there i collided with something n all paper in my hand fell down.i was tying the bundle of paper before i fell down.I looked towards the person n found a handsome man with choclate brown eyes,wearing a black tight pant,white shirt ,black waistcoat n a tie of red n white strap looking at me with frustration.Two other people is standing beside him one is Aditya with his shocked looking face n a slim girl wearing a office attire with huge amount of make-up staring at me as she had seen some alien.I bent down n started picking my papers one by one,n felt that aditya was moving forward to help me.but before he move forward to help me,i found the handsome looking man started picking it.i could hear a gasp from the girl behind n with that uttering a name "MK".We both picked all the papers n the person whom i guessed Aditya's boss Mk.returned all of it ,i thanked him looking into his mermerising eyes.(those eyes felt so similar to me,i have seen him before also.he is looking familiar).I tried to move forward,but that M.K. Didn't moved a bit,i looked directly into his eye,it showed mischeve in it.he then moved aside ,but before i could leave the place he held my hand(how dare he touched me) n started moving outside taking me near a black mercedes n opened the door n said "get in" .i am totaly amazed by his behaviour,how a person can do like this?.i replied no,i m not going anywhere,who r u to order me?he smirked.i am getting irritated who is he?what he want?.he replied,"i will reply u one by one baby".how dare he call me baby."Who i m?i m M.k MD of khurana construction,n if u will use ur small brain u will remmember me as ur freind,ex-neighbour Maan Khurana".Just a word came out of my mouth MAAN."Yes, i m maan do u remember me GEET".i m totaly shocked."now,u r coming with me,"get in".i moved into his car with a shocked look.He chuckled watching me.he asked me "where u want to go restraunt or cafe i m hungry, didn't took my lunch yet."i replied "anywhere".he stopped in nearby restraunt.n parked car.i m totaly blank now ,my mind stopped working.we entered together he was leading and i was in the back.i felt very suffocating peoples there were looking at us as alien entered.Maan stopped in middle n waited for me to come side by side.then we moved along ,i was not liking the way my heart was beating.it is my first time i m going to a place with a man that too lonely.Maan being a gentleman he pulled the chair n waited for me to sit.but i took the opposite chair and sit there.He was embarresed becoz my act n look around to find people watching the whole drama n laughing like anything.he took the seat opposite to mine with a fuming face.and asked "what was that?".i replied meekly "nothing".he replied "do u know u made me a jocker here?what would have happened if u sit here(indicating the place where he is sitting now).i replied "woh,hmmh..(gulping the saliva)how can i? I am not ur girlfreind"The face which was red due to anger turned into a laughing face."so only a boyfreind can do like this for his girlfreind,hmm..?i replied "no a husband,lover can do it for his partner".he again started laughing like anything.then said "u have not changed a bit, u r the same geet?"then he started talking casualy of everything.i realised by our conversation he don't know anything about the ''PROPOSAL'.'
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice.. but confused.. maan don't know about proposal..
is it going to create problem????

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