MY STORY:maaneet os Epilogue pg.11 ,vote of thanks - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update..does maan really dnt know about the proposal yaar...😕pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice updates...
maan still does not know abt proposal!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Read the from part 1 to part 8 at a go ..
I must say .. I loved it
waiting to see the maaneet further encounters
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
nice start dear :)

Like the way it started with diff shades of maaneet like Geet being teacher and then her past school days.. its nice and fresh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
like the story. add mee plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Read all parts
Loved it
Maan doesnt know anything about their proposal or is he just acting
Geet could not recognise him but he recognised her ...
I think the proposal is from him only
Cont soon
& pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pl mention part no and date...it will easy for us to track running part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 9

We were sitting in the restraunt ,as if all peoples there was less,he also started to stare at me.i was trying to bring him back to sense."maan!maan!maaa...an!!!"he came out of his dreamland"did u asked something"he was looking adorable,i started laughing looking at him,he smiled."maan,i have to leave now mom n dad will be tensed".maan again smiled,i asked "what".His next set of words amazed me "u have changed a lot,u now look beautiful and sexy,but ur heart remains the same as it was,most beautiful".i started blushing,then not wanting to make fool of myself,i stopped blushing.and said 'maan,pls realy i m getting late,i have to leave',i stood up,he said"okay then let me drop u" he started walking n took my hand into his hand started walking again taking me along. We sat in his mercedes,n i asked him to drop me in my school again as my scooty was there.he droped me n waited till i left the place.After 2 days,thats on a sunday there was a call frm a unknown no.,i took the call it was his call.

Maan-hi,geet

geet-hi,maan.

maan-r u busy now?

Geet-not that busy,we can talk.

Maan-woh ,meine aise hi call kiya tha(i hv called u without any reason),i like talking with u.


We talked about a hour.now this is becoming a habit,i have tried to control my urge to talk with him,but that was not possible.We use to call each other in our break time,in between his meetings,whenever we were free.but this routine was started as call in alternate day but now it was '1 call per day' .In between mom use to ask me about the proposal and the answer use to remain same,"i have not thought about it yet".I have never mentioned about the proposal to Maan n also the fact that i have recognised him in the school first day only,he was disappointed thinking that i hv not recognised him ,n i use to enjoy his cute face whenever he use to say that.and the thing we use to discuss about was only freindly matter nothing more.After about a month maan got a deal finalised with a company in london.so he have go there for a week.he have already told me about this ,the day it was finalized.but from that day it use to give a slight pain whenever i thought about it.he is finaly leaving tonight at 10pm.

Precap-story after 1 week.

*faster the comments n like i recieve,fastest will be next update*
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
so Maan recognised Geet instantly...
and he was staring and smiling at her...
that means therez a chance of him knowing about the proposal...and therez even a chance of him loving her 😊
loved the update..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update..looking foward for next update,,,pls cont soon..

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