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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the next update eagerly
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PART 11
Maan's story
i reached home in evening and found everyone busy.mom,dad ,vicky and even dadi.we had dinner i found something weird as if everyone is hiding something n communicating through eyes n asking dad to express it to me.After watching whole drama i said"dad, do u want to say something".dad looked at me,and made the most serious face of yash khurana,the strict father cum teacher.i gulped my saliva,looking at dad's face,it indicated arrival of a deadly storm towards me.how much big buisnessman be i am,but infront of this tiger i am a scared cat,n i think it will remain like this forever.Dad said,"maan,finally we have selected a girl for u..."before i could say anything dad said,"n we want u to meet her tommarow.i don't want to hear anything,u just go meet n talk to her,n tell us what is ur decision .we r not giving u any choice n we know u will never be able to reject.but afterall life is urs n final decision will be urs".and dad left the dinning table.one by one everyone left.i was not able imagine,whats happening with my life,just few hours ago i was the most happiest person in the world.i know dad had said that it will be my choice finally,but i have already hurt them ,four years ago for sameera.at that time i had almost married her,if at the correct time the mms of her n her boyfreinds photo i have not recieved then she would have been my wife now.thanx to detective agency dad have asked to give information about sameera n thanx to vicky who had send mms to me at correct time.just the thought of my past made me drift towards the sadness ,who was my only companion for one year along with the alcohol. I want to reduce the pain inside my heart which was killing me so i reached my personal gym n started doing tai chi.It took about one year to my dear family take me out of remorse,but the old maan never returned ,who use to smile n enjoy every small moments of life.with that sameera,due to her i had to distance my self from all my freinds n also lost the contact.After about 4 yrs happiness had knocked my door in form of geet.But i know now i will have to supress my love in my heart only.Dad have given me the option ,i can also reject the girl whom i am going to meet tomarrow.but after 4 yrs ,dad had ordered me like the old times and i know by the look they had given to me in dinning that they all want this girl as my wife.if i say yes to this girl my whole family will be happy n their happiness is my happiness.so i m going to forget my true love,my geet.i love u geet.
All the happiness of Maan's life ended suddenly.he didn't slept for a min also.many time took his mobile n called geet but ended the call before the bell ring.he was not able to forget her.Maan ke ruh-ruh mein basgayi geet.
Maan next day went to KC ,all the emotional turmoil expressed on his staffs.whole office was terrified to see the rude and arrogant maan singh khurana back.he was not able to concentrate on anything.only one thing is there on his geet.today a new n unknown girl take the place of geet.if it had been otherway it would be their first official date.now its 7pm at night ,maan has not left the office,but he was dragging himself to the 5 star hotel where he was informed to go.he was now sitting in the private table booked by yash khurana.
On the other side,geet is sitting in front of mirror and her freinds r doing her makeup n she had made to wear an expensive anarkali chudidar of baby pink color.she is not getting the fact that why they r doing this much make up ,she is only going to meet him.and geet is very nervous what will be his reaction,after knowing the whole truth.
Geet's story
finaly i reached,why they have to book this suffosticated 5 star hotels,if it was any dhaba or restraunt it would be better.i entered n was amazed by the decoration of the hotel.i went to reception n asked about maan khurana,the lady guided me to the private table at the corner.maan was sitting there n watching something seriously in the phone without blinking eyes.his eyes were puffed n there was dark circles.i think he have not slept whole night.as i neared towards him,he looked towards me surprised or shock i am not getting the emotions his face expressed.he stood up n came towards me .what is that?is maan crying.
Maan's story
i was watching geet's pic sitting in the table booked by dad.i heard a footstep nearby i looked towards n found the most beautifull sight of my lifetime.geet was standing there infront of me n playing with her duppata .she is looking different just like an angel descend from the heaven.i am doubting myself is this a dream of mine.i was not in my control ,i stood up n moved towards her.my eyes filled up,i realised i am crying.i have thought i have lost her forever.but she is here standing infront of me very close to me.i cannot control anymore i hugged her tightly closing my eyes,as if i loosened my hug then she will go far away from me n never comeback.
PRECAP:I LOVE U MAAN
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
very nice story
update next part
waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sameera cheated maan😡.maaneet finally fall in love with each other..wow lovely..cant wait for confession😳😳pls update soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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At last they fixed meeting of geet & maan, but did not know the girl he was meeting is geet, on the other hand geet knows everything
He is happy to see her in fornt of him...hope he could understnad the girl is geet
waiting for precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome one...still he didn't get geet is d same girl he came for...kitna suspense create kia maan ki family ne naam tak nhi bataya...poor maan bina reason ke soya tak nhi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww Maan was in soo much pain...
the way he suffered bcauz of Sameera
and then the thought of loosing Geet 😭
but i seriously loved the last part...i was happy to just see him getting the love of his life back in his arms 😳
fabulous work 👏
continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan didn't know????
wooo awesome update finally maan got his love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 12

GEET'S STORY
Whats happening here?maan behaving like this is something is weird.it seems he is in pain,what should i do ,hw can i reduce his?should i hug him to sooth him?yes that i can.i replied his bone crushing hug by placing my hand over his back.i can feel his heart beat getting relaxed over me.i can feel his hand moving over my back,its making my body to go numb by his passion.he is moving back a little ,now holding my face with both palm started kissing my face.i can't hold it any more,he is driving me crazy.i started moving my hands from his shoulder towards his hair,grasping the dense silky hair in my hand n forcing his face towards me closing the gap between his m shaped sexy lips n mine.but our passionate movement was disturbed by my buzzing phone.we moved apart n turned back to each other breathing heavily.i took my phone,mom was there on otherside enquiring about if i reached here safely or not.i replied her making my breath calm that i reached here safely.after making her relax n turn off the call.i don't have any courage to turn n face him after the embarasing moment of ours.i heard him asking me,"geet,you n here?",then i realised that he now also don't know anything about proposal.
MAAN'S STORY
I was hugging her,but when i felt her arms in my back.i lost control overmyself started kissing her face like a mad person.i felt her hands in my hair forcing my face to close the distance between our lips.suddenly her phone buzzed making us realise what we were going to do.we moved making distance between us n turned in opposite direction breathing heavily.from her talk i realised she is talking to her mom.i am wondering why she is here?the way she came dressing n talk with her mom,only give me the clue that she came here for meeting someone,but this late with her parents permission.is she dating someone?but this thought of her dating some one is making my heart to bleed.but its good na that she had found her someone special?i took a deep breath n thought of asking her why she is here?but her reply confused me more.she said,"maan,the proposal is of ours".what she is saying,yes sometime she use to say something like this which will not give any meaning.but did she have to speak like this now only, for making me more crazy.i turned to her side facing her,i asked"what?"she is looking in the floor deeply as if trying to learn the pattern of tiles n playing with her dupatta.she said, "uff babaji,how will i make him understand?".i moved closer to her to hear what she is blabbering.i loosed all patience and asked directly with my stern voice,"are u here in date?"she nodded in yes.my heart pierced into pieces.tears formed in my eyes giving burning sensation.then i asked her the heart breaking question of mine."where is ur date then"
GEET'S STORY
Why is he asking me this weird kind of questions to me.how will i explain him all the thing.how will i explain he is my date.i kept silence ignoring his question.then he again asked me the same question with chocking voice.i looked towards him n the seen made my heart cry.he was standing before me with eyes red,with tears forming.n his nose turning light pink.i can't take it any more.i blamed our parents in my heart to make the situation like this.i moved suddenly to his side n hugged him tightly n said,"maan be quiet for a while n listen to me,n pls don't interupt me in middle.i will be not able to continue then".he just said"hmm".after taking a deep breath i said,"I LOVE U MAAN".I felt his body becoming stiff in my hold.i continued"when this feeling started i don't know,may be it started from school time ,when u were in relationship with sameera.but i never realised it then,but when i moved in hostel i started missing u,then i concluded its only teenage crush.but i came know about that ur parents came to know about sameera n u,not by that teacher who caught ur greeting.but it was me ,due to slip of toungue i had said to mom that u were standing with a girl beside tutorial.and mom had told to aunt.I am realy sorry maan,i never want to break ur heart.but i have done that uncounciously".he hugged me back,"its okay geet u have not done that intentionaly.and thank u,bcoz of u dad came to know about her,n he rescued me from her clutch".by now i was sobbing badly,he tried relaxing me by rubbing my back.and he uttere those words,which gave my whole life."And geet,i love u too,i love u geet,i realised it after our one week seperation. But its now too late geet."i understood what he is going to say further,n he was loosening his grip over me.but i held him more tightly and said"maan,its not too late.everything is handled by babaji,n he will never do anything wrong with his children.thats why he made me as the girl ,for meeting whom u r here".he was silent for a moment ,then when he realised he moved me apart to look at my face.i was blushing profusely.he said"geet r u serious" and i said"damn serious"looking directly into his deep eyes.
PRECAP-MARRIAGE
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE-
NEXT PART WILL BE EPILOGUE OF THIS OS "MY STORY".
Will try to give it soon

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