MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
superb👏
👏superb
superb
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love maan shoed his all gifts which he brought since their first meeting ... wow

maan express his all love to geet... so nice
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Emotional update

Maan showing Geet all the gifts which he had brought for her but doesn't hv the courage to give

Maan wanted to fulfill all the small small wishes of Geet n their angel who used to celebrate their anniversary n birthday hiding from him

Geet was shocked to know tht Maan had seen them celebrating their anniversary
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
👏👏👏 👍🏼👍🏼
😳😳😳 hayeee what an update so touchy touchy blushy blushy... t
Both maaneet express their feelings lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Mind blowing update dear...👏 👏 👏

Love the OS sooo muchhh...🤗 🤗 🤗

Waiting for next part dear...

Post it soon plzzz z z z z...❤️ ❤️ ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
It's fantastic update ... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
I can't begin to xplain how much i loved and cherished this story tich!!u'll not believe bt through out the whole time whilst i was reading all the three parts i had tears in my eyes!this was soo much amazingly beautiful and emotional!u explained each and every thing soo passionately as to why maan made himself reserve and what made him repulsive of showing his love towards geet.it felt soo much true with the flow of the story.after a loong time i got an unexpected holiday which made me to look after this splendid os of u,though u've pmed earlier yet i was unable to read it till now and i'm soo much sorry for it dear,bt god i was going to miss a heavenly beautiful thing.u know tht i am a regular fan and a regular reader of all ur stories and never fail to miss even an update or press the like for the stories,maybe i sometimes fail to comment thoroughly bt it's mandatory for me to check all ur stories whenever they are updated!bt with respect to all the stories of ur's i think this is ur best creation till date,it was written with soo much love and affection and had the warmth ness in it and it had a grt msg for it's readers as to never resist urself from expressing ur love towards ur loved one as to u don't know when time will grasp away from ur life to cherish the beautiful moments which life blesses upon us and truely we have only one life to feel and have all this!!
thank u soo very much dear for writing such a touchy story which truely touched the core of my heart.next after getting biwi's love back waiting for the family to reunite in true sense.
love u dear for writing soo heavenly:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
that was a amazing part
loved it
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
emotional and cute part
geet is realy on cloud nine
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
emotional update
maan showing gift which he brought her
u expressed everything awesomely
just love it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nostalgic_soul

I can't begin to xplain how much i loved and cherished this story tich!!u'll not believe bt through out the whole time whilst i was reading all the three parts i had tears in my eyes!this was soo much amazingly beautiful and emotional!u explained each and every thing soo passionately as to why maan made himself reserve and what made him repulsive of showing his love towards geet.it felt soo much true with the flow of the story.after a loong time i got an unexpected holiday which made me to look after this splendid os of u,though u've pmed earlier yet i was unable to read it till now and i'm soo much sorry for it dear,bt god i was going to miss a heavenly beautiful thing.u know tht i am a regular fan and a regular reader of all ur stories and never fail to miss even an update or press the like for the stories,maybe i sometimes fail to comment thoroughly bt it's mandatory for me to check all ur stories whenever they are updated!bt with respect to all the stories of ur's i think this is ur best creation till date,it was written with soo much love and affection and had the warmth ness in it and it had a grt msg for it's readers as to never resist urself from expressing ur love towards ur loved one as to u don't know when time will grasp away from ur life to cherish the beautiful moments which life blesses upon us and truely we have only one life to feel and have all this!!
thank u soo very much dear for writing such a touchy story which truely touched the core of my heart.next after getting biwi's love back waiting for the family to reunite in true sense.
love u dear for writing soo heavenly:-)



u made my day dear, this story is indeed very close to my heart and i cried writing every part of this story... yes i was dissapointed to see so less reader because trully this is one of my hardest work and i love it...

thank u sooo much for giving this precious words, i trully respect it... and my love towards this os has gone double fold thank u for it dear

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