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@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

hey sweety i can never hate any comment of my reader
and i know u r also very good with pen
ur poems are really good... 😃

thaxxx dear

hey check my poem

it on page 15

me waiting for your repy

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wow lovely emotional update dear.. te way my maan pouring his heart to his geet and showing his precious things wat he brought for his geet and te way geet like a small kid who got gift and placing and sitting in middle of it, wow lovely emotional scenes.. te way my maaneet having dinner and my maan asking cake was so emotional scenes... te way geet still hesitating and my maan sensing it and make her to melt in his love was so lovely ..i love te update so much dear

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

😳😳beautiful update😳😳

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

That was so awesome
I love it .was waiting for it for so long
Love their romance
That scene was so awesome when maan show her all the gifts
geet still a little scared to go near hm

waiting for next and want to see their kids reaction

on seeing their romance loll😆😳😉

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

part 3
awesome part...
so beautiful...
cont soon dear...

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Such a emotional part.. Maan has confessed his feelings for Geet.. Lovely update...

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tich.1990mg

@tich.1990mg

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
FEW LINES

ZINDA RAHNE K LIYE
KISSNE KAHA
ZARURI HAI JEENA YAHA
TERE EK PAAS HONE SE
MRE SAATH HONE SE
MERE LIYE TO KUCH AUR NA PAANA BAKI RAHA
TU YH MAANE KE
TU MERE LIYE KUCH BHI NAHI
ISS PAHLE MEIN DEDU HAS KE YEH ZINDAGI
KYOKI

tu har khushi se karwati hai ,
meri pahchan
tu woh muskaan hai meri !

tu ruh ban ke mujme base ,
tu woh jaan hai meri !

tujhe bhulne se pahle ,
mine uss rub ko kya khud ko bhi bhul jaayu
par jis ek pal
ek ahsaa
ko na bhul paao ,
tu woh ek yaad hai meri !

tujhko bhul kar
haan tujhko bhul kar ,
na jee paauga ek pal bhi
tu woh ek saans hai meri

sorry for spelling mistake

u know ur every word is so powerful
i just felt the scent of this poem
its beautiful dear
u have portrayed my maaneet's feeling here
thanks for this lovely poem...
i will add it in next part

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Beautiful... emotional update..

awww maan had treasured all the memories and got small n sweet gifts for geet...

luved the romantic maneet..

gud to c them move together in the clouds...

waiting for the next one..

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

wow wow wow awesome amazing n overwhelming update

T- Temerity,Terrific

I-Incredible,intelligent,

C-Cinderella,Catalyst,

H- Humble,Honest

Your new qualities defined by me

maan had made all her dreams come true

maan showed her the gift which made her cry

maan then asked geet will she walk in the cloud once again n forgive him

i dont have word how i felt while reading you are one of my favorite writer

i want to dedicate a poem n honestly speaking with help of my friend i am posting

Maan POV

Zindagi ne pyaar kiya mujhse

Par meine na saath diya uska

Pana chaha usko

Par darta that khole ke dar se

Ehsaas tha uska har pal mere saath

Magar usko ehsaas dilana bas me na tha mere

Dekhta tha uske saath jeene ke sapne

Par darta tha khole ke dar se

Aaj ehsaas hua mujhe uska

Sirf uske pyaar ke wajah se

Ab na dar hai na koi ghabrahat

Ab to zindagi ke saath se pyaar hai mujhe !!!!!

hoping you will like it

do let me know

as i had conveyed the situation as per the update how maan has expressed his insecurities n fear

Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

hi thanks 4 da pm..read n commented already! update soon

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