MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai tich, tis os i read in ur os competition, was so lovely emotional os.. te way kids asking no no craving for they father ki love and geet too , was so painful.. te way kids asking her and geet struggling wat to say, my maan is listen to all tis which piercing his heart was so painful.. te way my maan ki pov was so painful, so for his geet he hide his love.. oh god .. te way geet came to know and hugs my maan was so painful scenes..i love te os so much.. can u give 2 more updates my maan with kids...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Tich, this is the first work I read of urs... n must say it is fab👏
The way u portray emotions is superb... I loved all the dialogs n the talk betwn Geet n her daughter...
On whole the concept was amazing n ur way of writing is even better...
Loved it⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's amazing... Nicely written... But I want Megha should also understood abt her Pap's love for her mother.. So plz plz Ek aur part toh banata hain.. with Happy Maneet family.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just loved it .. maan confession was very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
part 2
awesome dear...
his way of expressing love is different...
but he could have told her...
would like to read how they made it up especially Maan with Geet and the kids...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my maanu lv her so much
bt dont know how to express his care lv in words
lv the way he express his lv in this part
lvd it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL STORY
MAAN KEPT HIS FEELINGS HIDDEN AND THIS TOOK HIM AWAY FROM HIS GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

awesome update tich

plzz plzz continue it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Superb

Fantastic update

Liked a lot dear

Continue soon

Waiting😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting yaar..pls update next part pls...

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