MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional amazing and mind blowing update loved each and every word👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful... fantastic update.. plz gv epil. also. i feel like crying .. Maan - Geet r superb

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Posted: 12 years ago



Maan realized the value of Geet's love and his children's expectations...

but this is very stupid of a person that he think Geet as his mom Pammi...he is so big businessman...he meets thousands of people daily...he should know that no two persons are same...and after all Geet is his wife...he should have understood her nature...

unknowingly he took Pammi's place in Geet's life...just like Pammi left his father, same way he left Geet alone...

anyway now der aayad durust aayad...

awesome OS...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm bt saw u updated n read n commented already! Superb OS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ending..
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fantastic
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very nicely written
liked a lot dear
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NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..




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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply beautiful. Loved every bit of it. Hats off to you for this amazing story. 👏

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