MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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All the pain due to communication gap. Sometimes just loving is not enough, it has to be shown in gestures and words.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful update :) loved it .plz continue it wanna see maan interaction with his children . Will megha forgive him ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for next prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome


Communication is key!!!




PLZ continue



Will like to read how maan interact with his kids now??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please update next also yes description of feelings awsem



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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a touching and lovely part..maaneet love..pls cont next part..will be waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
maan may love her more dan his life but sometime expressing urself needed...he is afraid but atleast he should hav tried...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

plz give some prts to show deir love n happy life...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! Please don't stop it here, do continue =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Fabulous os
Maan emotion excellently written 👏
Loved the last confession part
could be nice if u continue...will love to reader what happen after their confession in their life & even want maan & kids moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomeee update dear...❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Loved it sooo much...Go ahead dear...😊 😊 ❤️

Waiting for next part...


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