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Posted: 10 years ago
hai good to see u back...kahan chale gaye the apne readers ko chod kar...
ab kahin mat jana ...waiting for the update...
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PART 10:


Aap Geet ko Maan ke saath bhejne wale hain?? Shaadi ko abhi saath mahine baaki hai ... Rano was shocked even to ask her husband who was busy looking at the records. She stood infront of him demanding an answer. How could he take such a decision when he knows that the village in which they live and the society doesn't accept it. Mohinder knew his wife's dilemma he sighed ... Putting his spectacles on the table he rose his head and gazed at his wife ... Giving her a smile he stood up ... aapko nahi lagta ab humse jyaada Geet par Maan ka haq hai?? I agree they aren't married yet but they are engaged ... and I am not wrong in feeling that Maan will not let me down ... aap beqaar hi fikar kar rahi hai


She had her own justifications ... for once she could go against every rule of the society but not her heart ... the heart which was telling her not to let go ... not to let her daughter go, the only person she could talk to was her husband.


No ... my heart says something wrong's definitely gonna happen ... I can feel it ... Aap samajhte kyun nahi?? I am scared ... Scared that Geet would drift away from us ... And this fear is not silly .. trust me when my instinct tells me something it doesn't go wrong



Aapko pata hai Geet ne kya kaha jab maine poocha Maan kaisa hai?? Rano's eyes locked into her husband's eyes with the way he was trying to explain ... This was something she didn't know ... this was something only a daughter and father shared. Deep down Rano always had an idea of the depths of the emotional bond the duo shared and loved it ... she never questioned her husband coz she respected him ... Respected for the way he loved his brother's child ... brother's crime.



Geet ne kaha Maan bilkul aapke jaise hain ... what more can I expect from Geet?? Agar aapko lagta hai kuch galat hoga toh Maan par yakeen kariye ... I know he wont let me down ... He wont let my daughter down ... He would remain her pride (Maan)



Geet humse dur nahi hogi na??



Nahi kabhi nahi hogi ... This is my promise ... Aapki tassali ke liye main Geet ke saath Madhu ko bhejonga ... She will stay with Geet, Rano nodded reluctantly ... her fear was not inane. She wished it doesn't turn out to be true.


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Scared?? Geet lifted her head still struggling with her packing ... She nodded looking at her friend, she snorted her nose placing her tendrils behind the ears and then wiping her face.



I'll advice you better call your Maan and talk to him ... trust me you will feel better, She threw the phone over the bed giggling at the face which turned red ... Itni laal mat ho, talk to him ... Bechara ek taraf se hi baat karte karte thak jayega ... You need to show him that you like him too ... I had seen the longing in his eyes yesterday Geet and you silly girl you have no idea how much he was wanting space ... loneliness with you



If it is he could talk to me ... maine kab mana kiya?? Geet threw the pillow on Madhu now anger evident on her face. She wondered how come Madhu noticed it instead of her.



I could relate Maan's face with my boyfriend ... itna toh pata chal hi jaata hai ... I guess now you understood that you are supposed to learn his heart before he talks out ... that's what is relation is about, now Madhu threw the pillow back on Geet's face making her squeal.



Get out of my room right now ... She squint and then scowled ... Ok ok I get it ... I am leaving but talk to him that's the only advice I can give you right now ... Raising her hands up in defeat Madhu walked out seeing the fear set in Geet.


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Standing by the balcony Geet held the phone in her hand ... It was just seven in the evening ... can she call him without fear?? How will he react?? Will he take her to be desperate?? Will he pick up at the first place?? What if he is still in the office and her call would disturb him??



Call kar ullu ... I bet he will take your call in the first ring ... Geet turned frowning and closing the door on Madhu's face, dismissing her rudely. Madhu giggled enjoying with her teasing.



She prayed to her kanhaji and putting her guts together she rang him up ... and like he was waiting for the call he picked it in one go.



Did I disturb you?? She held her breath biting her lower lip in anticipation ... Awaiting his response.



What if I call you and then ask you the same question?? Geet blushed looking down at her hand ... You got your answer?? Mere dil mein bhi wahi baat hai jo tum abhi mere sawal par soch rahi ho, she got embarrassed with his explanation. He was trying to tell that their feelings were mutual and if that wasn't enough he further asked ... By the way what is the answer??



Woh ... Woh ... I was thinking of you the whole day ... thinking if I could call you without hesitance ... tell you my heart



He smiled with the awkwardness that was slipping away from her finally ... after their last encounter and her assurance about the family deep down he got to know that she accepted him as much as he did.



You can call me anytime Geet ... All the time ... You don't need to wait to talk to someone who is all yours ... Oh my she clutched her duppatta falling for his words ... But then when he can get back to her with the same question she could do the same so it was her take back time.



Then why didn't you call me?? She spoke ever so naughty trying hard to remain as stern as she could. Feelings were mutual so she had to ask him out of curiosity



I was busy ... You know I have a welcome party here ... I was looking into preparations.



And the guest is?? She wondered who could it be



Pata chalega ... Special party for someone special ... Geet was completely clueless what he was talking about ... And then she understood that she was still lacking with apprehension. And why was he not telling whom was he going to welcome?? He would tell her if he will want to ... She didn't ask him.



Her thinking and pondering let a stretch of silence ... She was in a confusion that the welcome party might be for her ... or it might be for someone else ... But why would he do it for her?? It could be for someone else ... Didn't know why the thought pricked her thinking of someone else. He deals with people ... he has a business to handle ... probably someone who is related professionally to him. She was truly a ullu as she failed in realizing that a special person can only be her



It took him a while to get her back ... there was a reason for her call, she was not telling him ... Her voice is worrying him. He cant keep nagging her to know what's running in her mind. Something was definitely bothering her ... what was it?? But still he couldn't stop from asking the inevitable,



What's eating you??


And then he heard a sob from her side!!


Precap: NO!! I am not giving!!


I am back ... sorry I was off for two months ... I apologize I was busy with my final year project and then the storm that hit our city ... things had gone topsy turvy ... no electricity for almost ten days and then no water for almost a week ... and no net for a month ... All thanks to hud-hud I mean the name of the cyclone which hit our place and destroyed greenery ... what not!!


I promise ill give u all regular updates from now on!! Ill update sawariya on the readers demand and janwar too as its reaching its end I guess ... Thanks for waiting!!



NOTE:

no more pms from me book mark this thread and check for updates by yourself please!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
terrific news! Will b waiting! Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
welcome back
oh dear you were in the areas that storm came
well that explains it all
whats with geet
why is she crying
arrey yaar what her mother said sure scared me
is something gonna happen as she is thinking
hope its just false alarm
wait she is not his daughter
crime as in illegitimate daughter
pata nahin
madhu is right she has to know maan heart first only then she will know what he wants
geet only you are the special someone dear
who else can it be
this was cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well I read the first line than thought... ye kya hai!!

actually I confused it with other one of urs..
mitwa I think 😆


glad that geets papa trusts maan with his daughter... that mist important thing in a relation like marriage...

so manaeet together!! me getting naughty ideas... 😳
but then I know it doestgo with this story... its a simple one.. n I like it the way it is..


keep up..
good work...😊

PS: u r from vishakhapattam? one of my relative is there too.. I heard too much about the after effects of huh-hud... hope things have settled now there...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks da updating! Welcome back! No need 2 apologise! fab update! Madhu teasing Geet! Madhu gives he advice! Geet calls Maan! they talk! Maan was busy! he was preparing 4 a welcome party 4 someone special! Geet wonders of its 4 her! Geet so confused! update soon! beautifully written
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Posted: 10 years ago
hay welcome back
its awesome like always
this is really sweet love story
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
gr8 to hv u back😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
rano is still apprehensive of her husband's decision to send thr daughter away
geet finally gained d courage to call maan
lol shes really so cute she cudnt understand tht maan is talking bout her
loved thr cute teasing
nd d frndship b/w geet nd her bestie madhu
do cont soon😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
welcome back...awesome update,i really love this story.geet maan ka pass jaa rahi hai wow. or maan welcome party plan kar raha hai.waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...😊...
Edited by svani - 10 years ago

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