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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13



Thank you Onir! I'm so glad you like it! 😊

Yes, she misses them. And it's only natural.
She's walking on a thin line between blissfully ignorant and alarmingly observant. I'm sure she's going to fall and then she'll observe everything going dhak-dhak! 😉
Ah! The speech, the teamwork, the party, it's all seeming like a big challenge for me at the moment! But as soon as I figure it out, you're going to get the next chapter. 😊

PS: I like your username! What does it mean?

Oh yes... you said it all in that line... summed it up totally.😊
Waiting for the next one here...
Thanks... the meaning is "Shining"... but the username is a club of my name & surname in actual...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


Mariam,

Thanks for continuing 😃

Your comment on love brought back some comments which I heard on the radio last valentine's day. The RJ was going about a market place and asking, so who is your valentine. One boy answered sheepishly that he did nt have a girlfriend. The RJ turned and told him ' you do have a family don't you, you do love them don't you, so why can't they be your valentine, isn't after all valentine's day a day for acknowledging the people you love, so why this conditioning of our minds.'

It was a thought that that RJ put in my mind that day. Conditioning of minds.


Beautiful thought... How very true, we sometimes are so wound up with the way the norms around us are that we shape our thinking & views through that same focal vision... we loose out on the true essence of love in it's totality...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir


Oh yes... you said it all in that line... summed it up totally.😊
Waiting for the next one here...
Thanks... the meaning is "Shining"... but the username is a club of my name & surname in actual...😊



I didn't mean to get your hopes up with that line because I seriously haven't planned anything for the story's future yet.. 😛

If I'm not wrong, it's a Bengali name, right? A coincidence that your name and surname clubbed to become another name. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13



I didn't mean to get your hopes up with that line because I seriously haven't planned anything for the story's future yet.. 😛

If I'm not wrong, it's a Bengali name, right? A coincidence that your name and surname clubbed to become another name. 😳

It's okay with what you plan... will anyways wait for it...😊
Yup it's a Bengali name. But I'm not a bengali at all... a Mumbaite totally... yes the synthesis of my name & surname lead to something good...Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maydam ek sawal puche kya,
Is it too early too ask if the party is on?
My 3 inch glittery shoes and me are all ready to get down and boogie woogie.😆
Just waiting for the invite😉
Lookie lookie at mah shoes. All shiny and ready to move.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maryammm hey 😃
I know em darn late to comment but then yew knoiw it right 😉
Probably yew have started thinking about the next chapter 😆
Btw loved the chapter 😃
I've never been away from my family but since she is a girl i can relate her missing the family 😊
Oh so ! Princess has never ever noticed the hunk , ahan 😉
She has to just look around the common room thoroughly to find her secret admirer 😉
O my god Maryam, she Has to notice his eyes n smile 😳
Yew better prepare it for next 😆
Intuition says, chapter 3 is coming soon 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Read both d parts. Must say its
Lovely n its so different the way
U write.

Maan's thoughts Abt Geet. His wish
To be friend wid her atleast talk to
Her.
Liked the way he described her, her
Each feature, her way of carrying
Herself.

Geet writing the diary. Waise she is
Non talkative but can write a lot to
Diary.
I m enchanted by the character of Geet
U have shown so quite n composed.
I really liked this Geet.

So she does knows that someone is
Staring at her but don't have enough
Guts to see.
Also I m surprised that she knows Maan
Atleast his name is enough for starting.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Maydam ek sawal puche kya,

Is it too early too ask if the party is on?
My 3 inch glittery shoes and me are all ready to get down and boogie woogie.😆
Just waiting for the invite😉
Lookie lookie at mah shoes. All shiny and ready to move.😆



Those shoes look awesome!
Pity though I have webbed feet that don't fit into anything chic and sleek. 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Maydam ek sawal puche kya,

</div><div>Is it too early too ask if the party is on?
My 3 inch glittery shoes and me are all ready to get down and boogie woogie.😆
Just waiting for the invite😉
Lookie lookie at mah shoes. All shiny and ready to move.😆


These shoes are just wow!!

Party ke liye abhi thoda time baaqi hai. Pehle toh party ki planning hogi na. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Maryammm hey 😃
I know em darn late to comment but then yew knoiw it right 😉
Probably yew have started thinking about the next chapter 😆
Btw loved the chapter 😃
I've never been away from my family but since she is a girl i can relate her missing the family 😊
Oh so ! Princess has never ever noticed the hunk , ahan 😉
She has to just look around the common room thoroughly to find her secret admirer 😉
O my god Maryam, she Has to notice his eyes n smile 😳
Yew better prepare it for next 😆
Intuition says, chapter 3 is coming soon 😉 😆



I know Naureen. I hope you're fine now. 😊

Even I have never been away from my family for more than a few days but yes, I can relate to her feelings too.

Yep, kabhi nazrein ghuma ke dekhegi toh sab pata chal jayega! 😉

Yeah, I've started thinking about the next chapter but nothing has come out yet, so it's still going to take a little time. 😳

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