If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 11

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Okay. Breakfast ke waqt milte hain phir! 😆

Too sleepy now. Good night Naureen! 😊

I just refreshed the page to say the same 😆
See ya 😃
Gunnight 😳

Done!

I forgot to say this so I'll say it here. The girl, the mystery around her, she reminded me of a sprite. Here today, gone tomorrow. One glimpse of magic, then poof. She glimmered away before my eyes the moment she left the school gates.

I can see a congregation of great writers here,@mayyo,@kaamchorni,@The Brat...,Awesome ppl.

As much as I am short of words to read d excellent piece of @mayyo,jst like that I complete agree wid @kaamchorni's comment.And den d Girls POV written by @The Brat is suppperb.


Gr8 post buddy.

Sampa 🤗 Where have you been? We miss you around the Gehraiyan thread.

Isn't Mariam's writing amazing? It took a lot of people and a lot of arm twisting and threatening to get her to post this but I'm so glad she did!

You reminded me, I also forgot to mention the follow on pieces in the comments. Avi, you write truly beautifully. I loved each and every word.
Ms. Shika Brat-erjee...ainvaayi theek thaak 😈

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Sampa 🤗 Where have you been? We miss you around the Gehraiyan thread.

Isn't Mariam's writing amazing? It took a lot of people and a lot of arm twisting and threatening to get her to post this but I'm so glad she did!

You reminded me, I also forgot to mention the follow on pieces in the comments. Avi, you write truly beautifully. I loved each and every word.
Ms. Shika Brat-erjee...ainvaayi theek thaak 😈

Thank you Zarin. I appreciate the kind words.

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Beautiful Avi 😃
👏
Thanx to Maryam, v got to read yew 😃

Thanks Naureen! 🤗

well...You would've known better if you'd stopped once to observe why wouldn't I turn a page for so long when you're around.
You'd have known better if you've wondered why would I take the longest route to class, which would pass through the ground where you play. You'd have known better only if you've raised your eyes from the book you try to hold in the last moment. Only if you've turned once, you'd have seen me smiling at the book which you're holding upside down."

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Done!

I forgot to say this so I'll say it here. The girl, the mystery around her, she reminded me of a sprite. Here today, gone tomorrow. One glimpse of magic, then poof. She glimmered away before my eyes the moment she left the school gates.

Originally posted by: palindrome

<font color="#ff0000">well...</font>

<font color="#ff0000">That was beautiful mayonnaise...Honestly telling I never like the stories with open ends..you know when "rest" is left for your imagination..but but but..Its first time,when an "open end" did not bother me...There was no hurry or anxiousness to read further..What you wrote was enough to touch my heart..to evoke that "mushy mushy" feeling when your "crush" passes by you in college corridors...!!!</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Thank you so much for letting us read this awesome piece...You not only have given me the pleasure of "reading" but made me aware of one more "writing talent" here..</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Dear Avi{had2bu}..your continuation was awesome..I really want to read further now...Please any of you{mariam or avi or bratty} continue it...pretty please...</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Coming to my bratty...</font>

"I turn another page, and pause a beat when you enter the class. You think I don't observe you when you enter the class. You think I don't notice you when you look at me that way, you think I am oblivious to you, your laugh, your talks, andyouaround me.

You would've known better if you'd stopped once to observe why wouldn't I turn a page for so long when you're around.
You'd have known better if you've wondered why would I take the longest route to class, which would pass through the ground where you play. You'd have known better only if you've raised your eyes from the book you try to hold in the last moment. Only if you've turned once, you'd have seen me smiling at the book which you're holding upside down."

<font size="2" color="#ff0000">You are awesomesttt bratty...I lub you alottt...🤗</font>

<font size="2" color="#ff0000">It felt like you have continued.."just like any other day"...!!!!</font>

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<font size="2" color="#ff0000">PS-Avi,mayyo or bratty or all the readers here{who don't let us know about their writing talent}..please yaro help me to complete LP..like you have helped Mariam...!!!pleaaassshhheee...😳</font>

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I am doing the i'm not worthy bow! Thanks!

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Ms. Shika Brat-erjee...ainvaayi theek thaak 😈

Zarin, did you wear green lens? Why are your eyes Green?😆