If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yaar I read this yesterday and can't believe I forgot to comment in thechaos of pulling Mayyos leg.[/DIV]

Honestly yaar so beautifully written, my heart was pounding as I was reading it. In a few paragraphs you created a whole avenue of possibilities.

A beautiful song just perfect for this is,

Yeh Shyam Masatani, Madhosh Kiye Jaye,

Mujhe Dor Koi Khiche Ter ore Liye Jaye.

I think it suits them both.

Mayyo ab agey tumhari baari

Originally posted by: SnehaMaaneet

Pls continue na

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Thank you sooo much, Palin! 🤗
Like I mentioned in reply to Zarin's comment, I'm really humbled to have such talented writers, like yourself, showering their kind words on me! I'm glad to have shared this one with you all! 😊
Avi and Shika wrote beautifully, didn't they? 😃 Loved both of their pieces!
And about helping you in LP, I don't think I can match up to your amazing way of writing but if you think I can be of service, I'll be more than happy to help. 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uh oh! Mysteries solve karna mere bas ki baat nahin hai! 😆

Originally posted by: TheBrat

someone help me with WOL. It's become like a noose around my neck. Mummy. Someone write their first meet for me. Puhlleezzz

Originally posted by: palindrome

aur mere toh bus,train ya plane kisi ki bhi baat nahi...🤣