os TWISTED LOVE STORY epi P-17 (new ss link pg 20)

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi
nice update
loved it
maan wants to give ride to geet on his bike but couldnt
poor maan
continue soon

thanks..😊😊😊😊

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change12

@change12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

hi dear I logged in to IF to see if u have updates the story... so eagerly wating for next part. R U going to update today.

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Cute,sweet,naughty update.maans family membrs r realy vry cute specialy daddu and dadi and daddus gang.maans feeling fr geet r realy sweet and they way maan deal with sammera,hehe really vry vry naughty.sammera bna maan ki sister.loved it.cnt soon.

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Hayyyee he went mad for her? I am daydreaming. Awesome update Mannu man!😆
It's amazing to see his side of story.
PS: Remove that "Stupid" word from title if you want to be alive😡

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Mishu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome dear...
loved it so so much!!
pm when u update again!!

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: TheBrat
Hayyyee he went mad for her? I am daydreaming. Awesome update Mannu man!😆
It's amazing to see his side of story.
PS: Remove that "Stupid" word from title if you want to be alive😡

as u wish boss.😃😃😃😃

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hiii...awesome os...loved it...interesting concept...cute...loved geet...sweet n bubbly...awww...masn in love...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

what a sweet and cute story...wow...so realistic and imaginable

u have a wonderful and expressive way and i loved your stry telling...

though it is little predicatble and we can guess the story but still it has a pull to the reader to read it...sweet and simple love just oozes out of it...

awesome...

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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Wow it's really very very very interestg 👏
Loved the amazing concept. Thanks for the lovely updates 😳

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ritzy09
what a sweet and cute story...wow...so realistic and imaginable

u have a wonderful and expressive way and i loved your stry telling...

though it is little predicatble and we can guess the story but still it has a pull to the reader to read it...sweet and simple love just oozes out of it...

awesome...

OMG ritzy di, it's u.. i can't believe it that u r commenting on my ff...
when i start writing i thought it will be just a normal predictable little bit idiotic story...
but well so many comments especially comments from writers like u, shika and others are really a surprise for me.
thank u so much for liking my story...