os TWISTED LOVE STORY epi P-17 (new ss link pg 20)

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Nice update.Bt i want to know abt geets reactin.

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: glassdoor
Mannu De (This is your name now even if you don't like it 😆).

That was like the sweetest story. Your sense of humor is so awesome.
I thoroughly enjoyed the (horrific for me) and manofying, teasing session. Such tiny bits of tangy humor you have De. 👏

Train pakadne ki jaldi thi kya? Already over? 😭 .

Ok when you writing next stories???

😲 How did u guess?? yes bhut jaldi hai😆😆😆 actually me going south india AP at my elder sis place on 9th.. so was in little hurry.

or waise read what i've written before writing the story.. i'm super lazy person... can't write big stories.. will try to write an epilogue..😊😊😊

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible
u need to give us a proper end whether its ur first or
last.u have written a good story so dont just drop it and

also u need to give geet point of view abt. marriage how

she felt and how she accepted it.

make maan bit of majnoo also as his propsal was bit abrupt

thats no way to win ur love of life heart.

and in the end u need to give a epilogue.how abt that,is this encoragement enough or u need more,which im more then happy to do.

i know i didn't write geet's rxn on proposal.. will try to give an epilogue..

yes the encouragement i received is more than enough. i never thought i would receive such response. so when i started i didn't pm it to anyone..

thanks for liking...😊😊😊😊

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sanjukta19
Nice update.Bt i want to know abt geets reactin.

will try to give an epilogue.😊😊😊

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516645

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Oye teri. Ye kya end?😭
I hate you for ending such a cute story super soon.
Geet ka kya? Maan was in love and Geet was just attracted. Uska reaction bhi mujhe chahiye. Hmph

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hey abrupt end to such a cute love story... you have to give us geet's reaction after coming to know about his love for her . then... may be... epilogue...

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26_chaitra

@26_chaitra

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

WOW!!!!!

Loved each bit of it :)

itz ended :(

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maaneetkimeet

@maaneetkimeet

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

lovelyyy awesome ss dear ...

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

wooow...its amazing OS...love it...👏👏👏👏👏

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Aww! It was such a sweet story that I didn't want it to end so soon. :(
I want to read Geet's feelings too, what she thought about Maan after her marriage got fixed and all. Epilogue likho please and jaldi! 😊