maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 4

Originally posted by: dona86

3rd poem

amazing poem

but teaser for which ff???

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

me back again
arey poem 2 toh reh gyi na
kya kru my ullu net is ditching me grrr
chodo
second poem
wah super duper hit wali hai
n last lines

ab bahut ho chuka

sabre kho chuka

ab hum hai jaha,hamaare sapno ka aashiyaana hoga waha

lv these lines
yaar aaj mujhe last lines hi kyu pasand aa rhi hai😆😆
chodo
lvd it

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

its my gut feeling dear

as you read almost all my woork

you know they are comedy

emotions ka e bhi nahi hai

tell you one thing

why i stop writinng now

as some of them need to have kiss scene

as per situation

but i can't able to write

so i stop them

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

thaxxx dear

arre did you want to read my other comment

like short ff

Originally posted by: dona86

nishu cut that kiss scene in short..

if u dont feel comfortable then dont elaborate

many writers do that but cont ur writing * making baby faces*

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ok

see this comment

its for SIL

now lets talk about update

part 16

great update

as maan ad geet ko gadi start ho gayi hai

finally time to sing

ruki ruki si thi zindagi

jhat se chal padi

thamo thami si thi zindagi

haan

phir se chal padiii wah yaar this song really suit them😆

as usual office scene are good

arre office scene ,se yaad aaya

i really love nkul

gud old man,keep it up

please in future also

always help our maan ,about geet like

if you knew any

wasie future mai,iski zarurat nahi hogi

woh apne aap sab jaan jaayega waise nakul is good bt heshould knock before entering maanu's room na
opta nhi kab kya dikh jayee😉

sab jaanane se yaad aaya

arre hamare maan babu ki knowledge bhi fail ho gayi

hi hi hihhhii

waise jab woh bola

i use TONE😲

i was like

ye koun sa brand hai😕 omg new brand bt ye b toh soch howmaanu know this nahiii omg mai toh teri knowladge pe fida ho gyi🤣🤣🤣

seems like new in market😊

and than me think😳

what😲😕

maan used them😉

NAHIII YE NAHI HO SAKTA

ok,i knew reaction kuch over ho gaya😉 TIA 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

but in the end

ALL IS WELL

ALL IS WELL
🤣🤣

all is well se yaad aaya

dadi ma

yaar aap old ho gayi hai

so its not good to see inside kids rooms

chalo abhi to sab all is well tha

but you never know

young bacche hai

agar valli ka dil bahake jaata
they can do some hanky panly things na😳

TIA'S ADVICE KNOCK B EFORE ENTERING

phis kya hota

chi chi chi

its to much😳

too much se yaad aaya

maan babu

yaar aap to too much in love ho

ad that to without your knowledge😆

office se jaldi chuti

not bbad

geet ki oil malish

wah wahh

kya baat hai itna pyaar BT ISS MAANU BUDDHU KO SAMJHAYE KAUN

itna pyaar se yaad aaya

aap to bilkul hi geet ko chipak gaye hai

aur nahi to kya

dadima ne aapko bulaya tha

ad you think its family invitiation

aap geet ko leker chale gaye

ok

ek ke saath ek free

free free free

free free free se yaad aaya

kya yaar vaali

we think aaj ke date se sirf maan ko problem hai

so we prey ke

please aaj usse date yaad na aaye

but jab date yaad aayi

you give us one shock free

as this date also has some thing to do with geet to past

that to may be her father death date

poor girl YA ISS POOR GIRL NE MAANU KA OATH TOD DIYA😉

poor girl se yaad aaya

yeh to gayi

market

i knew ye waapis aayegi

lekin tabhi

jab aap aayegi

next update ke saath

so please come back soon

hey yeh comment kafi hai ya

i have to do one more

as per your rule

three comment for three update

WELL DONE
BEST COMMENT😆😆