maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

what do you mean by 1 husband

yaar sab ka 1 hi hota hai

tell me how many you want

hi hi hiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

POEM NO :3

to all

here me again write poem

i was just too much emotional that wannnt to write this lines,but avoid it

but as you again give that teaser

make me think about maan's state of mind

ad see

finally i write this

meri ruh pyaasi thi

bas ek tere pyaar ke ahsaas ke liye

mai yeh zindagi ji raha tha

bas tujh khaas ke liye

mera dil akela tha

chahe aas paas

logo ka mela tha

is dil ne ,bas tujhe chaha tha

aur na koi dusra kabhi

chu sake tujhe

chu to kya,aare na koi

dekh sake tujhe

dekhna to dur

na koi kabhi soch sake tujhe

bas yahi to is dil ne chaha tha

aur is liye

khud ko maine aisa banaya tha

mai har pal tujhe yaad karta tha

tere hooth ki har ek chuan ki raha tak ta tha

soch ta tha

ke ab to tere hootho par mera naam hoga

mujhe pyaar karna hi bas unka kaam hoga

tu haase gi mere liye

tu saaje gi mere liye

kyoki inke siya

kuch aur ho tere hootho par

ye soch bhi

mera dil na gawaara karta tha

par jo sunna maine

tere hootho se kahi unkahi baato se

shikya

gilla

darr

wo har ek ahsaas to mujhe maarne ka kaam karta tha

ye unkahe pagaam

kaafi nahi the kya tere liye

jo ,tune

khud ko khatam karne ki raah par chalne ki soch kar

muju par is duniya mai akela marne ki sajaa thop kar

ja rahi thi

yeh mai kaise hone deta

aapne saamne

aapne aapko khud se kaise khone deta

par ab jab ye teri chahat hai

ki mai ji na saku

to sun

mai chala jaauga

is duniya ko chod kar

har rishte,naate ko thod kar

par tu khud ko kuch na karna

mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMG AM I DREAMING ITS U NISHU
KAFI JALDI YAAD AA GYI IF KI
CHAL CHOD
FIRST LET ME DO SOME PARTY VARTY 🥳
AREY ME FIRST NA😉😆😆😆
NOW COME TO THE POEM
FIRST OF ALLL TELL Y THIS BACCHA WAS SAD SAD
KI HO GYA
BT SAD MOOD MAI POEM BHUT ACCHI LIKH DI👏
HAYEE ME TOH JUST FIDA ON UR POEM
DIL KE ARMAAN IS POEM MAI DAAL DIYE
WAH KYA BAAT HAI
LV EVERY LINE
BT THESE LAST LINES

mai chala jaauga

is duniya ko chod kar

har rishte,naate ko thod kar

par tu khud ko kuch na karna

mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar

LVD IT
MUAAHHH

Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
TIA

kya comment hai😡😡😡

i know your name dear

all poems ke liye commant

that to seprate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
OMG AM I DREAMING ITS U NISHU
KAFI JALDI YAAD AA GYI IF KI
CHAL CHOD
FIRST LET ME DO SOME PARTY VARTY 🥳
AREY ME FIRST NA😆
NOW COME TO THE POEM
FIRST OF ALLL TELL Y THIS BACCHA WAS SAD SAD
KI HO GYA
BT SAD MOOD MAI POEM BHUT ACCHI LIKH DI👏
HAYEE ME TOH JUST FIDA ON UR POEM
DIL KE ARMAAN IS POEM MAI DAAL DIYE
WAH KYA BAAT HAI
LV EVERY LINE
BT THESE LAST LINES
mai chala jaauga
is duniya ko chod kar
har rishte,naate ko thod kar
par tu khud ko kuch na karna
mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar
LVD IT
MUAAHHH

love you tooo dear

me back

ad ready to update

all my ff

if all goes by my plan

you really liked poem this much

😃😃

give view about other two also

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome dear yaar is poem mein meri poori story chupi huyi hai...😉loved it dear...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan
awesome dear yaar is poem mein meri poori story chupi huyi hai...😉loved it dear...🤗

haxxx dear

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

love you tooo dear

me back
ad ready to update
all my ff
if all goes by my plan

you really liked poem this much
😃😃

give view about other two also

OOPS I MISSED FIRST PAGE POEM N DIRECTLY CAME ON SECOND PAGE😆
KK LET ME READ FIRST😉

😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

OOPS I MISSED FIRST PAGE POEM N DIRECTLY CAME ON SECOND PAGE😆
KK LET ME READ FIRST😉

😆

me waiting😡😡

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

AREY WAH
HMARI NISHU TOH POETESS BANTI JA RHI HAI
N WOI N FORTUNATELY YA IN FORTUNATELY ACCHI WALI😆😆😆
THIS KASHAMKASH WALI POEM WOW
KITNE ACCHE GEET GEET SE FEELINGS KI DESCRIBE KIYA

saare sapne dobaara dekhu

aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki

yeh sab jaan kar

teri har baat maan kar

ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki

WAH KYA BAAT HAI
GEET KE DIL KI BAAT
LVD IT