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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

awesome dear loved it..how u explained maan's state of mind...lovely nishu aise hi poems likhte rehna...🤗


fnally aap aagayi yaha par
and
you real write
one good line for me😆😆😆

now me happy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM NO :4


this poem is for
PRETTY LITTLE LIARS

ok dear
lets party begin
and yesss
both maan and geet are present here

yaar couple song type hai
both have to be here
with each other
for each other
as they knew who they are
just they both knew it😉

maan : hey liar
geet : hey liar

yes we both are liar
we both are liar

hey liar
did any one told you,your pants are on fire
and my dear little cuty
did any one told you,your nose is long
just like electric wire

hey liar
we both are liar
rose is red
violets are blue
you suck in bed,that's why
i m dumping you

you liar
yes i know,we both r liar
sky is blue
milk is white
you have to shut up
aur else i m going to slap you tight

you liar
yes i know,we both are liar

:P .. this was awsome yaar.. this was amazing peice of work yet funny as well.. :D .. wen u said in the beginning that it was kinda song, i read it as if it was a duo :) .. brilliant 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


thaxxx dear

which one you like most


which u wrote for dangerous love
just love that one
it explain everything which maan was going through
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem :5



i write this for DANGEROUS LOVE(Sdlife19)

me again here, i m sure mad these days
kya kya likne lagi hu

what to do
you update made me think about maan all night
his love
his way to love
is just out of world
so here me again

dekh meri deewangi
mai kya kya hu kar gaya
har koi jeeta hai pyaar mai
mai tere pyaar mai khushi khushi mar gaya

mai teri ek
kasak se
jhijhak se
na chu tujhe,kisi bhi haq se
yeh dekh kar ,apni hi nazaro mai gir gaya
aur na rahe tujh mai darr
mere paas aane ka
iss teri hi khushi ke liye
jinne ki chahat se mukar gaya
aur marne ki raah par aage bad gaya

par dekh meri deewangi
teri ek kasak
ke na jau mai tujh se dur
tere har ek assu ki nami
ke tum bin jeena to hame bhi nahi hai manjoor
tere pyaar ke ek halke se sparsh ne
ke nahi ja sakte tum mujh se dur
haan tere pyaar ke ek ahsaas ne
mujhe phir se aise paagal kar diya
ki mai jaate jaate
zindagi se dur
maut ko gaale lagaane se mukar gaya

haan dekh meri deewangi
mai tere liye zindagi to kya
maut se bhi lad gaya
par jab yaad aaya,tere har
shikya
gilla
aur mujh par kar sake tu yaki,yeh bharosa dene mai bhi mai vifal raha
to
na sameet saku khudko kabhi
is tarah
sau sau tukdo mai
tut kar mai bikhar gaya

na chuna tha tujhe
na jeena tha mujhe
apni is har ek kasam se bhi
mai teri ek awaaz sun kar mukar gaya
yeh dekh meri deewangi
mai tere pyaar mai kya kya kara gaya

O_O .. i didnt know maaneet made peepx turn into poets :P .. really yaar u're an wasome poet.. hats off 👏👏 ..
i havent read both these FF's but you've given a whole lot idea of the theme..
dont stop writing .. keep on going and pouring out the words.. you wont even know when you'll get to perfection.. even tough these was no less then a jewel.. 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

do send me a PM when you update.. i wont be able to read them soon but i definitely will read them.. i'll be gone for atleast a month, but dont forget to send me PM :) .. may Allah bless you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

:P .. this was awsome yaar.. this was amazing peice of work yet funny as well.. :D .. wen u said in the beginning that it was kinda song, i read it as if it was a duo :) .. brilliant 👏


its my taste dear
i just love to write funny

but
this if writers make me emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

do send me a PM when you update.. i wont be able to read them soon but i definitely will read them.. i'll be gone for atleast a month, but dont forget to send me PM :) .. may Allah bless you :)

did you read all the poem
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Posted: 12 years ago
mai aa gyi
aaj phir dil leke😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee this ff is my one of fav
lv my devil maanu
n his pain
waise he is in more pain than get
poor babay kya kya nhi karta bt geet uff
iska kuj nhi hone wala
ab koi geet ko samjhaye agar maanu angry nhi hoga toh usko koi maanu khega nhi na basd bt ye l;adki
chodo
babaji dono ko hi aklal de
lv ur poem
]like always kya emotions hai isme😃😃

haan tere pyaar ke ek ahsaas ne
mujhe phir se aise paagal kar diya
ki mai jaate jaate
zindagi se dur
maut ko gaale lagaane se mukar gaya
wah lvd kit👏
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

mai aa gyi
aaj phir dil leke😆😆😆


aur mai bathi hu teri raaho mai
flower le ke😆😆😆

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