maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

waitiggg for your comment

on all poem

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow di you write poems so well i loved them all a way too much keep up the work love you🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: dreamyharika
wow di you write poems so well i loved them all a way too much keep up the work love you🤗

saachi mai

thakxxx dear

wow you got time to read my work😆

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Rajshree12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Read all the poems di...
All r just perfect & mesmerising..
The way u hv depicted al the emotions of Maaneet thru them is just magical...
The poem referring to Maaneet' s kashmakash is really nice...

2nd poem in which u depicted Geet's confusion & her pain just touches the heart...

4th poem is very lovely...

But the poems i loved the most are 3rd & 5th...
They r simply amazinggg..
Each word of them tells how crazily Maan loves Geet...how much he is obssessive for her..
He is ready to kill himself just to remove tht fear from her eyes...

Thanx for these lovely poems di...
Keep up the good work...
Love u...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Rajshree12
Read all the poems di...
All r just perfect & mesmerising..saachi
The way u hv depicted al the emotions of Maaneet thru them is just magical... 😳😳
The poem referring to Maaneet' s kashmakash is really nice... 😊

2nd poem in which u depicted Geet's confusion & her pain just touches the heart...its from my heart too dear

4th poem is very lovely... and naughty😉

But the poems i loved the most are 3rd & 5th... yes dear
They r simply amazinggg..me still feel,they are left in between
Each word of them tells how crazily Maan loves Geet...how much he is obssessive for her..
He is ready to kill himself just to remove tht fear from her eyes... these r the emotions,which made me write them

Thanx for these lovely poems di...
Keep up the good work...
Love u...

love you too dear

for your comment

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

saachi mai
thakxxx dear

wow you got time to read my work😆

stories bhi padhna hai uske liye time mile hopefully

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

stories bhi padhna hai uske liye time mile hopefully

okkk tell me which poem you like most

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

all stories r aweome

meri poet

all poem suits the every story line

nd it was great time reading them

as i love to read poems

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: lovesia
all stories r aweome
meri poet
all poem suits the every story line
nd it was great time reading them
as i love to read poems

thaxxx dear

which one you like most