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Thank you friends for your comments. I am happy that most of you liked this version of Kurbaan Hua as well.

Lot of you want me to bajofy band of Sasha…well yes I will but it will be in installments. First one coming up now…

@Hinal – I am sorry hun but couldn't figure where I said she is going to hostel. All I said in comment was story will run in two partrs…office and hostel . I should have probably said office and Meera because she is in hostel.J

@Susegad – Yes, it was self talk. My bad, I forgot to italicisie the self-talk

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Chapter 11 – Main ne Kaha Phoolon se

Next day, Sunday

Geet reached the Hostel to spend her day with the girls there and off course Meera. She had found strength in Maan Sir's words but peace was still far away. After tossing and turning whole night, she found the elusive calmness as she caressed Meera's head and gave her books to help prepare in her 10^th board exam. What could be better than drowning herself in the concern of her sister to finally take her out of her whirlpool of emotions? A simple act of being with her, answering and showering her love on her family, brought the tranquility her heart desired.

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Link -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cGfmSRLuyE

Main ne kaha phoolon se
Hanso to woh khil khila ke hans diye
Aur yeh kaha jivan hai
Bhai mere bhai
Hansne ke liye, hansne ke liye

She still remembered how much effort she had to put to convince Meera to give her exam privately as she was so low in self confidence to believe she could achieve it.

"Bacha…tu apni di ki baat nahi manegi. You don't believe me na…arre I was topper in whole Punjab with 4^th rank statewide. I will teach you na.

…..

Tu itni tension na le. Dekh your delivery is for April mid so you will be able to give your exams with no fear and by the time 11^th class starts; you will be done with your delivery. kitne ache se time fit hua hai.

…..

Arre…hum sab hain na baby ki dekhbal ke liye...it is final that you will do 11^th from school.

….

Dekhna tere itne ache marks aaynege ki tujhe aaram se Khurana School hi nahi balki kisi bhi private school mein admission mil jayega.

(You just see that you will get such good marks that you will get admission in a good school)

….

Acha baba, par 10^th ke exams toh de na. Aaj nahi toh kal toh tujhe independent hona hai na…apne liye na sahi toh baby ke liye…please maan ja na"

(Ok dear, at least give 10^th exams. If not today, later you have to become independent…if not for yourself then for baby…please agree)

In the end she had won the argument and Meera had promised her to give it her best shot.

In addition to Meera's studies, as Hostel offered support to girls in taking any school / vocational courses outside, Geet had started special classes on cooking, dancing and secretarial skills – computers, excel, planning and emails along with dictation and typing within the hostel itself.

After helping Meera with her Math questions, she accompanied her to the class and started the session for that day. While she leaned at someone's work, telling her how to correctly edit a formal email, a girl in her mid twenties barged in

"Is sab se kya hoga. Because of you, Dixit mam is not allowing us to go outside for movies on Sunday. Yeh sab typing and letter writing seekhne se we will not become crorepati"

Everyone in the room was shocked at the girl's rude outburst. Meera got up to answer her back but Geet stopped her.

"You are right Naina. We will probably not become rich by all this. But we can earn enough with these skills to eat food and live a decent and independent life. You are lucky enough to be a graduate and sooner or later will find a job. But most of us here are not even 12^th pass. So for how long can we stay as a burden on this hostel? There are even more needy girls who require use of this facility and how can they do that if we don't become independent?

I will ask Dixit mam to allow whosoever wants to go for a movie. There is no compulsion to join these classes.

Also, they are not only for learning something new but to express ourselves and be happy."

Naina just stomped off but Geet continued determinedly with her class.

Later she encouraged everyone except Meera (as she was pregnant) to stand around her and join her in a dance.

Suraj hasa to

bhikahr bikhar gayi kirane
Suraj hasa re

kiran kiran chunakar dharati ye
Saj ke sunahari ban gayi re

Main ne kaha
Main ne kaha sapano se
Sajo to wo muskurake saj gaye
Aur yeh kaha jivan hai
Bhai mere bhai
Sajane ke liye, sajane ke liye

"Dance"…since she remembered herself, she loved dancing. Her first brush with it happened when at age of six, she had seen a kathak performance organized by an NGO in her school. Her family was very orthodox to allow her to learn it but that did nothing to stop her zeal. She would learn seeing pictures, practicing dance on slow volume of songs played on radio, backyard of her school, room of her friends…no place and no circumstance was small enough to just close her eyes and tap her feet at the beats.

Yeh shaam to
Yoon hanse jaise hanse dulhan
Yeh shaam to

neele neele saanwle amber mein
Rang jo gulaabi lage bharne

Maine kaha
O maine kaha rangon se
Chhalko to wo jag yeh saara rang gaye
Aur yeh kaha jivan hai
Bhai mere bhai
Rangne ke liye, rangne ke liye

She moved ahead twirling with her hands stretched out. Two 10 year old twin girls who had been abandoned by their family in garbage bin came forward holding her hand smiling.

"There is so much to look forward in our lives Babaji….give me strength to bring smile back in this life which is your blessing."

For few moments everybody forgot their pain as they ran around dancing free style. Someone tied a dupatta on Geet's eyes as she walked around trying to catch someone. Meera laughed out aloud and clapped as she held Mrs Dixit as she entered the room to join the fun.

Geet did some basic Kathak steps as girls followed her in a circle. Their postures were far from perfect but twinkle in their eyes reflected the joy they felt.

Small hands as well as grown up ones stretched and moved in tandem with music. Their feet patted on the cold bare floor as hope seeped into their souls.

Geet stopped her tears seeing everyone stopping theirs. They all group hugged each other and ended the dance amidst laughter.

Just before coming back to her flat, she helped Lachi di in making food along with a special portion of chole bhature for Meera. She also gave her the pickle for which she had been craving.

"Chalti hoon choti. Kal call karungi. Ache se padhna aur khush rahna. Teri Di will come next week again…hmmm."

Meera hugged her di, who had given her a new lease of life and the support on which she could cling to.

Monday

Maan had sent a memo out to ensure there was no gossip around Friday's party fiasco. Everyone was scared of his temper and needless to say his every word was a letter of law.

He called Sasha in his cabin just after sending the memo

"Sasha, I hope you have read my memo"

"Yes MK...off course. You don't worry. It was really unfortunate what happened with Geet in the party though if she doesn't know how to manage saree, she shouldn't have worn…."

"Sasha!!!"

Sasha gulped in fear as she saw anger evident in MK's eyes.

"MK, I was just saying"

"Do you think I am stupid? Hmmm….I asked people…my own employees about what happened….and some of them saw you very close to Geet and few even saw that it was your sandal which tore Geet's saree"

"MK!!!"

Maan showed his hand to make her quiet.

"Now Sasha, you being a senior employee, I am ready to think that it was an accident…just an accident. Although since Geet has joined, I have seen you making her life difficult but I have let it be thinking that they are simple pranks and a learning experience for her. But do not for a moment think; I don't know what happens in my office. So do not take my patience for granted.

I hope going forward you will not indulge in any childish activities like putting more sugar or forgetting time of the party. Also, you will be careful as to avoid accidents around you and be more responsible."

Sasha felt Maan's piercing gaze at her almost reading her every face expression. She just responded meekly

"Yes MK"

"And one last thing Sasha. Next time, if something goes wrong, I expect my SENIOR employees to take charge and help the others and not become a mute spectator."

"MK, I was as shocked as everyone else"

"Yes….I somewhere thought that will be your response. You can leave now but remember what I just said. I am very close to losing my patience and hope for yourself, you will not give me another chance like this."

Sasha left quite shaken at MK's anger.

As morning passed, Maan's eyes wandered to her cabin wondering if she will come or not. Though he knew her to be strong and in need of this job but he also realized how difficult it was to swallow a blow to one's dignity especially for a girl like Geet who clearly belonged to a small town and for whom this incident must be such a big deal. As time ticked by, Maan's worry and restlessness increased.

"She gets uncomfortable even if she is standing close to unknown men and this situation must have been so hard for her. I hope she comes in today."

Geet got late as she missed her bus in the morning.

"Gadhi…Khoti…aaj hi bus miss karni thi. Pata nahi sab kya soch rahe honge and upar se ab tak toh pura office full ho gaya hoga…."

(Donkey…stupid…you had to miss your bus today only. God now what everyone must be thinking about me and by now whole office will be full…)

She was scared of everyone's reaction but was pleasantly surprised when everyone including Tasha did not even look at her leave alone utter a word. She asked Pinky about Tasha's behavior who chirpily told her

"Maan sir ke strict orders hein…"

She thanked Babaji and her Maan sir and quickly darted towards his cabin with appointment schedule.

Maan was relieved as he saw her walking in. With a small smile, a sigh of relief left him as he settled back in his chair and waited for her calmly to come and meet him. Finally he could be at peace and subconsciously all the tension which even he was unaware of left him at her mere sight.

Mausam mila
Wo kahin ek din mujh ko
Mausam mila re

Maine kaha ruko khelo
Mere sang tum
Mausam bhala ruka jo wo
Ho gayaa gum

Maine kaha
O maine kaha ,apnon se
Chalo to wo ,saath mere chal diye
Aur yeh kaha jivan hai
Bhai mere bhai
Chalne ke liye, chalne ke liye

Though he didn't say anything about Friday's incident but Geet could see appreciation in his eyes for her tenacity and decision to come to office and face the day. She smiled as she felt a sense of achievement just to see him proud for her and started working sincerely. But not before she thanked him for helping her and also for motivating her.

Maan smiled as he picked the little note she had slipped in under his coffee cup

"Thank you Maan sir for helping me and guiding me"

Maan looked at her cabin and saw her working with full concentration, her jhumkaas dancing in her ears, a small smile adorning her lips and uff those eyes…lined by kohl they were once again ready to wound his heart and then apply the medicine too.

Main ne kaha phoolon se
Hanso to wo khil khila kar hans diye

Precap – Behne De

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awesome update di.

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sorry for the late comment..
cousin and massi at home na...
and this was a very touchy update..
the way geet and meera bonded..i loved it a lot!!!!!

and the dance classes..i was reminded of my venture in std 9th.. me and my friends volunteered for Chryallis whoch was an event organised by Xavier's Institue Of Business management where we interact with differently abled people.. and we danced with them... and even painted some stupid things... i was soo good..and one thing i found in them was they r far far far better than us normal people... naturewise.. and their behaviour...goodness they are more disciplined than us!!! and i had tears in my eyes while leaving them!!

and shasha ki bachi... acha hua... tujhe yahi suit karta hain kamini..😈
and abt maan encouraging geet...i had once written an OS named MENTOR which portrayed the sitatuion after that saree scandal on request... i dunno if u hve read it or not.. but i was very very glad that u included it!!!!

and behne de...my gudness..am already waiting for it

Awesome update

Liked the way how Geet made Meera understand her responsibility n also giving guidance to her

Geet handling Naina outburst wid total calmness

Maan warning Sasha strictly n also warn all the employees not to discuss party fiasco

Geet thanking Maan

Waiting for Behne De

awesome,amazing, beautiful part
loved it
loved geet here more her determination and working hard for those girls
its' really something more beautiful
loved how geet is taking care of those girls and helping them to stand in their feet
naina is rude too rude but loved how geet ans her
maan indirectly boost geet's self power
lovd how maan warned sasha
I so much wished to see this in GEET HSP but they never care to see it
thanks for showing it
maan is restless for geet and wished for her well being and when geet came to work, he felt relief
there is unsaid emotions between them
loved it
continue soon