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Originally posted by: .AmeenaForEva

Loved It !!

thanky so much.😊

Originally posted by: punam2712

MY HEART IS BEATING SO FAST READING THIS

THAT POOR GUY, WONDER WHAT MAAN DID TO HIM

WHAT WILL HE DO TO GEET

awww i can understand your feelings well that you will be knowing in the next updates. what maan did to that man & geet ka kya hoga? thanky for commenting.😊

Originally posted by: lehr

lovely update dear.

continue soon.

thanx dear for loving it. yep will upd. soon.😊

Originally posted by: zariya123

obsessive maan is always my fav but i am afraid that geet forum will end so plzzz move it 2 ff forum

obsessive maan is mine fav. too dear. yep i heard too feeling really sad .

ok will move it but i think all the FF's will be automatically moved to FF section or i have to request the mods to shift it.

thanky for commenting.😊

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

What devilish character Maan is possessing here!!!!


I cant even what Maam cud've done to him.And here Geep is scared that wat will happen to That poor man.

Loved d update.

hii dear thanky for commenting & liking the upd.😊

well maan is the real devil here as i told u before.

just wait n watch what more he does.

Originally posted by: shruthiR

It was a very nice chp. Maan really is very evil. He's so ruthless in this FF. I wonder what the punishment is going to be. I hope he didn't kill that man😲 Looking forward to the next chp. Thanks for the PM. Update soon😊

thanky dear for loving the upd. yep here maan is extreme devil & quite ruthless too. for the punishment look out for the next chapter. ur most welcome. will upd.soon.😊

thanky so much.😊

Originally posted by: Prabh.DDian

awesome

thanx a lot. 😊

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply awesome.loved it-

Thanky frds for loving the upd.😊

Here comes the next chapter of Darr.

chapter-4

The door opens with a slight click making geet clutch the blanket even more closer to her.

enters dadi slowly.

geet relaxes seeing dadima.

dadi-geet beta.

Hearing dadi's voice geet hastily gets up & rushes towards her , dadi embraces her in a warm motherly hug.

geet-dadi ma babaji ka shukar hai aap aa gai mujhe bahut Darr lag rha tha akele.

dadi-beta darne ki koi baat nhi hai ab hum aa gayein hain aap fikar mat kijiye araam se so jayiye.

geet-nhi dadi ma mujhe aj neend nhi aayegi aap toh jaanti hai na ki maan-?

dadi- hum sab jaante hai bete , humne sab apni aankhon se dekha jo bhi hall mein hua aap dono ke beech. aur hum yeh bhi jaante hai ki maan kaha hai?

hearing this geet is shocked to the core.

geet-kya aap jaanti hai toh phir aapne maan ko roka kyu nhi?

dadi- jaise humare kehne se woh ruk jaate.aap toh jaanti hai ki jab aap par koi baat aati hai toh maan bekabu ho jaate hain. aur phir unhe rokna shayad bhagwan ke bas ki bhi baat nhi hai.

geet- dadi ma , maan aise kyu hai? main unhe aaj tak samajh hi nhi paai hoon.

dadi- itne saalo mein hum hi unhe nhi samajh paaye toh hum aapko kya samjhayein.

geet- magar phir bhi dadi aisi kaunsi baat hai woh kya wajah hai ki maan aise hai?

dadi- geet bete hum aapko bas yahi salah denge ki ateet ko ateet rehne dijiye.

geet- par dadi?

dadi- ab humein jana hoga bete agar maan ko bhanak bhi lag gai ki hum yaha aye they toh aap jaanti hai woh kya karenge?

with this dadi kisses geet's forehead.

dadi- ab aap so jayiye aur haan ek baat aur geet bete chahe kuch bhi ho jaye aap maan ko kabhi chodke mat jayiyega. warna sab kuch khatam ho jayega.

saying this dadi leaves.

leaving geet alone with her Darr.

geet- maaf kar dijiye mujhe dadi ma par ab main yaha ek pal bhi nhi ruk paongi phir chahe sab kuch khatam hi kyun na ho jaye.

adi-hello.

geet-adi main geet bol rhi hoon.

adi- mam aap.

geet- maan ne us aadmi ke saath kya kia?

adi- jii woh sir ne kuch mera matlab hai kuch .

geet-kya kia?

adi-jii woh.

geet-maar dala.

but before adi could say anything.

geet cuts the call.

adi-hello hello mam ji nhi maara nhi woh hello hello.

geet-bas bahut ho gya main apni wajah se doosre masoom logo ki zindagi khatre mein nhi daal sakti. mujhe kisi bhi kimat par aaj yaha se nikalna hi hoga.

The owner-aisa mat kijiye sir please main barbaad ho jaunga poori tarah.

he is crying & pleading infront of maan.

but all invain.

maan- apne aapko khush kismat samjho ki tum maan singh khurana ke haathon barbaad ho rhe ho.

The man-please sir.

maan-yeh bhi koi baat hai khush hone ke bajaye tum ro rhe ho.

'ab maine tumhe choice di thi, aur tumne hi toh yeh sazaa choose ki, ab isse mukar nhi sakte ho tum'

The man- sir meri family ka kya hoga?

maan-unka inse kya lena dena.

The man- isse acha hai aap meri jaan le lijiye.

maan-naaa - maan singh khurana wahi leta hai jisse use fayada milta hai, aur tumhari jaan mere kisi kaam ki nhi.

'ab bas bahut ho gya yeh drama , itna bore kia hai na aj tumne mujhe ki , aj tak kisi ne nhi kia'

maan gestures his guards & they give the rod to that man.

maan- dialogues bahut ho gya , ab kuch action ho jaaye.

saying this he winks at him with a devilish smirk.

maan-tumhara time shuru hota hai ab.

precap-insane maan.

please guys tell me how you like it?sorry for a short chapter you know its my first time so please bear with me.😊

scarry ff
maan whts wrong with u even dadi is scared of him .
poor geet