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Posted: 12 years ago
#61


Thanky friends for loving the previous update.😊

Here comes the next chapter-

chapter-3

geet-'hey babaji please us insaan ki raksha krna please meri galti ki sazaa use mat dena, pata nhi maan uske saath kya karenge? kahin uski jaan - nhi nhi -

with this thought geet starts crying badly.

'yeh sab meri wajah se ho rha hai, na mera wajood hota , na yeh sab hota'

on the other side in a dark dim lighted room a man is standing on his bare feet shivering with fear.

Enters maan with his devil persona & stares angrily at the man with blood shot eyes.

suddenly an evil & sly smirk covers his face.

The room lights up & the man stares at him with fear unknown about the reason of why he has been abducted here like this.

maan-adi.

adi-ji sir.

maan-the rod.

adi gives the steel rod to that man.

who looks with confusion at him.

maan-confused?

The man- sir main iska kya karun?

maan-apna sir phod lo.

The man-kya?

maan laughs evily at him.

maan-na this is not done ismein mazaa nhi ayega.

'hmmm phir kya karein, haan ? kaisa rahe agar tum apne kaanch ke tukdo par chalkar mujhse maafi maagne aao'

Hearing this the man shivers in fear , trembling from head to toe.

He runs towards him but the guards grab him tightly.

The man- maaf kar dijiye sir jo bhi galti hui hai mujhse par aisi sazaa may dijiye. dobara galti nhi hogi.

hearing this again maan laughs loudly 'maafi kya hoti hai, main yeh shabd pehli baar sun rha hoon'

'aur dobara tum galti karo is layak main chodunga hi nhi tumhe'

The man- falls down on his knees & pleads crying out loudly.

maan-uff hoo- ab ro mat mujhe na aansoon aur khoon se nafrat hai.

'dono nhi dekh sakta main'

'phir kya karein?'

Hearing this the man feels a bit relieved thinking may be maan has changed his mind.

maan-'ghar jao'

the man looks at him with a relieved expression.

but maan's next set of words shocks him to the core sending shivers down his spine.

At the KM.

geet is unable to sleep feeling restless & worried thinking about what maan might be doing with that man.

geet- hey babaji kitni der ho gai par maan abhi tak nhi aaye.

'she covers herself tightly with the blanket shivering badly due to fear, DARR lag rha hai mujhe bahut darr kya karun main babaji kaise is darr ko door karun khud se, kaise?'

suddenly the door clicks & geet clutches the blanket much more closer to herself with extreme fear.

precap-punishment.

friends what do you think the punishment would be?

please do tell me how you like it?

Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesome update
devil maan n poor man
he doesnt even know his mistake
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
awesome update
devil maan n poor man
short update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
MY HEART IS BEATING SO FAST READING THIS
THAT POOR GUY, WONDER WHAT MAAN DID TO HIM
WHAT WILL HE DO TO GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
obsessive maan is always my fav but i am afraid that geet forum will end so plzzz move it 2 ff forum
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
What devilish character Maan is possessing here!!!!


I cant even what Maam cud've done to him.And here Geep is scared that wat will happen to That poor man.

Loved d update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
It was a very nice chp. Maan really is very evil. He's so ruthless in this FF. I wonder what the punishment is going to be. I hope he didn't kill that man😲 Looking forward to the next chp. Thanks for the PM. Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update

devil maan n poor man
he doesnt even know his mistake
loved it

thanky so much for commenting & loving the upd. yep poor owner confused about his mistake.😆& devil maan is confusing him more.lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
thanx a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

awesome update
devil maan n poor man
short update

thanky for loving it yep sorry will try to give longer upd. from next time.😊

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