Web Of Love [Chapter 14- P 111] - Page 6

Originally posted by: pearl_warrior

There now..I saw a glimpse of DDE...😃

Geet is so lonely...She indeed needs s guardian angel..And we know who it will be..😉😉Unless Shika comes-up with something uncanny...😆

Everything is in a sad mode right now.. :(

Got me now? 😆
Sad mode hmm, you do know what is in store for future. Don't you? 😆
And just foryou, next update wouldn't be sad. There'd be entry of my fav, a jerk.😆

Originally posted by: palindrome

I' I don't know what to wish for" she said lamely. Truth to be told, she gave up on wishing..

This could be said as "epitome of sadness/melancholy/gloominess/despondency"..As a reader,it pained alot...😭How do you think of such heartbreakingly beautiful lines???

she'd started to vent out her feelings in the form of characters that would represent her..

I also want to write a story where a character would represent me completely...But it never happens..All the characters in my story represents "that" which i badly want to be but I am not.😕.Is there a story which represents you "The brat"???Just a query of my stupid mind after reading this line from the update...😃..

Hope i am not wrong in guessing that wounded beast is "maan"...wait wait wait..Girl who was sitting under the tree was geet no..😆..You did not mention the name once in the first portion...Whats special with the date "29th september"..Is it her birthday or we cans say the day she lost her mother...

Rofl. Your query would be answered soon. There would be a Brat in the story too. Actually there would be many brats in here that you won't understand which Brat I am. 😆
29th September. Well, wait and watch.😆
About characters representing the writer of the story, I would say there would be few characteristics of us which would be transferred to our characters unconsciously. If not the character or behavior, at least the ideology would be the same. I can't support a theory through my stories which I don't approve in real life. So I think a writer's character could be judged by the story they write, and the thoughts they promote. Oh did I just give a long lecture? Ignore me😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Melancholic again, but I think it's probably building a strong base for the story!

'Yet, the solace a mother could provide is unmatchable to all the love that was showered on her.' This one line made me very sad and I would say, it was the most painful among all other pains 'they' are suffering! 😔

I think for most writers, writing is a form of an escapade or a way to vent out what they feel. It is indeed a really good way for those who can't express verbally, for good listeners who readily give a shoulder to their loved ones but are never able to get one for themselves...

Has her wish for a guardian angel been fulfilled and she's suffering because of that? Doesn't seem likely. 😕

A wounded beast, they say, is the most dangerous one. He has all the rage and drive filled up within him to strike back. Will this one do so?

Well, I guess I'll have to wait to read more to be able to leave a comment which makes sense! 😆 And don't worry about PMs. Your ardent readers can follow Web Of Love without them! 😉

Ha ha You did make a lot of sense Mariam. Writing indeed is an escapade. Some times people write something they want to experience, sometimes it is just to vent out your frustration. As we had already discussed the other day😆

About Geet's mother, as they say we crave for something we don't have. That is the case with her. So is Laasya about her husband.

If you observe these lines, you would get an answer for your question if she had got her guardian angel yet.

"I've wished for a guardian angel four years ago. Sorry, I was made to wish. Where is my guardian angel? Can you hear me God, where is my guardian angel?"

Your thought about wounded beast is food for thought Mariam. The line I wrote, I wrote it on impulse...that he is a wounded beast. But now I think about it with what you told, that sums up well. In fact your one simple remark threw light on something I haven't thought of before. Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Aasmina

Me wondering will that wounded beast become her guardian angel...l know l'll have to wait to know😊...loved d imageries depticting Geet's state of mindIt was beautiful

That was something made me grin. Bulls eye.😃

All the characters are either upset, sad or angry

Dis is really really vry vry vrrry interestng.


D way geet strtd writng made me remembr my miseries at one point of tym.well i wsnt unlucky like her though bt i am nw in many senses. Well... One alwaz feels to write sumthing or d othr wen in depressd state n it indeed helps.


So nw geet is gonna write her story i gues...
Wat else is thr dat makes her so depressd.



N maan... Y he's so hurt n defeated in life.


N thn maan's grandmom...


Sooo many ques.


Really eager to get answers.


Plz do conti soon.n trust me whoever reads dis ff wil fall in lov wid ur writng fr sure.



Gudluck
God bless u



waitng fr nxt part

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Dis is really really vry vry vrrry interestng.


D way geet strtd writng made me remembr my miseries at one point of tym.well i wsnt unlucky like her though bt i am nw in many senses. Well... One alwaz feels to write sumthing or d othr wen in depressd state n it indeed helps.


So nw geet is gonna write her story i gues...
Wat else is thr dat makes her so depressd.



N maan... Y he's so hurt n defeated in life.


N thn maan's grandmom...


Sooo many ques.


Really eager to get answers.


Plz do conti soon.n trust me whoever reads dis ff wil fall in lov wid ur writng fr sure.



Gudluck
God bless u



waitng fr nxt part

First of all Welcome to the family 🤗
Second of all, Geet may have had a troubled past, but she would fall in a web of love soon. It is the law of nature isn't it? That you get blows but get happiness also, I hope the same will happen with you. That you get happiness and this phase passes soon.
Every one right now was lamenting on something or someone they lost in past. From now, it would be their journey where they'd be gifted with something which they always desired/missed.
A small correction. Laasya Khurana is Maan's mother. Not grandmother. Seems I should update character sketch after all.
PS: Thanks for the review and the sweet comment :)

simply wow shikha . continue soon .

Part 1

Awesome Update 😛