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Hey you're back!! Missed you a lot! 🤗
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RES

SO TWEESHA AND GEET WERE ONCE FRIENDS
BUT WHERE DOES TWEESHA FIT IN THE OVERALL PICTURE
GEET WROTE ABOUT HER PAIN IN A STORY ON A FORUM
WHAT BROUGHT IT ON
ARE ALL THEIR LIVES GOING TO COLLIDE IN DELHI
Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago
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Welcome back, Shika! 🤗

Well.. I feel stupid for not noticing the forum thing now! 😆

Hey, how about we try telepathy to match Tweesha's face in my head and yours? 😆

A few questions answered and a lot new came up..!

It takes a lot of courage to face upto your mistakes. To accept them. To confess them. And it's easier when you do it anonymously, when you don't have to listen to your name being linked with whatever wrongs you have done intentionally or unintentionally! But yes, to ease the guilt of a repentant soul, asking for or wanting punishment is very natural. This is where Geet stands at the moment, wishing to be punished for what crimes she believes she committed..

I can't help but love Tweesha! She's just the kind of girl who'll pretend to be ignorant and rude and a rebel, but on the inside she's caring and concerned and sensitive. So much so that she changed her own plans for an estranged friend! 😳 I wonder where Naina disappeared to? And why did Geet and Tweesha fall this apart? But their situation reminds me of my own good friend turned just acquaintance. A lot of awkwardness comes in between two people when they aren't willing enough to break the barrier.

The brothers share a warm bond, don't they? Though Laasya's conversation with the other doctor showed that Maan has distanced himself, it now seems that he's only severed his ties with his mother. Hmm.. Another question..!

I hope you update the next chapter soon! Happy new year! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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u made me cry shikha..
beautiful part...
home sickness and lonelines...

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Tweesha's impulsiveness may bring joy in Geet's heart & lessen her loneliness too & who knows she may meet her guardian angel also😊

Loved it
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Shika Mehzabeen! Hi five, we're back on the same day! Hope you had a great trip!

Reserving this one for now.

Edit:

Oh, SM! How I've missed your writing! The pain! The misery! The rofl moments in between! (Palin, Adi and The Red Chaddis 😆 That visual ain't goin' nowhere for a while!)

Tweeshaaa 🤗 Let me love you, woman! I feel like she'd hesitate to admit it (because you know, ew, feelings) but she has a heart of gold. Try as she might, she can't stop herself from caring about Geet. Can't wait to see what the girls get up to at the Youth Fest. I'm sensing lots of awkwardness and bonding to come :) Maybe Geet being Tweesha-fied for a night. What would it be for her? A pink streak? Green? I know, I know, but a girl can dream!

Thing that struck me is their lost friendship. I wonder whether they even want it back? And where is Naina? What happened to her? Mystery...

Really enjoyed the boys and their relationship so far. Vicky and his hot chicks 😆 I would normally be miffed at him for calling them 'chicks' but as mentioned before, his douchiness is more endearing than irritating. He is as entertaining as they come and it looks like he's going to help his brother come back from the dead. Big Bro clearly missed Little Bro a lot.

Story has definitely taken off now. I love it when people travel in stories. Looking forward to seeing how they all getting entangled in the web 😉
Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Lovely part and made me remember DDE. And M missing my DDE :-(
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This chapter has intrigued to such extent that i so much wanted to read rest of the chapters right now...What crimes Geet is talking about to confess through her writings...???
Where is Naina???
Change in the equation between Taweesha and Geet pricked me somewhere..specially the line,"when they WERE best friends"..😭
.But I know/hope after Delhi trip,their equation would be balanced..I am badly expecting LHS=RHS here...Pardon me for including Algebra now..My mind is not under my control these days...😕
Staying alone at hostel during Festive breaks is the most horrible thing one could face in his or her life..Being a hosteler myself,I could feel what taweesha would have felt hearing that..a big hug to taweesha for sacrificing her river rafting in Rishikesh for geet..🤗
Coming to boys now...
I am already in love with this vicky..and when he said "Adi the superman"..I literally imagined "our adi" from the show with a red cape and red chaddi{excuse my language😆} over his formal pants..Not to mention the evergreen glasses on his eyes..🤣It was a rofl moment amidst all the gloominess in the chapter..Thank you so much for including it...
Hope Maan would sort this "Gurgaon" problem by his own rather than sending his superman..and there comes a chance of first meeting between our hero and heroine in the national capital...!!!!
A big hug to vicky for already having "two tickets" in his pocket for delhi.🤗
No need to tell how beautifully you write..It would be like stating the obvious...Very glad to see you back with your updates..
waiting much eagerly for next...
PS-The greatest punishment anyone could have was not being punished for her crimes..
This line reminded me of our very own demigod,"Beauty maan😆"..He might have felt same during those thirteen years after the accident...


Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo13

I am a little speechless after reading this chapter. Much because of the letter of course.

Tweesha, the way you've described her, I could actually make a picture of her in my head. I like her, though! Take that, boys! 😆
Oye Hoye I would like to see how much your picture and my picture of Tweesha would match. Oh yes, I gave her a face.😆

Ah. Opening arms Bollywood style and being a cocky jerk, I guessed this was Vicky. 😃
I love cocky jerks you see. Couldn't resist making him one😆

Four years. Four years since Geet has been in the pits of depression. Four years since the 'beast' lost something special. Four years since Vicky was gone. What happened four years ago?!
That is the crux of this story. Rofl. I think I should've named it four years ago, instead of Web of Love😆
Tweesha dear, reading somebody's personal things is a bad habit! But I think after reading the title, I wouldn't have been able to resist too! 😆 It's strange how only today I saw exactly the same username you mentioned. And the picture you described sort of resemble your display picture, doesn't it? 😃
Yes, it does. Though while describing, I haven't thought of my display picture. Only once have I written the part, and only after you mentioned, I saw my picture and I was like eeks! This is similar to what I described😆Oh man I am going to stalk this ShootingStar now.😆 Hope she won't charge a case against me for using her name here😆
Reading the letter, I was literally trying to push back my tears and clear my throat from the emotions clogging! We, the lucky ones to have our parents around us, often take them for granted. We sometimes don't express how much we love them, only to regret it when the time is gone..! How painful it must be for someone to know that the day they were born was the day their mother died. This often leads to guilt, self hatred or just plain grief over losing the most important person of your life. For a seven year old girl to not know how to address her mother, for a girl who has so much to say but the ears she wishes would listen to her have turned deaf, oh how painful it is! 😔

Tweesha said something like 'got more than I could imagine'. What does this mean? It's not like she found out a secret or something.? She must have already known about Geet's mother. 😕
Mariam, come give me a hug. This line, this very line made me write the next part. I hope after reading the new chapter, your doubts are clarified though.
A two week wait. All I can say is, wherever you're going, and for whatever you're going, have a safe trip! You'll be missed! 😊
See I am back now, before time. And I missed you too loads and loads🤗

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