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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I hate you, Shikha Mehzabeen. (Just want to get that out of the way first). (Yes, I did just give you a new surname). (Also, is that the correct spelling of your name?).

Anyway...

Why do I hate you?

Because I was so impatient to read your update that I read it while surrounded by a large number of people ' all of whom personally know me and most of whom I do not care for. And what happens in front of them? I read your update and get a lump in my throat. Enough of a reason to hate you? I think so.

That letter'I'm not going to lie ' I'm normally unaffected by these things. My brain registers that it's sad, that I should feel sad but I don't usually end up feeling much at all. But this'And to add to that, I read what Palin said about the Hindi translation of "Shooting Star". I mean, come on, "toota hua taara"?! Why, Palin, why?! Why are you and Evil Shikha intent on breaking my heart?{i am sorry zarin..It was my melancholic brain{not my fault..letter would make anyone sad}which deduced it this way..Shikha was quite optimistic with choosing this username for geet..as another aspect of shooting stars is the belief associated with them that they grant our wishes..Hope all wishes of geet would come true in this story..} And then I was thinking of what I would have translated it to ' "toot ta hua taara" ' which brought me to how Geet is suffering right now ' this very minute ' and how she could be breaking like I said earlier as we speak and' 😔

I love Tweesha. Seriously. She had me from the moment I read "blue streak" and all over again when the "middle finger" part came up (pun intended 😆). I really hope it will be her that helps soothe Geet's pain, not Maan or any other guy. Why should it always be the guy that makes the girl feel complete? There are other facets to healing and I hope Tweesha is one of them for Geet.

Vicky! Lol, his douchiness was perfectly portrayed with the "baahein pheylaake" salute to his homeland. I like him already!

You're gone by now, I'm sure, so unless you read this while away, to future Shikha: I hope you've had a great trip and once again, I hate you.

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Don't be sorry, it added so much to the story for me and was one of those shock realisations because I hadn't thought of it that way. I wallowed in melancholy for a while, which is something I like to do so it's a win-win, really. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
In train right now and Gehrayian's Geet's foreboding is rubbing on me I guess. I am nervous, damned blasted nervous. So thought why not spoil your mood by adding another dimension to the ongoing discussion. Toot ta hua tara according to me is something, which even when breaking down would only help others' wishes come true...
Now now how many want to throw chappals at me?
Ps: Punam and Mariam, err ShootingStar is an author in Writer's corner. The letter is posted in a forum which itself shows the possibility of sharing. How come Tweesha is culprit to read something posted in an open forum? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

In train right now and Gehrayian's Geet's foreboding is rubbing on me I guess. I am nervous, damned blasted nervous. So thought why not spoil your mood by adding another dimension to the ongoing discussion. Toot ta hua tara according to me is something, which even when breaking down would only help others' wishes come true...{very right shikha..i am loving this username now..I think i should change mine to shooting star😆..anyways don't get nervous..enjoy the chuk chuk and chaiyan chaiyan...😊}
Now now how many want to throw chappals at me?
Ps: Punam and Mariam, err ShootingStar is an author in Writer's corner. The letter is posted in a forum which itself shows the possibility of sharing. How come Tweesha is culprit to read something posted in an open forum? 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lmao. I tried changing my username to that. But as Mariam pointed someone else took it already. LOL! Chuk chuk and chayya chayya? Awwh. Now I am grinning like a fool :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
My bad. I hadn't thought of it this way, though now reading it again, I can see that the details are that of an open forum. Sorry, Tweesha! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Lmao. I tried changing my username to that. But as Mariam pointed someone else took it already. LOL! Chuk chuk and chayya chayya? Awwh. Now I am grinning like a fool :P

Statutory warning..
Don't try chaiya chaiya "ON" the train..try it "IN" the treain..😆
Happy journey shikhu..
hope you would enjoy your time at hinterland...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear...wonderful update! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Knock knock! Anyone home? Missed me or missed me?😆 just to tell you guys that the next update would be up here the moment my internet connection starts working. See you guys soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Knock knock! Anyone home? Missed me or missed me?😆 just to tell you guys that the next update would be up here the moment my internet connection starts working. See you guys soon

I am waiting...😃

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