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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I hate you, Shikha Mehzabeen. (Just want to get that out of the way first). (Yes, I did just give you a new surname). (Also, is that the correct spelling of your name?).

Rofl. I love my new surname. Sounds sexy to sign SM. Wooh! Nope, my spelling is Shika. No "h". And yes, this is a cliched line but hate is a strong feeling and as a great writer (Read Palin) said, love can neither be created nor destroyed much like first law of thermodynamics. And hatred is a form of love, which can be transformed to other forms like love, adoration, respect.

PS: Palin before you try to kill me lemme come clear with the fact that I quote you in real life and pose as an intelligent bacha😆

Anyway...

Why do I hate you?

Because I was so impatient to read your update that I read it while surrounded by a large number of people - all of whom personally know me and most of whom I do not care for. And what happens in front of them? I read your update and get a lump in my throat. Enough of a reason to hate you? I think so.

That letter'I'm not going to lie ' I'm normally unaffected by these things. My brain registers that it's sad, that I should feel sad but I don't usually end up feeling much at all. But this'And to add to that, I read what Palin said about the Hindi translation of "Shooting Star". I mean, come on, "toota hua taara"?! Why, Palin, why?! Why are you and Evil Shikha intent on breaking my heart? And then I was thinking of what I would have translated it to ' "toot ta hua taara" ' which brought me to how Geet is suffering right now ' this very minute ' and how she could be breaking like I said earlier as we speak and' 😔

And I love you and Plain. I understand the shocker part. I was in train while I was reading your comments with this silly grin but when that "toota hua tara" and your "Toot ta hua tara" came up, it wiped the smile off you know. Without this dimension, whatever I have written would have been mediocre. You guys added a new dimension, which made me see it from a different light altogether.🤗

I love Tweesha. Seriously. She had me from the moment I read "blue streak" and all over again when the "middle finger" part came up (pun intended 😆). I really hope it will be her that helps soothe Geet's pain, not Maan or any other guy. Why should it always be the guy that makes the girl feel complete? There are other facets to healing and I hope Tweesha is one of them for Geet.

Bingo! I have no dislike with the stories where a guy completes a girl but you know it kind of became cliched. Guardian angel can be anyone or everyone. Let's see who'd become Geet's guardian angel(s)

Vicky! Lol, his douchiness was perfectly portrayed with the "baahein pheylaake" salute to his homeland. I like him already!

You're gone by now, I'm sure, so unless you read this while away, to future Shikha: I hope you've had a great trip and once again, I hate you.


I love you too Zarin😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Ok..this seems like fun! Let me try this!

"Haven't you heard sharing your wishes wouldn't turn them true?" Tweesha said matter-of-factly.

I want Shradda's team to lose the basketball match "

This ladies and Gentlemen has all the secrets! Tweesha, doesn't believe in sharing her wishes.So the truth is she wished for something else and that is Shraddha's win. Because she knew Shraddha was the one who would fulfil Geet's dreams.

Read further...handsomes and beautifuls. Shraddha means concentration. That even means, if it decides something,it focuses,concentrates on it's goal to such exten,that it doesn't sleep until it fulfils it. That means, Shraddha is an extremely dedicated person and the moment she decides somethin i.e "Ek baar jo commitment kar di, uske baad khud ki bhi nahi sunti"(Salmanji ,does a cameo role here). So here comes the twist. Tweesha actually wished for Shraddha's win. Because she knew Shraddha in and out. She knew that if Shraddha won, the bitterness between their groups would disappear and she would become their friend and since she is a dedicated person. She would with full dedication try to find Geet's guardian angel and in this process she herself becomes one. Solved!

Mystery solved Hotties and Cuties and Bratties! I neither had a Sirius Black with me nor a Marlon Brando with me, Yet I solved this! *bows* Thank you *bows once again*


P.S. Because I'm vella and refuse to pick up the books that are lying in front of me!

P.P.S. This Shraddha (for me) is the Telugu one which means "concentration" and not the Hindi one. 🤣


Rofl. Nammu my darling, this had me in splits, and Shraddha would do a cameo just for you😆
Needless to say your bratties made me howl with laughter.
PS: Where did Sirius black come from? Of course I like him thought i felt he should have afforded a comb😆
PPS: I connected Shraddha with its telugu meaning only. What does its Hindi meaning say?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...loved the last portion the most
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat


Rofl. Nammu my darling, this had me in splits, and Shraddha would do a cameo just for you😆
Needless to say your bratties made me howl with laughter.
PS: Where did Sirius black come from? Of course I like him thought i felt he should have afforded a comb😆
PPS: I connected Shraddha with its telugu meaning only. What does its Hindi meaning say?😆

You are back! 🤗 Let me dance MJ style! Wooh! 😎
I don't have a Godfather like Sirius Black na..I try to fight against all the evils without any such Godfathers who would make offers to me, that I won't be able to refuse! 🤣 (Ignore me, I have lost it! )
Shraddha means Faith. 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated comment on page 25😊
and
I am waiting for jazerrete to update her comments...Yesterday evening she reserved her post just after you have reserved yours for update...
I thought she would give her comment now..But it have not come yet..
Sorry for poking my nose unnecessarily in this matter but I do observe weird things...😆
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

This chapter has intrigued to such extent that i so much wanted to read rest of the chapters right now...What crimes Geet is talking about to confess through her writings...???

Where is Naina???
Change in the equation between Taweesha and Geet pricked me somewhere..specially the line,"when they WERE best friends"..😭
.But I know/hope after Delhi trip,their equation would be balanced..I am badly expecting LHS=RHS here...Pardon me for including Algebra now..My mind is not under my control these days...😕
Staying alone at hostel during Festive breaks is the most horrible thing one could face in his or her life..Being a hosteler myself,I could feel what taweesha would have felt hearing that..a big hug to taweesha for sacrificing her river rafting in Rishikesh for geet..🤗
Coming to boys now...
I am already in love with this vicky..and when he said "Adi the superman"..I literally imagined "our adi" from the show with a red cape and red chaddi{excuse my language😆} over his formal pants..Not to mention the evergreen glasses on his eyes..🤣It was a rofl moment amidst all the gloominess in the chapter..Thank you so much for including it...
Hope Maan would sort this "Gurgaon" problem by his own rather than sending his superman..and there comes a chance of first meeting between our hero and heroine in the national capital...!!!!
A big hug to vicky for already having "two tickets" in his pocket for delhi.🤗
No need to tell how beautifully you write..It would be like stating the obvious...Very glad to see you back with your updates..
waiting much eagerly for next...
PS-The greatest punishment anyone could have was not being punished for her crimes..
This line reminded me of our very own demigod,"Beauty maan😆"..He might have felt same during those thirteen years after the accident...



Palin, If i talk to you frequently, I need not revise all science concepts. You make me revise them and in turn make me remember them. Man I am falling in love with science all over again. I wish my teachers would have made us study in similar way. I would've been student of the year if I got a teacher like you 😆
Adi the superman! Lmao! The picture you presented make me catch my stomach and laugh. Lmao.
Red chaddi🤣 You know I always wondered who the hell designed Superman's costumes. Red and blue seriously!😆

The closing sentence made me laugh again. Oh no I have nothing against beauty Maan aka our Demi god, just that he's too sophisticated for me that I feel inferior before him🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Updated comment on page 25😊

and
I am waiting for jazerrete to update her comments...Yesterday evening she reserved her post just after you have reserved yours for update...
I thought she would give her comment now..But it have not come yet..
Sorry for poking my nose unnecessarily in this matter but I do observe weird things...😆


Lmao! A stalker in making I guess? I will tell you fursat se about it someday😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat


Palin, If i talk to you frequently, I need not revise all science concepts. You make me revise them and in turn make me remember them. Man I am falling in love with science all over again. I wish my teachers would have made us study in similar way. I would've been student of the year if I got a teacher like you 😆
Adi the superman! Lmao! The picture you presented make me catch my stomach and laugh. Lmao.
Red chaddi🤣 You know I always wondered who the hell designed Superman's costumes. Red and blue seriously!😆

The closing sentence made me laugh again. Oh no I have nothing against beauty Maan aka our Demi god, just that he's too sophisticated for me that I feel inferior before him🤣

Its good when stories helps you to revise the science concepts but think of me,when i was revising the thermodynamics,these "maan" and "geet" from life partner were popping in my useless brain {jo ki padhai mein kam hi lagta hai..😆}...You can never be SOTY after getting a teacher{who herself would fail in her exams} like me...😛
and regarding superman's costume..
You know who is the designer???One who designed "Shaktimaan's" costume...Sorry i don't know the name...😆
and whenever you feel inferior before BM..just go and read "And the awards goes to..."..sari inferiority chali jayegi...🤣

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