Originally posted by: Onir
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OMG, replying to this comment is defintely going to make this whole comment, reply saga into an OS, that would definitely make Sweety go, *THUD* *THUD* *THUD*😆
What an update... Indeed salute to Woman power, A 'Pari'ful update😃
The start with description of how Geet is comforting & soothing a disturbed & stressed Pari by patting her to sleep & giving her time; within her embrace similar to a mother giving courage, love & solace to a child who is troubled. These two friends are indeed soul sisters. They're trying to fill the place of a mother in each other's life, which has been taken away from them either due to selfish reasons or to death. But nevertheless they are a strong pillar of strength & support to each other.
How beautifully and accurately you have put that. That is exactly what I was trying to portray.😃
The whole avenging method on behalf of Geet was well executed by Pari. The momentary yet heartfelt desire Maan unconciously accepted to feel the presence of Geet folowed by dissappointment of it not being so & later self-lecturing on feeling all these mixed emotions was very well conveyed & presented. How much of concealing of emotions this Ma(a)n tries to do yet falls flat.
No matter how mcuh he conceals I'm definitely going to denude him...what?😲
Shame on you Doc, I only meant emotionally ofcourse😆...I think😉
The whole "Mission Invisible Tail" of sheru dhundho was one of it's kind... 😆 Did feel bad when Pari used Miri's innocence to execute her plan but then on second thoughts also liked it somewhere as it was a fitting & very well deserved revenge to be taken against Maan who keeps assuming things & creating & formulating his own pre-concieved wrong notions from thin air. Pari's explaination to Miri about why the one-eyed intact sunglasses is the most apt, magical & worthy to be used for searching Sheru's tail was so witty yet childlike. For a moment even I was convinced by that lie of hers... 😳 felt yes can be possible, but then logical thinking & common sense did descend upon me...😆
I wrote what and why of Pari's behavior on Mayyo's comment. Please refer to that, as I'm feeling lazy to type it again.😛
That's the best part about kids, taking everything at face value and then we all acquire some nonsense called commomn sense and stop believing
Umm, but then again if you were not grown up I'd want you nowhere near me with that sthethoscope, so I'm glad you have your share of common sense.😆
Loved it how these two girls.. (Pari & Miri) just by their stance & style of approaching The Ma(a)n did cause apprehensions in him... That he did take cover from his car to save his Butt...(literally). Pari's digs targetted towards Maan was so briliant & varied from - addressing him as the driver, ...to taunting how different he looked at the party in all his glory & in lights of his power & money and that now his actual image in her eyes is clear of that lens, ... to making a fool out of him by not finding him worthy to shake hands with after he extended his hand. (Honestly there I did think that she would shake his hand formally but would squeeze the life out of his hand as a means to remove all her anger yet not showing it outwardly & overtly in front of all... but your way was well justified... .
Pari and Miri ka mission song should be Aaj ne chodenge tujhe doom dooma doom🤣
Miri's one sided sincere conversation wih Maan's behind was so 😆😆 & All her antics from her logics to her reason for singing song to lure 'Sheru's tail form giving her darshan was so cute & adorable of her. I so love & adore Miri... ❤️. The song Aaja Aaja... and the context it was used in was so hillarious... had me grinning from ear to ear. On deeper thinking is this the song Pari sings chupke chupke from Brij in his absence... her attempt to console self for the long wait she is suffering from.
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I like that. It sounds just the song she'd sing for him doesn't it?
I would have never imagined even in my wierdest thoughts that the docile, shy, girl next door, waiting for the Man she loves to propose her Pari would transform into an avatar of Durga ma & Kali Inspector Parinda who is all out there to safeguard women & to teach an everlasting cruel lesson to all those perverts & a Burden on earth Men. Her this transformation though was unexpected & shocking yet very pleasing... mainly because of the way you presented & depicted it all. The audacity & shamelessness of that sleazeball of commenting on how helpless woman are & that his nothing will be harmed was too much I so wanted to jump into the fictional scene & bash him with all my might 😡. The way you brought out this point which is actually the need of the hour & also a true menace & shame on the society which just restricts the woman though she being the victim & letting those perverts & having fake pride about them being men so more stronger allowing them go scot free & at the same time giving them a free rein to do it in future, was very realistic in it's approach & the way Pari & her group of officers dealt with it was Brilliant & hats off to you for it, for dealing with this sensitive topic so beautifully.👏
Pari is the amalgam of an friend and some honest police officers, who have come to my father (who's a lwyer)with their cases. They don't always follow the rules to deliver justice and you will never read about their achievements in the newspapers.
* Phew* Finally Pari emptied & showered Maan with all her bank of swear words... mere bhi dil ki bhadaas nikal di is ladki ne... Ab samjhega Maan babu ko ki sirf woh baseless accussations & bak bak ne kar sakta... Geet has Parinda with her as a strong pillar. Also liked it when Maan self-admitted & acknwoledged inwardly the need for such a friend as Pari in life for making life worth living... 😊
Explanation of Maan's thought process regarding Pari also at Mayyo's comment.😉
Beautiful part... waiting for more... 😃
Thanks Onir, for this beautiful lambawala comment. It takes a lot of effort and time to write such detailed comments and I really love you for taking that time out to comment on my FF.
Waiting for your OS and thread, so that I can come there and show you my appreciation.
Love you Doc🤗
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