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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

and i didnt think that this could be so funny
god both these sets of maan and geet are so funny
and whats with OM being so negative against BM BG calling them pyschos
god this is truning out to be pretty hilarious
wow you sure arent mincing your words against your own creation
and i absolutely disgaree with BM that you arent good writer in fact you are one of the best
and still no colour couple here
i love these guys
cheers for pm

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow these r all new perspectives of OM, OG, BM & BG & they r hilarious too

Loved d part

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Hats Off to You Palin 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 👏👏👏

What a weirdest idea of this OS….really loved it….

Very good concept to praise yourself…..rofl….🤣

I was laughing from the start only….

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 So you must have got a copy of 'Ramayan' as a gift…lol…😆

What is this palin…..you have not arranged for proper sitting arrangement for your guest…

OMG tumne to O-maaneet & B-Maaneet ke beech jhagda kar diya….

Loved BM's line OM is "Ramayan-illiterate"

Neems leaves & Crushed orange piles are "edible things" …lol…😆rofl….🤣

Yaar…really they taste yammy….😕

OMG…they have neem pakodas for their refreshment…

Kitni kanjoos ho tum… ginke samose diye …hummm….

Loved it from my core of the heart…

Aur kya kahu….kahne ke liye shabd bahi hai mere pass

Par itna jaan gayi hoon…koi bhi reader ab tumhare yaha khane ke nahi aayega….

TFP

Cont soon

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Why inviation card is in black & white...eager to know

Update soon

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Loved it

Neem ka pakora, orange peel milk; some chef somewhere is turning over in his grave..

Palin fighting with the couples... you go girl!

Your characters are chasing you around all day aren't they? I have that happen too when I can't stop thinking about characters and what's next but you made this absolutely hilarious...

Thanks for the story... waiting eagerly for more.

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

after reading the first line i thought how lucky u r palin to greet our fav maaneet and that too *3!!! and then jo band bajai teri maan's ne ... though i felt sorry for it, sachi muchi, but have to say i really enjoyed it...

solid liquid gas man

ramayan illiterate

palin eats neem pakoras and orange peels in milk????

exact 8 samosas ???

just the party have started and i maaneet are still to come but u made both the maaneets quarrel with the other and OM is behaving like a real obsessed man of perfection... ab aage kya kya hoga???

waiting for the next

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

amazing part...m realy amused hw u get dese innovative ideas...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

omg omg loved it rofling like hell

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

I hope maan does not stop bm and bg for taking pu.tul for ice crem.

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Palin, kal se na jane kitni baar comment karne ki koshish karti rahi par. Khair, it is very much innovative idea and very much like my gem. Trust me, i am already fida on your writing skills. This is so much fun to read and wait. No one had tried to do so, ever.

Do cont soon and do PM me.