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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet love for rajma maan saw maan kiran discussing geet so he knew she was the witch



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Posted: 12 years ago
its chapter 4 by mistake you posted it as 34
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

its chapter 4 by mistake you posted it as 34

Thank you for correcting dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar its right don't have words to describe ur updates still would say amazingly awesome
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Hey Palin 😳!!!!!!!!!! I know am AGAIN late as usual to comment. But yarr seriousely now i fall short of words to praise ur stories...⭐️
This one AGAIN was something i've never ever read in my entire life.
The way u describe each nd every thing soo perfectly is wat makes ur stories sooo lovable.
Like the way u expressed Geet's character in this SS, total mast maula types AND specially her craze for SHINCHAN, which I verry well know is in actual replica of u 😉, is just marvelousss.
LOL really had a hard time controlling mu laughter on ur descriptions of one's haalat on having an upset tummy...🤣
And honestly saying have read many FF's on concept of arranged marriage but never it had been this great...
I just bow down in front of ur talent and am sure u would turn up an excellent novelist if u want... 👏

Welll pweaaaseee do give us its updates as quick as possible as just on finishing one part I crave for an another one.😆
Awsmn, fab, marvelous, splendid and mindblowing story.
Loved it.
And craving for more😉

👏 agree with each and every word of ayu...
ur stories even if it is old concept have a freshness and different flavour with them...
i want to praise u but again i hv no words👏👏
just awesome girl👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aowww, just loved the part⭐️, Was somewhere missing Maan in the updates and here his POV was just superb.
LOLzzz, itnee saare dishes ka naam leke meri bhuk hi badd gayi
Anywayzz, Their little eye game was too cute and the blow was the RAJMA scene😉,,,, aoww poor geet ka to dill hi toot gaya when Maan ignored her darling Rajma😆
hehehehe, and to add more spice over it was her bowl slide, aoww it was choo cute.

And LADDUUU??????????? 😲 LOLzzz, bass yehi bacha tha, Maan Singh Khurana as Laddu🤣
Their rapid fire round and especially

She smiles amazingly.

She slides amazingly.,

these lines just took my heart😆... Haye kya taarif hai😆

But thats really true ha, she slid superbly.😉And yess truly Geet does share that emotional bond with her DARLING Rajma... 😆
I doubt kahi Geet Maan ko apne Rajme ke liye ditch na kar de
😆

And then Maan's Haal-e-bayaan about Geet in the words document was just too cute.Now wondering wat these two will cope up with each other aftr marriage. That would be fun to watch...Ammazing update yarr, nd as I said early now again craving for more😉

And yess, BTW also read each n every update of Beauty and sad it ended but with a perfect note.😃


Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks moni...😊
I am following your story and would give my feedback asap..I am sorry i am little lazy with comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

liked how kiran brought maan to speak abt geet
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Aowww, just loved the part⭐️, Was somewhere missing Maan in the updates and here his POV was just superb.
LOLzzz, itnee saare dishes ka naam leke meri bhuk hi badd gayi
Anywayzz, Their little eye game was too cute and the blow was the RAJMA scene😉,,,, aoww poor geet ka to dill hi toot gaya when Maan ignored her darling Rajma😆
hehehehe, and to add more spice over it was her bowl slide, aoww it was choo cute.

And LADDUUU??????????? 😲 LOLzzz, bass yehi bacha tha, Maan Singh Khurana as Laddu🤣
Their rapid fire round and especially

She smiles amazingly.

She slides amazingly.,

these lines just took my heart😆... Haye kya taarif hai😆

But thats really true ha, she slid superbly.😉And yess truly Geet does share that emotional bond with her DARLING Rajma... 😆
I doubt kahi Geet Maan ko apne Rajme ke liye ditch na kar de
😆

And then Maan's Haal-e-bayaan about Geet in the words document was just too cute.Now wondering wat these two will cope up with each other aftr marriage. That would be fun to watch...Ammazing update yarr, nd as I said early now again craving for more😉

And yess, BTW also read each n every update of Beauty and sad it ended but with a perfect note.😃


so finally i am giving the "cute maaneet story" you have demanded from me long ago..{at time of colors..} so be regular and enjoy it dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

He said she can't live in his heart but he is oblivious to the fact that she has entered his mind and knocking at his heart already. Tears shed by her eyes for his beloved niece has made her character diaphanous for his heart. It won't seek his permission to let her reside in it…



YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS
LOVED THE SUMMARY OF THE CHAPTER
SHE WAS KNOCKING AT THE DOORWAY TO HER HEART AND WILL SOON CLEAN THE GLOOMINESS AND CREATE HER OWN SPACE
LOVED HIS DESCRIPTION OF AND HER TALENTS

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