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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Brown-Eyes



mamma 🤗

aap kaise ho
aur toh apni bhuri ankho wali bete ho bhul ho gaye aaj kal mai kya itni buri hu

aisa nai hai sweety bs xams hain to tyming mismatch kr jati hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
brown eyes...tm mjhe yaad nai krti...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
mai jaa rai... u guys enjoy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: deepali1022

<font color="#006600" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="6">brown eyes...tm mjhe yaad nai krti...</font>

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yaad karta hu na bohot sara 😃

aapko pata hai aapke damad ne aapke liye dusra damad dundha hai 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepali1022

<font color="#9900ff" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="5">aisa nai hai sweety bs xams hain to tyming mismatch kr jati hai...</font>


acha aisa hai 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: deepali1022

part-2

hey my dear grand-son...wo kya hai n hindi me na pta to bs...angreji se kaam chalao...!!!
me came here jst to comment on part-2...den will b going as tomorrow i had practical xam...

dis part was bit too emotional to me...!!!
i got lost in my farewell...when i went school for last tym yaar i so missed everything...!!!

Maan ( cupping her face in his palm n removing the tear from her eye lids ) : kyun akeli reh jaoogi ...mien tumhain humehsa call kiya karoonga na ..aur kuch bhi problem ho tou tum mujhe zaror batana Samjhi ...aur phir agar kuch hua tou mien hoon na dadi se keh ke tum se milne aajaya karoonga ...

Geet ( still not convinced ) : par uss ke baad hum kya karenge ...mien tou London chali jaaongi na ...aapko bataya tha na mene dad ne kiya kaha ...

Maan : oh ho budhu tou tum mujhe apna London ka number de dina mein tumhain wahan call kar liya karoon ga ...aur tumhare paas tou mere delhi wale ghar ka number hai hi ..
Abhi plzz rona band karoo ...u know na mujhe se nahi dekha jata tumhain rota huye ..

i so much lov'd dese dialogues...dese typ of assurance we use to give eachothr on dat last day...

The sadness was visible on both their faces ..a silence prevailed by both of them for sometime not knowing where to start ...they both wanted to say soo many thing ..but just couldn't start the talk ...

really nyc lines...dear...!!!

Geet : hassiye mat ...bua kehti thi kisi ka hanki rakhne se larayi hoti hai ..Samjhe Budhu Singh Khurana .. sacchi me hota hai kya???

being away from eachothr deir lyf becum gloomy...!!!
wooow...party...!!!
so dey will b meeting in d party...aftr so many years...!!!
part-2 was too gud...!!!
it's really emotional...n heart touching...!!!

chalo now me off to study...!!!
will see u later...hopefully tomorrow nyt...!!!



thank u soo much Nanu ..😃
loved ur review soo much actually smiling reading it ...u really liked it all ...😲
n yup part 2 is really an emotional one ...😳😳

All the best Nanu ..👍🏼
have a grt day ...😃

Luv Ya
Sobia ..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me giving the part now ...format hugaya ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sana baby ek page par 8 comments aate hain na ..??
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Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


hi all ,
hw r u ?
hope every1 is enjoying here ...😆

chalo starting off the new thread with a double blast ...😉 😳😳 😉 😳😳 😉

hope u all will like the upcoming 2 updates ...😳

read all the comments over last update thank u soo much for ur motivating words n appreciation n liking ...😳😳

plzzz be thr always to support n motivate me ..😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
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FRIENDS IN LOVE ..😳



PART 15


Well the moment geet ran from maan ..she entered banging her room's door hard leaning on the door smiling with her red blushing face ..n that's when her two sister pounced with thr teasing questions '

N here she stands all confused what to say 'definitely she can't say what happened a moment be4 'but what to say ..they r nt at all going to give up ..!!



Geet : umm ..wohh ..nothing ..nothing at all just that I was thinking about our next day 'actually

Nichol : hmm ..plzz care to explain what exactly u were thinking '

Ooppssiii caught again ..

Manvi : let me guess didu 'geet di must be thinking her next bumping scene with our hot maan bro (well yes manvi n Nichol has build up a grt relation with our Casanova singh khurana after all the MSK charm has to work ) ..

Geet : shut up will u ..!! nichol just ask her keep her mouth shut ..firstly she is not doing anything in account of ur marriage preparation n here when me maan n mamaji is trying our best to do all 'knowing Mathew have no one from his side 'she busy doing all the drama 'idiot ..!!

Manvi : hww what hv I done ..didu just see her 'geet di to remind u Didu's all shopping is done by me only '

Geet : yeah ..exactly my point shopping ur 1st love ..duffer ..!!

Nichol : okiee easy girls 'plss stop fighting n tell me whats in ur mind ..!!

Geet : that will be better only ' Nichol di I hv made an awesome plan ..since its whole 2 days left for ur wedding day ..i am planning to do some Mehndi n Sangeet function 2morrow evening here with all the Indian community n urs n Mathews' frnds with us family '

Manvi : Sangeet ..?? ; Nichol : Mehndi 'what ..??


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IN STUDY ..

Vineet n Maan were in a hot discussion regarding geet's stay over here ..

Vineet : maan I know u love her but yeh mat bhuloo ke inn situations mien Geet ka India jana kitna dangerous ho sakta hai uss ke liye 'geet ke dad ko Nasik ki kisi jail mien daal dena was nt a simple thing maan 'unki iss sudden disappearance ne unke share holders aur wohh log jin se unhoon ne loans liye thay sab ko Chaudhry house ke bahar laakar khara kar diya hai to retrieve it all ..



Here maan was loosing his patience with his helplessness in this situation ...he knew it will be dangerous for her but still he just can't leave her alone here n go for he knows she will not accept all this at first n than its just a possibility if geet's dad's lawyer will get to know about her any sooner '.but yet the danger is thr to which he cant completely deny '

Maan : mien jaanta hoon aapki tension baseless nhi hai but aap bhul rahe hain ke khud Mr.Chaudhry ne kabhi geet ko apni beti nhi mana no one out thr knows about her being his daughter '

Vineet : nhi maan geet ke dad ne bhale hi geet ko apne aap se' iss dunya se door rakha hoo magar Chaudhry ke kuch faithful lawyer geet ke bare mien sab jante hain ..

Vineet was trying all his options to make him understand the intensity of the situation but nothing was going in his mind other than the thought of again parting away from his Jangli Billi 'his love 'his life ..

Maan : magar who yeh nhi jante ke Geet kuan hai kahan hai 'ek baar dekha tak nhi hai unn logoon ne geet ko 'how come they r a threat for her ..

Vineet : maan tum samajh nhi rahe ho 'geet ka India jana safe nhi hai aaj nhi tou kal unko sab pata chal jayega ..aur waise bhi Lawyer mujhe last 2 dins se approach kar rahe hain if I know anything about geet '

Maan : mien samajhna chahta bhi nhi hoon sir, geet ko abb mien kisi aur ke bharose nhi choronga 'aur agar baat safety ki hai tou let me assure u KM se ziada safety usse yahan nhi mil sakti with u being the top suspect of being in touch with her '

Vineet : maan wohh meri behan ki beti hai 'meri zimedari hai wohh ..
Chaudhry ke saare loans aur underworld se liye huye paise aur usski rival-ity sab kuch geet ko bhugatna par sakta hai 'agar Mr.Chaudhry k ek bhi rival ko pata chala ke unki ek beti bhi hai tou tum jante hu apne paise hasil karne ke liye wohh kuch bhi kar sakte hain 'SID ko tumne safe path de diya hai maan 'he is all safe in london but geet 'geet India mien rahegi tou kuch bhi aur kabhi bhi hu sakta hai ..

Now this was getting out of control for maan 'the mere thought of something happening to geet jolted his entire existence 'the flashes of her terrible state during that kidnapping fiasco flashed in front of his eyes n he lost his temper '



Maan : jab tak meri ek bhi saans baqi hai 'geet ko koi haath bhi nhi laga sakta ..aur kis zimedaari ki baat kar rahe hain aap '
Jab geet ko aapki sab se ziada zarorat thi tab tou chor aaye thay uss se ek hostel mien '.(vineet lowered his head in shame) ..yahi kiya tha apne 6 saal pehle sirf iss liye ke uss waqt bhi Chaudhry sahab geet ko zabardasti wapis India leejane ki kushish kar rahe thay aur aap apni family ko khatre mien nahi dekhna chahte thay '.right Mr.Vineet Singh ..!!


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INSIDE GEET's ROOM

Manvi : Sangeet ..?? ; Nichol : Mehndi 'what ..??

Geet : ahhh 'to whom I am saying this 'okiee fine Sangeet is a musical ceremony which takes place be4 marriage in India n Mehndi its Henna umm kaise baton 'like u have seen Indian brides decorating thr hands with Mehndi be4 marriage n even girls on different occasions right ..

Nichol : yeah I got to remember mom's wedding pictures ..there were something adorned in her hands 'but who will do it here in Italy .. I mean carving all the design on my hands ..??

Manvi : yeah ..my parlors person I am sure wont even know M of this mehndi '

Geet : well that's nt a problem ..i can do that 'of course nt that well but still I can help u '

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STUDY ..

Vineet : Maan mere past ko saamne laakar tum aaj ki haqeeqat ko nhi jhutla sakte 'aur aaj ka sach yahi hai ke India mien geet ki jaan ko khatra hai aur mien kisi bhi kimat par geet ko yahan se jane ki ijazat nhi dee sakta '

Maan : agar yeh aapka faisla hai tou ek faisla aap mera bhi sun lejiye ' kuch bhi hujaye geet yahan nhi rehegi 'aur agle 3 din mien me ussko wapis leekar jaa raha hoon ..

Vineet : aisa kuch nhi huga maan 'mere rehte tou bilkul nhi '

Maan (evil smirk) : Maan Singh Khurana ko order dene jitni hisiyat nhi hai aapki Mr.Vineet Singh '.

Vineet : aur tum kis hisiyat se geet ko apne saath lee jarahe hoo ..kya rishta hai tum dono ke beech ..

Maan : sochna bhi mat ' geet ko apne saath lee jane ke liye mujhe kisi rishtey ya waja ki zarorat nhi hai samjhe aap ... mien jab chahoonga uss ko yahan se lee jaonga aur wohh khud bhi mujhe rok nhi sakti 'yaad rakhna

Vineet : magar jab poori dunya tum se 'geet se poochegi ke kis haq se wohh tumhare saath' tumhare ghar mien hai tab kiya jawaab duge ..bolo maan 'kiya karoge jab poore dunya ek din tum par aur geet par ungli uthayigi 'kiya kahooge kuan hai geet tumhari ..!!


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Geet's Room

Manvi : okiee fine then we should meet Mathew 2morrow u tell him about all this n makes this all more organized function ..

Geet : yup ask him to cum at XYZ restaurant n we will have our break fast thr 2morrow sharp at 7am got that ..

Manvi : but ..7

Nichol : shut up right now ...go n call Mathew ..n make sure dad doesn't heard u ..u know he has banned our meeting till marriage '.

With that manvi left the room 'leaving geet n Nichol setting up the room to sleep clearing the shopping bags '.


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STUDY

Maan : dunya ki parwah aap jaise log karte hain Mr.Vineet Singh ..Maan Singh Khurana nhi 'kyun ke mere liye meri poori dunya geet aur Vicky hai .. aur jahan tak sawaal geet par uthne wali ungliyoon ki hai tou jab tak MSK geet ke saath hai koi yeh jurrat karega nahi '

Vineet : par mien kisi ajnabi ke sath apni beti ko kyun bhej doon..

Maan : geet ke liye kuan ajnabi hai aur apna yeh tou aap bhi buhat ache se jante hain 'right ..!!

Well this was a tight slap on vineet's face knowing geet 'she will never choose him over maan 'but still he knew he had to make him agree as he knew how much dangerious it can be for her to stay in India '

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Geet's Room

While on the other hand geet was all red by the constant teasing taunts by Nichol n her attempts to make her confess her love '

Nichol : geet plss now stop it yrr 'I am nt a blind the way u both were blushing at each other on the dinning table 'girl stop fooling ur self coz we r nt gonna believe ur non sense excuse ..

Geet : oh god Nichol di plss I ve been saying this same thng 2 u since hrs '.it nothing b/w us '

Nichol : ya right that's coz u r having this hidden smile n this red cheeks of urs is coz I have poured some tomato sauce hai na geet 'say it ..

Geet : uhhh I gave up 'me off to bed ..

She covered her head with the duvet closing the side lamp but nichol switch onn the main lights n snatched the duvet off her grip ..

Nichol : not soo soon baby ..1st tell way were u soo restless when dad asked u 2 stay back here ..??

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STUDY

Vineet : lafzoon ko ghuma kar tum sach ko badal nhi sakte maan 'hum ek society mien rehte hain aur iss society ke rules ko follow karna parega humien '.socho kaisa lage ka geet ko agar kal kisi ek bhi insaan ne uss se yehi sawaal kiye jo aaj yahan mien tum se kar raha hoon ..

Maan was still standing thr 'somewhr he knew what vineet ws saying is right but still he just can't trust them enough with geet 'after all what happened with her, he is not at all in a situation to leave her alone ..
For he knows he won't be at peace even for a second away from her neither she will be 'but then the thought of her safety 'India is no more safe for her 'her dad's legal issues can make her suffer even can put her life in danger '

Vineet : maan plzz geet ke liye ..usski safety ke liye kuch months phir mien khud geet ko delhi lee aaonga 'tab tak tum wahan sab problem solve kar dena '

Maan was still standing thr confused as to what he do ..here he was planning to propose her n now what fate has in store for them '

Vineet : plzz maan abhi geet ko kuch mat kehna iss sab ke baare mien ..u know hw stubborn she is when it comes to u 'she will never agree to live here just for her safety u will have to make her stay here '



Maan glanced him blank 'thinking Y can't they e just together n live happily 'y every time when everythings seems to be have become just perfect this fate has to ruin it all with its own games ..

Maan : fine but Vicky will be here with her 'n u don't need to tell her anything now ill tell her all at Nichol's wedding day ..i know THAT day she won't deny me for anything 'she can never ..

Saying so Maan left from thr with a wrecked heart n blank face not knowing what to do ..he will never be able to leave geet here 'n go
But now in these circumstances he can not take her back to India either '
Helpless he went to his room gloomy thinking now what to do 'how to say this all to geet ..for he knows how easily she can read his mind n heart 'n if she got to know the real reason she will never agree to stay here 'confused with a bleeding heart he entered his room ..

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Geet's Room

Nichol : not soo soon baby ..1st tell way were u soo restless when dad asked u 2 stay back here ..??

Geet : umm ..nothing its just I nvr gave it a thought '

Nichol : ufff geet plss ..

Geet : no di plss now stop all ths I dnt wanna talk abt it ..

Saying so geet went away in he balcony 'n nichol followed her thr ..



Nichol : I am sorry ..guess I went over board ..

Geet (glaced back at her at once with a sorry plastered over her face) : nhi di I am sorry mien nhi kehna chahti thi aisa but its just that ..mien nhi bardaasht kar paati ..the mere thought of going away from maan is un-bearable '.i am sorry I was rude '


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Maan's Room ..



Here maan stood in his room's window thinking deply about what Vineet said 'all the problem that have surrounded them all of a sudden ..what n how geet will react if he said to her that she will have to be here for more time 'will she agree for it 'or will she be agry with him 'he was feeling miserable with the situation n his helplessness over it '

Suddenly a smile curved his M-shaped lip seeing the moon playing hide n seek with the dark clouds ..her mischief filled face flashing in the lights of the stars 'remembering the cutie 'sweet ..naughty moments he spend with geet soo far after meeting in Mumbai ..(lolzz I was thinking those scenes to be romantic ..)



She is a true puzzle in all senses 'childish at heart yet soo mature 'carefree by nature still she is way too sensitive when it comes to her close1 ..she is way too shabby but way too sophisticated to present her self .. with all the flaws in her still she is the best when it comes to work '
Although being a hot headed girl ..she way too shy when he come to flirt with her '

Maan (st) : god she looks soo damn irresistible with her crimson red cheeks .. the down castled eyes ..n her silent acceptance to her new found feeling just makes it impossible for me to hold back my heart to say out loud how much I love 'truly this girl will turn me mad '

He stood thr remembering all the stair case scene again n smiled full heartily with the sight of her vulnerable state came in front of his eyes ..
The morning incident was even more amusing how can she be soo damn red with just his gaze ..but then the question come even after being with her 24/7 y is it when she is near him y he is never able to remove his eyes off her ..as if he got hypnotized '

Maan (seeing the moon) : u know what mom ..ur son has official turned nuts now ..( a slight chuckle left ) ..mom I had always knew my real feelings 4 her but y is it feeling soo differently pleasurable now being around her 'I never thought seeing the love in her eyes just for me would give me soo much happiness .. I don't what will happen when we will confront it all 'the merry thought my heart starts somersaults '

How funny yet incredible it is to loose all ur thoughts with the single thought of that special one 'when all ur worries vanish in thin air like a dust particle with just a mere thought of her smile ..that soothing warmth of hers' enveloping ur entire being making u feel light at heart even in the most stressful minute of the day 'those tiny miny encounters flashing infron of ur eyes making u smile out of all odds '
How much blessed a person could be to have somebody in his life who doesn't even need to present around u to make u smile 'just a single memory of that person is enough to do that '

He was again lost gazing at the moon ..remembering the sweet moments with her back in KM ..the cutie pillow fight 'wondering when it was last he did something like that chuckling with the thought this girl has made him do things he never thought he would '.lost seeing the crimson red face of her reflecting in the sky 'reliving those moments of closeness yet again ..
Blushing slightly with the realization of how much he was trying hard to control his urges to take her petal like lips in his n feel her hidden secrets ..to touch those deep eyes which were reflecting her soul 'speaking the volumes of her hidden feeling 'smiling with the thought of how he made her embarrassed with his words 'he was again feeling aroused with the thought of that movie night '.the silence was just the same as it was that time ..the fresh sir blow contained her aroma making him breath that intoxicating smell feeling her again ..

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Geet's Room

Nichol : I am sorry ..guess I went over board ..

Geet (glaced back at her at once with a sorry plastered over her face) : nhi di I am sorry mien nhi kehna chahti thi aisa but its just that ..mien nhi bardaasht kar paati ..the mere thought of going away from maan is un-bearable '.i am sorry I was rude '

Nichol (Smiled) : okiee now can u tell me y is this soo 'y u feel it unbearable to live without maan ..

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next coming up in few minutes till then enjoy this one ...
n do let me know hw do find this twist ...😆 😉😉 😆 😛😛 😉😉 😆


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago

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