MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD #5

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

quite an emotional update ash .

first crack in anisha relation with geet . her realisation will not b that both r made for eachother but she will feel geet occupies more prominent place in maan's life ,that will cause change in relation . story will very interesting .continue soon

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ruchs

My mind is on a singing spree!! Don't know how these lines came into my mind while me was thinking about Parineeta!! So i penned them down' I wrote them from Geet's POV!! Hope you like it and hoping its not crappy!!!😳

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Hum thhey ek dusrey ke saathi'

Jaisey Diya aur Baati'

Par hum huye tab juda'

Jab tum par chhadi ishq ki adaa'.

Par kismat ke aagey hum jhukey..

Phir ek baar hum miley'

Sab kuchh tha par ab badla hua'

Dukh aur gam ne tha humein chhua'

Zindagi mein thhi abb do nanhi pari'

Bin maa ke pali wo sehmi aur dari'

Ek parineeta toh shayad na main bani'

Par huyi maa ban ne ke sukh se dhani'

👏Kari thi main ne rabb se dua'

Ki tumhe miley khushiyaan'

Par aaj hain hum iss raah mein khadey'

Na jaaney kab mitenge yeh faasley'.👏

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My first try at something like this!!! If its very bad toh no beating allowed!!😆

ruch beautiful words and last stanza was so beautiful and painful to read .

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

For the new Thread

I was waiting for the new thread and update for the last half an hour...

By the way aishwarya... i guess we share much more than the same name... its been almost 4 months in college n i have never ever sat in the first row except a very few... dat to only wen i was super late n almost all the back benches were occupied... and yeah i would run a marathon to the last benches before the next class... college life is super fun...

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ufff iss Maan ka kuchh nahi ho sakta!!!

Poor Geet!!

How can Maan say all this to Geet???

Specially when she actually got her own dignity, her life in danger for saving Maan's love Anisha!!!

Me guessing, Maan's brain goes on a vacation when he is angry!!

felt really bad for Geet!!

She is otherwise a very strong girl!!

Can understand how badly Maan must have hurt her that she actually fainted!!!

And Anisha!! Guess all her insecurity doubts began from here!!!

Ufff!! Yeh pyaar cheez hi aisi hai….

Karo toh problem aur na ho toh problem!!!

Superb update dear!!!

Loved the pre cap a lottt!!!

Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

congrats for new thread nd lovely update ...

Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I still can't believe Maan said that to Geet

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: hermoso
ruch beautiful words and last stanza was so beautiful and painful to read .

Thank you so much dear!!! Me actually very happy you felt so!! These last two lines are actually the ones which came in my mind first Then i wrote the whole thing!!!!!!😳 Thank you so so so so much dear!! Me was really scared that it's bad!!😳

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ruchs

My mind is on a singing spree!! Don't know how these lines came into my mind while me was thinking about Parineeta!! So i penned them down' I wrote them from Geet's POV!! Hope you like it and hoping its not crappy!!!😳
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hum thhey ek dusrey ke saathi'

Jaisey Diya aur Baati'

Par hum huye tab juda'

Jab tum par chhadi ishq ki adaa'.

Par kismat ke aagey hum jhukey..
Phir ek baar hum miley'
Sab kuchh tha par ab badla hua'
Dukh aur gam ne tha humein chhua'

Zindagi mein thhi abb do nanhi pari'

Bin maa ke pali wo sehmi aur dari'

Ek parineeta toh shayad na main bani'

Par huyi maa ban ne ke sukh se dhani'

Kari thi main ne rabb se dua'

Ki tumhe miley khushiyaan'

Par aaj hain hum iss raah mein khadey'

Na jaaney kab mitenge yeh faasley'.
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My first try at something like this!!! If its very bad toh no beating allowed!!😆

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Hum thhey ek dusrey ke saathi'

Jaisey Diya aur Baati'

Par hum huye tab juda'

Jab tum par chhadi ishq ki adaa'.

Par kismat ke aagey hum jhukey..

Phir ek baar hum miley'

Sab kuchh tha par ab badla hua'

Dukh aur gam ne tha humein chhua'

wow loved it me stealing these few lines for my own ff what my angel wrote it itna haq to hai na😆mindblowing angel loved it to the core me totally fida mwuaaah lucky kawaii geet