Beauty2..Note for the readers-page 160,Feb 1 2014 - Page 17

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Shonameet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

I like the way their professional relationship is progressing towards personal relation.

how just with his one shriek...she forget everything...only his pain matters to her...at that time she even forgot her biggest fear n insecurity also...which always haunt her.
...
"she wanted to tell him that his one painful breath is enough to aweken her from deepest slumber"
(pyaar...only true luv can make u feel like this!) "BUT at that moment he had realised how it would feel, watching geet without her dupatta was giving him strange happiness n confidence that she had trust in him to expose 'that' to him which she had always hid from all"--(luvd it! So maan finally got to feel that feeling...when his luv has trusted him with her secrete( better word nahi sujha..sorry) and now he got the confidence that he hav chance in there relationship...now he didnt hav any fear like that night on bike ride to leave any wrong impression...as she has showd trust in him...Tabhi toh he let himself to touch her!
...
And she didnt flinch at his touch...coz she didnt hav that fear anymore that her face can change his behaviour towards her... )

She told him about her accident...and he was scared with thought of loosing her forever...

so, maan fear driving car...and he shard that fearful memory with her... he trusted n didnt feel any hesitetion to share his fear n weakness with her...(i hav guessd sumthing...but nahi bataungi...u will again get angrey!)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh...My...Bloody...GOD...!!!!

I knew...it...!!!!

I knew it..i knew it...i knew IT...!!

First Part se...!!!!

Dhinka chika...dhinka chika...!

Mujhe toh prophecy ki dukan khuli chahiye...!!!

Wow...i feel like the king of the world...!

No..no...queen...i'm a girl na...!

Wo bhi nehi...!i'm single...not double...!

So princess...!

Ok...enough time waste...!!!

Coming to the update:

Awesome...!

what will be maan's reaction when he would come to the truth.

Loved it...!

Continue soon babes.

Ps:hope u got the buddy req.

Love,

Zahran.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

I like the way their professional relationship is progressing towards personal relation.

how just with his one shriek...she forget everything...only his pain matters to her...at that time she even forgot her biggest fear n insecurity also...which always haunt her.
...
"she wanted to tell him that his one painful breath is enough to aweken her from deepest slumber"
(pyaar...only true luv can make u feel like this!)

"BUT at that moment he had realised how it would feel, watching geet without her dupatta was giving him strange happiness n confidence that she had trust in him to expose 'that' to him which she had always hid from all"--(luvd it! So maan finally got to feel that feeling...when his luv has trusted him with her secrete( better word nahi sujha..sorry) and now he got the confidence that he hav chance in there relationship...now he didnt hav any fear like that night on bike ride to leave any wrong impression...as she has showd trust in him...Tabhi toh he let himself to touch her!
...
And she didnt flinch at his touch...coz she didnt hav that fear anymore that her face can change his behaviour towards her... )

She told him about her accident...and he was scared with thought of loosing her forever...

so, maan fear driving car...and he shard that fearful memory with her... he trusted n didnt feel any hesitetion to share his fear n weakness with her...(i hav guessd sumthing...but nahi bataungi...u will again get angrey!)



no dear..i won't get angry,,
sabko pata lag hi gaya hai..
actually i myself was about to tell everything in today's update itself but could not type more because of my laziness...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Temporary99

Oh...My...Bloody...GOD...!!!!

I knew...it...!!!!

I knew it..i knew it...i knew IT...!!

First Part se...!!!!

Dhinka chika...dhinka chika...!

Mujhe toh prophecy ki dukan khuli chahiye...!!!

Wow...i feel like the king of the world...!

No..no...queen...i'm a girl na...!

Wo bhi nehi...!i'm single...not double...!

So princess...!

Ok...enough time waste...!!!

Coming to the update:

Awesome...!

what will be maan's reaction when he would come to the truth.

Loved it...!

Continue soon babes.

Ps:hope u got the buddy req.

Love,

Zahran.

yes princess..
i got ur request and have accepted it..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE maneet revealing there past to each other



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ! totally loved it ! i have some slight idea that the small boy would b vicky but didnt know that driver would b maan ! interesting track !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...it mean vicky was saved by geet...

Waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow...loved it...i think..the boy geet had saved was vicky...ohhh that was beautiful update...cant wait..for next...update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update! Oh so tat was maan who was driving!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m in love with this story
it is different
update soon

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