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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
devil start

thanks😳

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ElienoreMG

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: drrose31
congratulations on posting part 1 of your Devil 👏

and the start is just awesome to the extent i just forgot that you ended CTL ... 😳

before i was feeling very sad from the time i read epi of that😭

ok so geet is having just her brij bro ,who almost forced her to marry 😡

and a SIL who is looking like a genuine SIL ...😛 in the name of family

oh geet was to marry Karan-a boy selected by her parents, who are no more...😭

might be that's the reason geet agreed like in to fulfill her dead parents wish...😳

but oh !! here is the entry of the DEVIL ...MAAN SINGH KHURRANA who came and took away the bride from there without anyone's protest... 😲

and neither anyone stopped him doing so.. even naina -Her SIL stopped brij for trying to stop DEVIL...

oh geet protested hmm... but he just simply dragged her to the car ...

and oh the SAME DEVIL lines.. reminded her the original DEVIL.. 😉

wonder does she know him ??? 😕

but then she didn't know him right

waiting for revelation on the DEIL's ch and also geet's thoughts

waiting for next

take care

love yaa 🤗

hiii

hugsss

here are comments by my doc

hey there is much to come

winks

this is devil 😉

expect the unexpected

hehehe

and these devil lines are the signature

i use them ein every devil story in the start

so it has become kind of a tradition now😆

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

omg omg anniee u make me fall for THE DEVIL once again,with only 1 updateactualy not with update it started from prologue😆

awesome update yar muahhh🤗

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neha gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: anshra

a lot more surprises coming up
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hehehe, , yup di, will be waiting for more surprises...😃

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393794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: ManeetGurtiMG
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thanks😳

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393794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: neha5058

hehehe, , yup di, will be waiting for more surprises...😃

and me hopinh that u like them😉

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Di i was much better now. I dont want to miss devil this time what ever happens.and ur creator of the devil.love u di.
Hey dona thanks yar.how ru.

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393794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: sona-rai
omg omg anniee u make me fall for THE DEVIL once again,with only 1 updateactualy not with update it started from prologue😆
awesome update yar muahhh🤗

hiii

hugs

oya me hoping that u like the story

and i can meet up the expectations

bcs this devil is different and more ruthless

than the previous ones😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet
Di i was much better now. I dont want to miss devil this time what ever happens.and ur creator of the devil.love u di.
Hey dona thanks yar.how ru.

aww so sweet

but i will only update when i know

that u r taking carre of urself

or no update😲😆