Pt1 Forbidden Fire(A Devil's Tale) thrd1 Pg68

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Samata Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

only one word for it..awesome...

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

nice part
does geet know maan
continue soon

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rubimad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

awesome, amazing, wonderful, the devil is back, and i am back too.

thanks a lot dear for starting this new story. sorry for the late comment, was sick like hell. thanks a lot for the pms.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Part 1 – so maan kidnapped her on her wedding day…..geet wanted to stop this marriage and it happened but landed in another hell with DEVIL SINGH KHURANA

And most imp thing …..NO KISS HAPPENED….lol…

TFP

IF is troubling in pressing like button...count me in your likes...my place is at 401...lol...

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

update...😳

keep ing dear...😃

Happy Diwali to all of u Dears...

Happy Bhaidooj...dears

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Geet struck with the devil again 🤣

ohh god what did she do 😲

he is not letting her go soo easily...poor she

she doesn't know what he is capable of

he is going to finish her now😳

loved the part

continue soon

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Awesome part.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm.

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

love this story, it's so interesting and mysterious I can't believe that i can find Maan and Geet story so much involving.

Loved it too much.

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#839

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Faiza

@DreamyPrincess1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#840

Ch1. Devil was back & here i m again reading it... ;)

that was really expected that is HE is UNEXPECTED Man Maan Singh Khurana...

Geet wedding to some1... hmmm Karan... Poor oski to MSK ko dekh k Haal hi kharab hogaya tha :P

Really Enjoyable Start... :)

Ch.2 Just two days before of Her marriage Maan watch her in hotel...

Haila!! He directly ask for dinner... & obvious she deny... But she didn't know she is welcoming a devil..

its getting interesting as He kidnap God in front of all poor people cant save her from him too... they were suppose to stop him like they didn't care for Geet...

that is bad... Now dinner date with kidnapper...

Such a psycho !!!

Ch.3 Speechless...

Love the dialogs u know u rocked again...
Geet geet wrong words... U r just more ignitate devil to turn on his fury ...
Lol... He just picked her 4 dinner..
He ruined her wedding... God Msk u r so unpredictable...

Aniee awesum dialogs... 1st once devil is also angel n or u even trust angel's words...
Love the update...
Stubborn Geet. I think now she did nt have dinner with him...
Waiting 4 next what will both do... Please update soon...

Ch.4 Aniee H Anshra what a devil he is.. he gave gun to her...

ab to ek Devil ka Monologue banta hai...
2 din main ek larki ne ek heartless personified tycoon ko kia bana dala hai... really want to know that...
what if she shot herself...

by God Aniee kia dialgs thy Maan Singh Khurana k on breath in that air where he would be ... one more dialogue

"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would stop taking yourself seriously."

he want to ruin her.. what kind of this is person...Y he want to do that... y he want to she also burn that fire in what he is burning???

countless questions GOD now i want DTP too

Ch5. Aniee H Anshra Amazing update..

this Maan is very very diff.. I like him
I love the most where maan Keenly watching her as she was thinking about her inner where he enter so smoothly... She was hell scared as he was some enigma, who never understand his acts & words..

Most intense dialog of today "Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more,"

after ruining his dinner he just through DATE directly, that was unxpected but HE ROCK with his words & action

then telling her to DROP THE IDEA MARRYING AGAIN.. again he left with COnfusions.. hehehehe

& that "I hope you know what a couple is supposed to do on a date?"
Would be supposed one kiss here???
haye Can't wait for NEXT!!!

In full secruity MSK reached where he should be
then bring her with him that to in Nite Dress .. hehehe
God!! What he was thinking or planing yr.. Aniee its Mindblowing ...
I m Falling more with this DEVIL!!!
Thnx for updating...

P.S: & yes after joing English Classes, U r going so fast in vocabulary as I m using Dictationary while reading chapters!!!
BEST OF LUCK DEAR !!!

Ch6. why is that apple on fire in that pic.?

Muje bhi dena hoga kia jawab???

Logically its all about fruity madness & that too with Fire shows Passion, so u have to carry passion which may be burn u along itself...

Again Geet ruin their dinner date with stupid acts, questions, then rasing her voice against him, denying him in all way, as she is herself blow the firm in him with her small small acts...

"Strip for me" last precap se hi laga tha kuch esa hi hoga... but never thought it would be like that, which I love it, Unexpected & unpredicatble like Our DEVIL, who just want her, But in what way I really don't know still... BADLY need Devil's Pov now Aniee!!!
what is playing his mind, which never at rest in any moment of his life... always analyzing all around himself specially HER!!!

This update have some detail scene as restruant to suite of hotel for them.. I feel its really need as its show Maan's... hmmm... He is not Interseted in other strippers... he can have any but Y he want her ONLY???
Again Endless Question...

"Good. If you are scared of something then you should do it again and again, until that thing can no longer frighten you."

U can't apply this in all acts yr... How can we do it again again which afraid me... Please explain it to me!!!

Thank u for updating these unusual stories!!!
Good Luck!!!

Edited by DreamyPrincess1 - 13 years ago

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