MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

awesome di

it was a grea journey o maaneet

waiting for 4 part epilogue😛

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Awesome Update ...its decent , naughtniess , passionate and most important love is essence of this update not only physical but emotionally too ...

Loved the update from core of heart ,,ooops its last update i really going to miss updates of vivah but also waiitng for your new ff ..

Waiting for epilogue ...

and Thanks for such a lovely story

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deeps_aga

@deeps_aga

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Awesome update dear...

Will Miss VIvah for sure...

Couldn't describe it in words... i jst love this update... it was a pure love...

n in one word it was Sensuous...

Loved every bit of it...

Hats Off to u Ritzy...👏

Edited by deeps_aga - 12 years ago

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

beautiful.

the way its written its just says.. VIVAAH.. finally the sacred word of teh sacred realtion getting the two sould together foreveer

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billy_ritu

@billy_ritu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

totally smoking hot

loved it

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Ah!! That was ☺️
Loved it!

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

😭Oh it ended but i shld say beautifully said story keep on writing ...lovely upate waiting 4 epilogue thoa elaborate nahi karsakthi thi?😉me became shameless u maintained dignity of story or me became besharam maneet ki passion hi kuch aisa hai ki apsara rishiyon par jo asar kartha waisa nasha de jathe hai they make us insane still.its going to be a year on this december they said (the show)adios to us firbhi thum jaise writers maneet ko zinda rakha hai never ever stop writing...thnx 4 wonderful story👏

Edited by mansiahmed - 12 years ago