MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17 - Page 34

super end of super ff .grt jurney of maan geet 2 maneet, a true VIVAH by hrt nd soul⭐️⭐️⭐️

going 2 mis it,hats of 2 u 4 ur hrd wrk👏👏👏

Awsome update
Sinply speechless nd hot update
Nd dat part where maan asked hook kaha hai lolzzz...its sooo funny

being a silent reader, have no criticism..Just appreciation and praises...extremely well written story, waiting for the epilogue and all the best for your new FF Ritzy :)

Part 68:- Awesome,amazing, beautiful superb, wonderful
loved it

loved maaneet married
loved maaneet moments
loved the teasing session
geet is full shy shy and maan is embarrassed
no one leave them from teasing
maan's personal pillow 😆

Part 69:-
beautiful part
loved it
loved maaneet moments, romance
their conversation, confession, maan's teasing
finally maaneet become one
in all sense

amazing yar ritzy😳loved it a lot.

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ohhh shit man!!!!😲 i was late..
aarrghh idiot bhai of mine😡..u know wht... we were literally fighting with hands and legs to get to the system first.. and donkey uski wajah se i got late..and mera 1st place😡😭

chalo koi na...epoligue mein hi sahi!!!
now coming to the update... i know ye padhke mujhe jutte padne waale hain...
but i think this is the 1st ever romantic/SR wala part in any ff 🤔that i am laughing instead of blushing!!!😆🤣🤣

okie okie sooo sorry to laugh... but kya karoon..apni hansi nahi ruk rahi ye soch kar ki koi apne SR pe bhi itne nakhre kar sakta hain kya?? aur i also sang tan tana tan tan tan tara in the class..🤣
sorry to laugh di...i was really enjoying their entire convo..very very very beautifully written!!!!👏
maan is such a nakhrebaaz!!!😆
but u know di...this was i think the most perfect way of writing their union..kyunki shayad issey zyada mature stuff hota tho shayad VIVAH ka matlab hi kahin kho jata!!!!! maan and geet have a long way to go now..with their love...and here i recalled a poem by John Clare...

Love lives beyond
The tomb, the earth, which fades like dew.
I love the fond,
The faithful, and the true.
Love lies in sleep,
The happiness of healthy dreams,
Eve's dews may weep,
But love delightful seems.
'Tis seen in flowers,
And in the even's pearly dew
On earth's green hours,
And in the heaven's eternal blue.

'Tis heard in spring
When light and sunbeams, warm and kind,
On angel's wing
Bring love and music to the wind.
And where is the voice
So young, so beautiful, so sweet
As nature's choice,
Where spring and lovers meet?
Love lies beyond
The tomb, the earth, the flowers and dew.
I love the fond,
The faithful, young and true."

now me getting senti..vivah over??? inni jaldiii😭
but this ff was phenomenal di...i started loving vivah the day u had put on the concept only...very very very close to my heart!! will miss it very much..
thank u sooo much for giving such an awesum blossom ff di...
love u loads!!!🤗
now waiting to bug u in WINTER SONATA😃

fabulous update even i m sad that nw vivah has ended but still epilouge is there i will never forget this beautiful ff ever n eagerly waiting for ur new ff also

Originally posted by: maansee

SO FAST DEAR

it finally they became one last part will miss it4 part epilogue eagerly waiting for it

too hot☺️ update