MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17 - Page 37

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last chapter of vivah..ye last kyun aa gya..??
Apne kaha na ki pata nahi aap update kiye bina kaise rahoge..then dnt hurt urself nd us...plz keep it updating na...
4 chapter long epilogue is a happy news..bt it cn't wash away the pain of vivah reaching the end..
I loved d love filled update..bt today i cnt cmnt more on the chapter..kyunki iske end ke khabar ne mujhe bohot bohot bohot upset kar diya hai..
Di aapne isse TDDUP jitna long kyun nahi kiya??
I m too emotionally attached to it..
U knw ye woh ff hai jisne mujhe itna affect kiya ki maine ispe poem bana diya..
I dnt knw wat i m going to do without it..

i m sure none maaneet ff is going to do the same magic on me jo vivah ne kiya hai
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Aaj to phir se 16 december 2011 wali feelings umad aayi..
End of another ghsp..

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sad that its over...awesome story it was like alll other story of yours...waiting for the epilogue...😊

wow simply awesooome..loved it to d core..just fab...

awesome updte

ohhh ritzy... when first thing in the morning i get update and that to like this...
its a wonderful way to start a day..hehe

well i will say it was written very beautifully... awesomely showed the love and passion of husband wife...

the way you describe everything is great... from lights itself you started creating the moment and then the hug went ahead which was symbol of love and how slowly you took us into their world of passsion was awsome...

Writting scenes in Sr is common thing but the way you created the environment and slowly how you took us to Maaneet passion world is outstanding... I loved how with each slow step and with each words that maaneet spoke, you stirred us.

One of the most beautifully written SR...

you undoubtly have done such a classic work with this whole FF dear... no wonder today it is one of the most famous FF.

But suddenly last part... aisa kaise... yeh to dhokha hai... now four parts epilogue and we are done.

I know you will smash IF ff section with your next FF too but VIVAH has its own class...

the way you have slowly taken the story, describing everything you took in hand, very patiently, this has made VIVAH go inside the reader's heart...

you know, Maan was getting naughty and i would have loved little more parts of this naughty husband side with Maan, possesive ans passioante Maan...

how he always gets impatient with Geet and how he pulls her away from the crowd for their moment... these things I would have loved to read from you as you are very good or one of the best in writting such scenes.

well waiting for epilogues now...

Thank u dear for the amazing ending, it was simply superb, we will miss it,

Geet teased Maan.. too bad... loved it..