MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 44

Originally posted by: lehr

nice update dear.

continue soon.

Originally posted by: nishnal

Hey shona hope u remembr me...im sorry didnt give u my feedback 4 the story... 😭
i loved the concept geet n maan r always a fabulous pair whtr the story is abt school love;colge love or anythg...gts amazng to read such sweet stories wid emotionz...ur story is the same...i appreciate wid thy ur conveyng geet's insecurities awkward behaviour possesive behaviour 4 maan...bt i would request u to let us know whtz going on inaan's mind n wht does he feel 4 geet...wht r his views...tht thought makes me xcitd thinkng y maan didnt manifoy geet ths tym...it made me sad too aftr knowng geet's miserable state...tlz give a bit aqymoments cnt c geet in pain n so confusd over her state...she cnt evn let her pain out..hope u give sme gud moments of maaneet...loved thr frndshp alot... 😭

Originally posted by: angel_smily

awesome update

thanks for the pm

continue soon

Originally posted by: palindrome

It was the most painful chapter of this os...{pehle pyaar ka pehla gum..abhi abhi toh shuru hua hai...didnt u hear the next stanza of this song...
"humne the dekhe..
sath jo milke..
Sapne ruth gaye..
Sare khilone..
Kanch ke nikle...
Shann se tut gaye..."
so..imagine what is yet to come in ur way.}

Is maan ki toh mein>>>>>>>>😡😡😡..{Kya karogi..bechaare ka?..dont forget..agar usse kuch hua toh taklif geetu ko hi hogi}

poor geet..

its high time shona i want maan's pov now...!!!kab se keh rahi hoon but you are not telling us whats going on in that stupid's mind...!!!!😕{STUPID mat kaho na!...read my reply to "nishnal"...if u cant wait toh i will tell u secreatly..is that ok?}

Geet's condition is really miserable..I want all this happening with maan too...😡 "bhala kisi ka kar na sako toh...
Bura kisi ka mat karna.."🤣
dont worry...bhagwan hai na!
Shayad wo teri baat sun le.}

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hey Shona,

Me was stalking Divu, when I landed on this thread by mistake or rather coincidence😆

But I am so glad I found this OS.{and am glad to know that u did not regrat this co-incidence!😊}

It is a totally adorable tale of puppy love.{😊}But it's all through Geet's point of view.

Her view on their friendship, to her realization of deeper feelings for Maan.

But what about Maan. Are you going to give us his point of view too.

I sure would love that and I'm sure there is a story from his side too hai na?😉{u never know..dii. Wait a little..time will tell!...do read my reply to "nishnal"..u will find few answers!}

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Totally enjoyingthis OS, though the parts are bahut chota chota,{typing is a difficult task for me...agar pen se likhna hota toh..ab tak toh story puri bhi ho gai hoti} but still the story is engrossing.

Waiting eagerly for more, to see where you are going to take the story.😃{thank u so much di. And a bia hug for trusting me..i will not disappoint u..i promise!}

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Originally posted by: Susegad

How did I misspart 15😲{hota hai..hota hai..}

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Aur yeh kya, what is Maan upto? Umm is he trying to perhaps make her jealous, ya phir is he really an idiot.😕{golmaal hai bhai.. sab golmaal hai..}

Bechari Geet.

Dilke tukde, tukde karke muskurake chal diye,

Jate jate tu yeh toh bata jaa hum jiyenge kiske liye.{chand bhi hoga.. Taare bhi honge..fool chaman me pyaare bhi honge...per hamara dil na lage ga!}

Jaldi jaldi next update please.😉{kab chahiae??}

@Divu

Beta, tu Himalay se wapis aa gayi?😆

Nahi tu kahi dikhi nahi na, isilye aise laga.

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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Originally posted by: palindrome

hmmm...you are right...!!its not easy to share...!!!!

So what do you have planned for her now???

Does she have to suffer this all alone????

Originally posted by: Diva7

arrey yaar shona ...tod diya tune meri geetu ka dil😒{haww..maine kya kiya divu?..her heart wasnt with me..if u remember!}

now m vry angry on maan...is he jst teasing her or seriously paying no attention towards her😭{Boojho toh jaane..}

yes u warned...dat there may b some chances of dis goin to happen ...

par ab kya ???????{I dont know either! Bhagwan pe bharosa rakho..behan..🤣}

as i saidearliern m saying it again, u r improvingmarvelously in ur writing ...vry well written dear{"taarife karo na..itni bhi jyada..jhukengi Sharam se ye aankhen meri"
jokes apart,
thank u divu..it means alot to me..Luv u!😊}

ab nxt part jaldi de dena...zaada intzaar na karaiyo😳{jo hukum madamji..!😊}

Originally posted by: Shonameet

UPDATE is coming soon...tab tak...teaser chalega kya? haan tab tak teaser se hi kaam chala lenge yaara 😆