MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Geet restless! n sad! Update soon

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nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Hey shona hope u remembr me...im sorry didnt give u my feedback 4 the story... 😭
i loved the concept geet n maan r always a fabulous pair whtr the story is abt school love;colge love or anythg...gts amazng to read such sweet stories wid emotionz...ur story is the same...i appreciate wid thy ur conveyng geet's insecurities awkward behaviour possesive behaviour 4 maan...bt i would request u to let us know whtz going on inaan's mind n wht does he feel 4 geet...wht r his views...tht thought makes me xcitd thinkng y maan didnt manifoy geet ths tym...it made me sad too aftr knowng geet's miserable state...tlz give a bit aqymoments cnt c geet in pain n so confusd over her state...she cnt evn let her pain out..hope u give sme gud moments of maaneet...loved thr frndshp alot... 😭

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

geet u r in love with maan...so u r behaving like dis...possessive...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

awesome update

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

part 15
nice part...
poor her...
shes so depressed...
cont soon dear...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

It was the most painful chapter of this os...

Is maan ki toh mein>>>>>>>>😡😡😡..

poor geet..

its high time shona i want maan's pov now...!!!kab se keh rahi hoon but you are not telling us whats going on in that stupid's mind...!!!!😕

Geet's condition is really miserable..I want all this happening with maan too...😡

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Hey Shona,Me was stalking Divu, when I landed on this thread by mistake or rather coincidence😆

But I am so glad I found this OS.

It is a totally adorable tale of puppy love.But it's all through Geet's point of view.

Her view on their friendship, to her realization of deeper feelings for Maan.

But what about Maan. Are you going to give us his point of view too.

I sure would love that and I'm sure there is a story from his side too hai na?😉

Totally enjoying this OS, though the parts are bahut chota chota, but still the story is engrossing.

Waiting eagerly for more, to see where you are going to take the story.😃

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

arrey yaar shona ...tod diya tune meri geetu ka dil 😒

now m vry angry on maan...is he jst teasing her or seriously paying no attention towards her 😭

yes u warned...dat there may b some chances of dis goin to happen ...

par ab kya ???????

as i said earlier n m saying it again, u r improving marvelously in ur writing ... vry well written dear

ab nxt part jaldi de dena...zaada intzaar na karaiyo 😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

How did I miss part 15😲

Aur yeh kya, what is Maan upto? Umm is he trying to perhaps make her jealous, ya phir is he really an idiot.😕

Bechari Geet.

Dilke tukde, tukde karke muskurake chal diye,

Jate jate tu yeh toh bata jaa hum jiyenge kiske liye.

Jaldi jaldi next update please.😉

@Divu

Beta, tu Himalay se wapis aa gayi?😆

Nahi tu kahi dikhi nahi na, isilye aise laga.

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: Susegad
How did I miss part 15😲

Aur yeh kya, what is Maan upto? Umm is he trying to perhaps make her jealous, ya phir is he really an idiot.😕

Bechari Geet.

Dilke tukde, tukde karke muskurake chal diye,
Jate jate tu yeh toh bata jaa hum jiyenge kiske liye.

Jaldi jaldi next update please.😉

@Divu
Beta, tu Himalay se wapis aa gayi?😆
Nahi tu kahi dikhi nahi na, isilye aise laga.