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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for next update..do cont. soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii alll i am here with part 3








PART 3

Maan: kya hua ( what happened…)

……. He was actually getting panic seeing her condition….he was extremely sweet and soft with her…like she was ….he was behaving like a good and protective friend and husband….. after all now since they have been forced to get married and they have to live with this relation so now the things will be according to him….

Maan looked at her clad in their traditional jewellery well no doubt she was looking like a gorgeous Barbie doll but those jewel pieces were extremely heavy for her…..geet was just looking at her feet her eyes down casted as said by her mother..

Maan was getting restless seeing her all quite .. well he was just a teenager and have seen the girls around him all chirpy and talkative but here his wify is all quite and terrified… he was actually shamelessly staring at her and she … the innocent baby doll was just waiting him to blast at her for getting unconscious on heir first night.. wedding night OR say SUHAAGRAAT as elders say…

She was still shivering and her lips were quivering in fear that what will happen next … what will he do with her.. what she has to do now being his wife now… she doesn't know anything just the word WIFE… means that she can't now do the things that she always liked… she can't play with her dolls.. sh won't be able to go her school.. and the biggest and the painful thing was that she is parted from her family ….

Maan slightly touched her hands… they were cold .. actually she was not only ice cold but sweating also… he immediately looked at her …

Maan: tum theek ho…. ( are you fine..)

Extremely soft in his tone… she nodded .. but the chime of her bangles and those killing jewels made him realize that the how odd she must be feeling with all those adornments… he didn't want to get pity on her but what all she was bearing along with him was not at all justified … his gaze went to the exposed portion of her neck which has turned red and sore just because some elders and some non wanted people of their wanted want to rule the life of their…

Maan never went against anything .. he always respected his elders considered their words as right but sometimes it is necessary to change the facts that were now destroying some innocent lives is instead of protecting them….

Maan st : ye kya ho raha hai… ek taraf ye log humein apni marzi se apni zindagi k faisle lene ki azaadi dete hain aur dusre hi pal kuch aisa ho jaata hai jisse wo azaadi ek pinjre me kaid panchi se bhi jyada chubne lagti hai…

What is this happening … on one side we are having the right to live our life with our expectations and dreams and the next moment all seems to be a big illusion the given freedom seems to be worst than the life of a cged bird…

Geet still didn't lift up her head.. making maan to think over and over again what is with her that sh is behaving like this… when he couldn't take it longer .. he lifted her chin with his index finger.. still quivering .. geet looked up .. and looked at him.. a small smile on his face .. like assuring her that she could trust on him.. he is first like a friend for her …. Still she couldn't bear the intensity and that silent promise which her nave mind didn't even understand ….

Again she downcasted her eyes downwards..

Now that was the limit of ignorance and arrogance as maan thought but his mind was in a mood to fight with his odd thinking…. Telling him…" does she even look like any kind of arrogance maan get your facts cleared first.. his mind kind of scolded him.. maan was now guilty so now thought to directly ask him….

Maan was now confused .. how to address her.. call her… but still he called her …

Maan : geet…

Geet looked at him through corner of her eyes …

Maan : kya mere chehre kuch laga hai ( is something wrong with me or my face…)

Geet looked all puzzled her doe shaped hazels turned into a wide soccer ball.. and answered …in a very meek voice

Geet : nahi toh… ( no..)

Maan : toh phir meri taraf kyun nahi dekh rahi ho…(then why are you not looking at me..) that was inappropriate certainly out of place with geet… and he immediately corrected ….

Maan : mera matlab hai… upar dekh kar baat karo..( I mean you can look straight while you talk…

Geet very innocently answered making him to loose in guilt and her and a certain rage erupted for the rituals that were damaging the life of young innocent children…

Geet : hum aapki taraf kaise dekh sakte hain aap toh hamare pati hai na… maa ne kaha tha aap se nazrein niche rakh kar baat karein..

( how can I talk looking into your eyes .. you are my husband .. and maa said I should always keep my eyes low infront of you…)

A certain guilt surged through him … getting married being husband and wife were just words for him and even for her… but the intensity and heart with which she was trying to cope up was making his heart swell with some unknown pride and was nurturing the seeds of respect and love that will be unconditional for her just for her…

" kuch rishte naa chahte hue bhi hume apne me band dete hain…

Kuch jazbaat lobon pe na aakar bhi zehan me bas jaate hain…

Ek najuk dor se jude do masoom dil jo na milkar bhi ek dusre se judh jayenge…"

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That's it for now…

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Since this is sensitive topic and full of maaneet so the progress of story is slightly slow .. so enjoy the mushy moments …..




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Posted: 12 years ago
yeppiee after along time
awesome update
thank god maan think rationally nd asked geet why she is not seeing him
warna pata nahi gusse me akar kya kar deta
waiting for more
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN TRYING TO TALK WITH GEET .PAR GEET SO NERVOUS.MAAN THIKNING WHAT IS HAPPENING ..BARE HAMESHA APNA FAISLA CHOTE KI UPPER THOK KIYU DETE HAY? WATING FOR NEXT WHAT WILL BE HAPPEN BETWEEN MAANEET
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely cute update.. te way my maaneet feeling restless and my maan feeling guilty was so lovely.. oh buddhu maan only ur geet can make u to feel like u r alien.. te way way innocent geet saying tat wife should see her husband kji eyes was so lovely.. maan now only ur geet is like tis, once she shows her sherni avatar u will bow in front of her..i love te update so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update diii
loved it ,,maan trying to make geet comfortable but she is scared
waiting for next

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