MG SS: parchaai..pt 10 page 100 aug 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii all ...

here is something...

a new topic...a new theme dont know if you will accept this or not ...





PART 1



She was sitting crossing her arms on her chest'her knees badly shivering'the maiden was crying all the way trying to form the scene that is going to happen'..whimpering sobbing all the way'.. a girl 'a mere fourteen year old beautifully dressed as a bride 'her nose adorned with a big nose ring touching her baby pink supple lips'. Her ears and neck burned with the heavy costly jewelley '.the adornments that itself costs in lakhs'valuable to the eyes of the people..but for her these doesn't mean anything'. They are only making her to bury her in their weight'..

Her sobbing is not getting subdued the pain she is facing in her arms her lips'is beyond any measure'.. she is clutching her her red bridal attire'.which is no less than a " LAAL KAFAN " for her'.. a beautiful girl , sobbing'.. geet ..geet handa'she is a student 'a bubbly girl who loves to play to pamper her small brother'. But now she is not geet handa anymore 'now she is binded with him'. Now she is GEET KHURANA'..

Remembering her wedding the deep pain that was subdued till now came on its surface and she started weeping loudly uncontrollably'..

Geet feeling extremely suffocated in her veil that her mother told her literally warned her not to lift'its her husband right ..she will give herself to him today'.poor fellow didn't even know the meaning of deep words that her mother said to her'..

A DAY BEFORE HER WEDDING''

Geet was sitting in her room'she was made wear all the new clothing 'suddenly without telling her any reason she was told that from now on she has to wear the things that till now she has seen her mother '.the women in her house used to wear''

Geet was sitting in her room'her hairs were flowing in the cool wind that was coming from her window'. Her wet hairs with her rose fragrance can make anyone loose its sanity'.playing with her dolls'looking at her books last time'.she looked at the last remark her teacher gave her due to her constant outstanding performance''

Tears drops are falling from her eyes'.from tomorrow she will not belong to her dear ones that she heard her mother saying to her father''

Geet: ( talking to her doll'she is been her only friend now'no one is there for her'') hum kal yahan se chale jayenge'' koi hame yaad nahi karega'' aap bhi nahi honge yahan 'sab geet ko chod dete hain'.chahat bhi chali gai geet ko chodkar'..kyun sab chale jaate hai dolly geet ko chod kar''

When she was weeping ''her mother with her chachi came in her room'. Her chachi seeing her crying went towards her '' she can't see her crying'she is her first daughter '.no matter what she can't see her crying'.

She immediately took her geet in her embrace''

Veera: geet kyon ro rahi hai '' bolo kisine kuch kaha hai meri geet ko'.geet was now scared of all and meekly nodded her head in a NO'.

Veera: geet tu apni chachi se bhi jooth bolegi'..

Geet lept in her amrs and started sobbing uncontrollably''

Geet: hume nahi jaana chachi ''please hume nahi jaana'..(sob) '.hum aapko kabhii pareshan nahi karenge'..she looked towards her mother'

Geet: ma'gee two hi karegi jo aap kahengi..hume mat maro...

How can be a mother so cold hearted'well she is not but these rituals this society'.


"wo usool jo is samaj me bana diye gaye hai'.jinhone kabhi bhi ek ladki ke jazbaath ko nahi dekha''ek gudiya jo bina jaane bina kuch samje'.sabh samjah jaati hai'.ye samaj use sab samjha deta hai'.."

Her mother took her dear daughter in her embrace''

Rano: geet '..she called her but geet was hiding her face in her mother's embrace'..

Rano: geet meri taraf dekh beta'.

Geet looked at her mother with those fearful teary eyes'.a mother's heart was weeping seeing her daughter crying''

Veera looked at rano with same tears'.like saying to do something stop this marriage but nothing is in her hands''.



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This is something that may be many of you will not like ''

I am just posting it for my satisfaction as I cant stop myself for writing it when I had this in my mind..''


if any one of you will think that i should continue this...then please do tell me...


SUHAANA


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yeppeiii
me 1st.
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pehle read krrlu.. dn give cmnt abt updte😆😆😆
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iz it abt child marriage???...nice start...doo continue...
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Originally posted by: suhaarabia

iz it abt child marriage???...nice start...doo continue...




yup u can say its something similar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waooo👏

osmmm updte yr..

u r again with a new concept..
hatts off to u..👏👏
hmm geet is jst 14
n she is marreid😡
grhhh..😡
waiting for maan😳😳
cont soon⭐️
and snd me pm too😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: simrancuty

waooo👏


osmmm updte yr..

u r again with a new concept..
hatts off to u..👏👏
hmm geet is jst 14
n she is marreid😡
grhhh..😡
waiting for maan😳😳
cont soon⭐️
and snd me pm too😊




thank u for liking i was scared before posting it...

but u liked it is enough for me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo on new ss
oh no geet is just 14 n she was forced to marry!
Waitng for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice subject dear
baal vivah
awesome start..
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation for new MG SS
nice concept
loved it
update soon dear

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