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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates...
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(This part is for Nisha Rijhwani (fb) Sorry buddy i dont know ur IF name .. who was eager for update from last night .. love uu buddy 😃)


PART 23


Maan glared geet and dragged her to his room. Both nakul n geet was stunned. Both were in kitchen when they heard maan shout and run out to see. They saw guest leaving, almost running and maan red eyes on geet. Geet clutched her dress in anticipation and then she felt, being dragged by a strong and hard pull. She was going upstairs and found herself in maan room, with a loud sound of closing door , behind.



She stood frozen, trembling poorly. She looked maan who was standing, rested his forehead to door, devastated. Geet felt heart burn. Why maan brought her here, like this. She moved back, fearing. She touched wall behind, rested there like statue, waited for what he says. Her wait was not ending. Both were quiet, unmoved. Room was soundless. No noise from anywhere. Only one sound was making them feel of aliveness , was their own skipping heart beats.



Maan could not turn, face her. What he did !! why ?? .. " m I going mad?? '' he thought. His mind was noising without any mean. He wanted time to stop at same moment and he had not to face her questioning eyes. He knew she was frightening , of him.. " from me.. no geet ..pls don't scare of me'' his heart cried.



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"maanji '' he heard her sound, calling him. Geet could not wait more. She wanted her answer. What is going in her life. Why nothing was straight. Why everything was messy and difficult to understand for her naive mind. So she called him again .. " maanji ''



maan looked back to her. Their eyes met. Geet saw it was dark. She frowned. He looked her like she was the only reason for all this happening. But what I did ?'' she dint know. Maan gaze lessened and he left from there, leaving a nearly destroyed geet behind.




Geet saw him running out in anger. She held her heart to make it calm. It was pacing highest. She followed him, looked he was going out. She wiped her dropping tears which was started now. She came down and saw nakul, who was looking both with confusion, yet sympathetic manner. Geet looked him, asking where maanji could go. She was so hurt still, was worrying for him, worrying for her only savior , newly found love of her life. She could not see him in this horrible state. She remembered his care for her, when she was distressed. She would do same. She composed herself and went to kitchen. Nakul had told whenever maan be angry he used to stay in outhouse. She decided to make coffee for him. Might, it will calm him a little.



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Geet was in outhouse, with coffee mug. It was dark inside. It was her first visit here so did not know where to go and find maan. She was going randomly when heard dull sound. She stepped same direction and shocked to see , maan was doing his raging exercise. His fist was punching a strong sack s speedily. His shirt was laying on ground, ripped. His vest was drawn in sweat like anything, his whole body was on burning fire yet, he was speeding his punch with each passing time. His condition was horrible. She could not see his this condition. Run to him trying to stop him. She knew she had no right to do anything , for him yet she would do, like he had done. She headed to him..



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Maan was hurt what he was doing to her. When he heard people saying geet a maid, his heart screamed. She was his happiness.. his hope. He could not bear his life being insulted and roared to them. It was realization for him, for her. He dragged her with him and closed door behind so no one could insult her further. He was wanting to hide her from whole world. she was maan singh khurana possession and no one had any right to hurt her. But when I brought her in room, remembered my oath. She was nothing to me. I left from there and came out to house to fight with my inner turmoil. I started punching to release my fright, of loosing her. And then I heard her foot steps...



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Maan stopped. Why she was here. He turned his head , aside. Her word stuck in her throat. She coughed in term of forcing her words to bring out. She kept dupatta on mouth to do no sound. She was in dilemma. She was seeing her love her savior , breaking before her and she could not do anything to soothe him. She never learned to say comforting words. In her whole life she dint hear any comforting words from anyone, so could not remember any thing to heal him . She had nothing but a blankness.



Maan was waiting for her , to soothe him. Why ?? he dint know. Perhaps he never heard any soothing word before, after his parent death. He never opened his heart after his family departure. So he was not able to say his needs..



Both were on same boat with same feeling for each other but both were helpless. They both needed to bring out their emotion in open air but both had never experienced it before. For both, it was first realization, first chance .. to open their locked heart.



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It was pin drop silent. Two torn heart was waiting to be stitched. Both could hear each other beats, thinking its their own. Maan and geet.. never spoke their needs yet always needed each other. They both were alone yet had, most beautiful companion, beside. Both could not see other hurt yet both, were reason for each other pain.. geet was thinking he is avoiding her , so she should leave. Maan was thinking she is leaving him cause she want to avoid him .. but both were wrong . And they realized it when geet said ..



"maanji .. I know you dont want me to work here.. stay here. that's why you are behaving like this. Agar aap nahi chahte to mai chali jaaungi '' she had pain in her voice... maan closed his eyes, with a mere thought of leaving her. yet did not reply. His silence deepened her guess. She was hurt. She turned to hide her tears and stepped to leave...



"please dont go geet '' she heard a dim sound...

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"please dont go geet '' she heard a dim sound... she stopped. Turned. He was there, facing his back to her. She thought she was hallucinating. She waited for few minutes to hear again , was it true. When she dint hear she asked "maanji ?''



"why you wanted to go geet ?'' finally he asked. He had been tired with same question which mind had been asking.



" I never wanted to go maanji '' she answered



"but you did geet.. you went away without asking me.. saying anything to me you left '' maan turned her pouring his heart. He could not bear more..



geet was shocked. Was it reason of his anger !! '' she thought. " per maanji I had asked nakul . He said you dont take interest in this small things '' she said looking him..



" it was not small thing '' he whispered..turning back again... " it was not small thing geet, it never could be '' he closed his eyes talking to self... it remained silent ' " maanji '' geet called.



" why dint you accept my gift geet '' maan asked, composing himself..., fearing of rejection again.



"konsa gift'' she was again confused.



"dont be innocent geet .. you very well know what m talking about '' maan had mock in his accent.



"but I really dont know .. ''



"really geet !! then why did you keep that packet back in my room if you dont know anything '' he turned and glared her


"i dint know that was for me .. it was in my room and had no sender name on it... how would I know it was for me .. and It was so expensive maanji... why would you give me this ?? why would a owner want to give a expensive gift, to a mere maid, maanji '' she questioned him back...




Precap : '' Shhh.. maanji .. aisa mat kahiye please'' geet kept her soft palm on his mouth .. 😉😳 & Maan past 😲


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update

so maneet not able to tell their feelings ,want them to confess them soon
maan want to bind geet with him and geet feeling herselt to be maid trying to hide herself
two alone people in the world trying to find comfort in each other embrace but none have power to blurt out their feelings
aag dono taraf hai
par dono ki bebaasi
dono ko ek kadam aage toh char kadam peeche le jati hai
hope like a fairytale geet get her prince charming maan
Edited by tabby999 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipppieee me second
cmin back to the update
maan's condition is really horrible
n he can't fight anymore with himself
thatz y he just left
without telling geet anything
maan fighting n geet is really feeling sad
seeing his horrible condition
but finally their misunderstandings are over
they told everything to each to other
after fighting with themselves for long
what will be maan's answer
to her question
will he tell out his feelings
precap is really interesting
maan's past is going to come out
want to know what made him so hard
was it only his parents death or smthing else too
update soon
waiting eagerly
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
DRASHTI LOVE U,MANEET GURTI LOVE FOREVER
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting love u DRASHTIII
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan expressing himself and confrontation about gift



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Posted: 12 years ago
got some relief...aisi end kia now maan ke reaction ke liye next update tak wait krna padega...superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally both r opening up slowly 😊 hop all the misunderstandings will be cleared soon 😛
Nice update. Loved it 😳

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