MG Untouched Desires#2 (Thread 3 link on Pg 149)

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Untouched Desires

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PART 1 (Prologue)


She was walking in garden, alone, without smile. She was beautiful, untouched, blooming yet blew off. She was 18, in her rising, gaining her feather to fly yet unmoved. She had whole sky in front of her , she had whole wold to travel but in dream only. She was rich and open from heart. She had wishes and hope to be free but when no one knew. She never asked anyone .. she had no one to ask. She was alone , walking in garden.. at night.



He was driving on road, alone without emotion. He was handsome, sharp, rich yet emotionless. He was 25, in his highest, got everything what anyone could wish for yet dissatisfied. He had flew entire sky, had hold whole world yet he never wished for it.. He had everything yet nothing. He had no love to share.. he had no one to share his love.. he was driving on road.. alone .. at night.




She was Geet.. a girl.. a mere girl, orphan, always waited for everything.. but never got even a broken piece of her dream fulfilled ever.. she wanted to go outside of this iron gate of her so called home, her orphanage, wanted to see world, The world where all people live with their families.. she always wanted to see. She never been out of there.. it doesn't mean she dint know what is world.. Yes ,,, of course she knew . She knew "World is a common name for the whole of human civilization, specifically human experience, history, or the human condition in general, worldwide, i.e. anywhere on Earth. '' she read this information in her class , afterward she dint get change to study as her seat was to give a other girl who was rich. School authority throw her out saying " you are filthy and what would you do after study further.. She said she have scholarship but no..how school would let her study where even her shadow was not accepted to be touched by.. why ?? because she was not from high society.. she had not her mother, father, family name attached with her.. because she was orphan.



He was Maan.. The Maan Singh Khurana. A personality, a power to bend your head down in front of him. He never saw any dream. He dint need to see dream cause he lived in it. His life was more than a dream but without color. He had everything, a place to live, troop of servants and maids, money to throw without seeing a glance. Yet he had no color in his dream life. It was thick, solid and colorless. On one could see through in his life. No one could shake him from his single word. what he said it was stronger then rock for all. He dint know what is called smile.. what is happiness and peace he never knew..



She loved World He hated it.. She loved and wanted to smile He hated it.. She wanted to fly He hated it.. both were orphan, both were alone.. both were needed to be one..




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Geet was walking in forest kind garden, not knowing she was living in a place which was more wild then a forest. Inside, her orphanage office, a man his 40s , giving two thick bundle of rupees to warden , grinning. Warden was busy in counting notes and man was busy in his dirty thoughts, impatiently waiting for a nod from lady (warden) and he would pawn on a innocent girl, whoever he wished. And finally she nodded. He jumped from his chair, with uncontrollable over flowed lusty desire and followed lady. She reached a pillar and rang a bell. This bell was a command for all girls, to be gathered in a hall immediately, And exactly same happened what lady knew and man wished for. All girls gathered in big , dirty, dark , creepy hall for exhibition



All girls were divided in two lines. First line was of age 30s women. Man made face and Lady signaled them to leave. Some ladies made faces and left, cursing to warden and man. They were used to all these and very well knew if they had been selected, would have been playing in money. Some thanked God for saving them one more time. Now was turn of last line. They all were of young and innocents, untouched and unknown of all these. They were nervous, shaking and braking inside with the blazing eye of man. He was moving one by one and examining all to select one best for his buy. And then his eyes caught a prey. She was standing in end of line, bend head , fiddling her dupatta, trying hard to cover her whole body behind her half miter of dupatta, which was torn already. But alas ..how could she hide her inviting feature from pricking eyes of hawk. His gaze caught her sight. He stepped to her and stopped right there. He turned and looked lady. She smiled and nodded. He smiled and looked again , his prey. and finally geet had been chosen for tonight hunt..



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Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

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Part 13

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Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

part 23

Part 24

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Just read d story in a go.
Loved it so much.
Ur simple way of writing attracted me d most.
Surprise Maan gave Geet was d best one.
Loving the way Geet calling 'Maanji'
Shld start reading ur other works too.
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Congratulation for d New thread.
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