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Posted: 12 years ago
And after that wat?
The story is progressing greately sequence wise
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7
awesome...
OMG Rameshwar looks like Maan?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...

I like Geet's char.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

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The Palace of secrets Part 8

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Madhubala hated Rameshwar.The days of hatred passed away.
Rameshwar could'nt bear it anymore.Again he went to Devendar's house.He found him with another female dancer.Rameshwar lost his control and hit him.That lady ran away.
R:How could you cheat Madhubala?
He brought Devendar to their room.Madhubala was shocked.
She became emotional seeing Devendar.
M:Devendar!
R:Madhu'he will confess how he cheated you.
Madhu looked at Devendar's eyes helplessly.
D:I love you Madhu.King Rameshwar is trying to kill me.But I can't forget you even after my death.
Rameshwar roared seeing him acting.
Madhu burst into tears.
M:You kill us Maharaj' but our love won't die.Our love is eternal.
R:Don't believe him Madhu.He is a cheater.
M:Don't utter a word against my Devendar.I won't forgive you.
Rameshwar could'nt bear Devendar's evil face and started hitting him.Madhu was crying helplessly.Rameshwar pushed him.Devendar fell on a pot.The pot hit his head and he fell dead.
Madhubala screamed:Nooo!
She stared at Rameshwar:You killed him to get me.I will finish you in the next life.
R:Madhu'
M:You won't get me.
She took the pot from down.
Rameshwar got scared:Madhu!
She hit her head with the pot.Rameshwar was shocked.He held her hand to prevent her from doing so.But there was no use.She fell down dead.Rameshwar cried loudly:Madhuuu!
He took the knife and stabbed himself.

Present'.
Everyone shed tears hearing the tragic love story.
Aloknath:According to their horoscope,Rameshwar and Madhubala were supposed to take re- birth.Because Madhubala's soul was determined to take revenge on Rameshwar. When Geet was born,seeing her horoscope itself I understood that Madhubala has reborn as Geet.When she reached her teenage it was confirmed as she looks exactly like Madhubala.
Everyone including Maan was shocked.
A:When I saw Maan for the first time I got scared.Because Maan'you look exactly like Rameshwar.
Maan was shocked:Dadu'you mean'?
A:You are the re-incarnation of Rameshwar bhai.
Maan could'nt believe it like others.
A:I opposed Maan-Geet wedding as I was scared whether Madhubala in the form of Geet will try to destroy Maan because of her misunderstandings.I did'nt want their room to be opened as it was dangerous.When Geet entered that room she was becoming Madhubala slowly.She started dancing as Madhubala.I never let her read that book.But she read it.Her past haunted her and her revengeful thoughts strengthened and that's why she tried to kill Maan.
Everyone including Maan was shocked.
M:What?
A:Yes.Geet only put oil on the steps.She did that when Madhubala entered her completely.
Maan was shocked.
A:After the accident I knew that you were suspicious as you could'nt believe that it was just an accident.So I knew that you will find the culprit.I did'nt want you to find out the truth about Geet.Because nobody can bear Geet being hated by the person she loves the most.She loves Maan that much.
Maan became emotional.
A:But if Geet keeps dancing as Madhubala by wearing Madhu's clothes and ornaments Geet would be exposed fast.So in order to stop Geet from dancing I only asked Naintara to put sleeping pills in Geet's milk.Naintara did that only to save Geet's reputation as she loves her sister Geet very much.In order to veil Geet's scary face of Madhubala she wore Madhubala's costume and danced.But because of that Naintara was suspected by Maan.It was spoiling her image.I got scared whether it will effect her future.That's why I decided to reveal the bitter truth.I did'nt have any other option.
Maan looked at Naintara.They both became very emotional.
M:I am sorry Naintara.
NT:It's ok jeeju.I did this to save my sister's married life.But still the truth came out.Please jeeju'Never leave Geet.She is not doing it purposefully.It's just because she is Madhubalaji's reincarnation.Please be with Geet.She needs you now.Won't you stand by her side?
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...nice part...
but still atleast mrte wqt to madhubala ko sachai ka pata lg jana chahiye tha...
i realy feet sad for rameshwr maan both...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part..Hope Maneet's love will win over Madhubal's hatred..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
magar abb kya hoga...geet toh sach jaane bina hi marr gayi thi...iska matlab abb geet maan ko marr dalegi...nehi yeh nehi ho sakta...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
awesome...
oh ho now will Geet win or Madhubala?
hope Maan stays safe...
cont soon dear...

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