Milan... A Poetry For Maaneet.. Maan's POV Page 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anshra

ok nowaniee holding her earsand comming here chupke chupkeand the word sorry was about toe scape from my mouthbut then i realized that this one word would meanan extra dant session from rituso i just said it in my heartsorry for commenting late:(mind it i didnt say it out loudi just said it in my hearthehehehcoming to updatei totally loved itawesomefaband as i told u earlieri am loving the concept as wellso hats off to u girlmuahz



Aww Di... I m glad u liked it...
Luv ya sooo much...
And Plzzz aapke mann me bhi no sorry plzzz...
Hugsss and Muuahhzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mishtiritu




A Very Happy Birthday Sam... May God Bless YOU...
I Luv u sooo much... Hugsss


thank u sooo much my sweetheart...
lubbb u... muaaahhh... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
sam coughing to make her voice clear...
before commenting on her rittu baby's poem...

(kamina mai thodi na accha cmnt kar pati hoon, poetry thodi na ati mereko tere tarha)

its awesomeee, fabuousss 👏
u knw u r d only one who can write poem
that too easily to make me understand each n every lines of it
as mr duffer used to stay away feom poems
as all the lines used to dance ABOVE my head... 😆

1st part mai the way u showed the helplessness
it truly make me feel like
mai jakar help karu donoko... 😃

in 2nd part
filannyyy its coming to the MILAN...
ye sam runnginy to read the 3rd part 😛

3rd part
aab jake samajh aya ki ye geet ki baat hai
as maan hi to hai jo uska akho se sab samajh jati hai

now sam running to read the whole poem again
n try to imagine each line with my MAANEET... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Dipti_Sam

sam coughing to make her voice clear...

before commenting on her rittu baby's poem...

(kamina mai thodi na accha cmnt kar pati hoon, poetry thodi na ati mereko tere tarha)

its awesomeee, fabuousss 👏
u knw u r d only one who can write poem
that too easily to make me understand each n every lines of it
as mr duffer used to stay away feom poems
as all the lines used to dance ABOVE my head... 😆

1st part mai the way u showed the helplessness
it truly make me feel like
mai jakar help karu donoko... 😃

in 2nd part
filannyyy its coming to the MILAN...
ye sam runnginy to read the 3rd part 😛

3rd part
aab jake samajh aya ki ye geet ki baat hai
as maan hi to hai jo uska akho se sab samajh jati hai

now sam running to read the whole poem again
n try to imagine each line with my MAANEET... 😆


Aww... I love u sam... Hehe Teri hindi sachi me poor hai...
But bahaut achi hai...
Luv ya sooo much...
Hugsss and kissi on ur cheeks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Mind blowing 👏

Each and every emotions was portrayed so well.. Hats of to you 🤗

Another one of your gems..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Sorry Sorry Ritu for such a late comment
My daughter fell sick again and kal toh uski bahut buri haalat thi. For once, i thought we will have to admit her to hospital. But thankfully she is much better today and I am back to work.
Poem was awesome. His devotion and love was expressed do beautifully...sach mein, I am a big fan of your poems. Not only you rhyme and all that perfectly but your use of simple words to tell a story just leaves me in awe...
When I was younger, ins chool my favorite part of Hindi was to write sarlarth of poems. Not sure if you understand but we had poems as part of our cirriculum and we had to analyse the peom, write it's meaning and what poet wanted to express. Your poems evoke those memories and urge to do it all over again.
Once again, brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

Res--Ritzieee U know I just love you sooo much soo very much yaar...!! I actually needed a smile without any tear in my eyes and U gave me one today after 2 days...u indeed my fairy who always make me smile in worst situation...I love u yaar...love u sooo much...n now for update...I actually pry someone much more special than this maan for my cutest frnd with all my heart! He took my heart away yaar! Aise hote hai...I know aise angels hote hai life main! Who loves their partners with each flaw with each drawback in them! I believe Arrange marriages can be as successful even with a past of other partner it's just the belief and love which endure a smile on your face to keep ur relation awake even after each hurdle if we expct a generous support from someone he need the same in keeping his promise...right!! I Love the fact yaar...this was actually close thn the past poem of same OS...I Love Maan's POV yaar it's just perfectly awstruck the way you described his feeling was so heart soothing yaar...I Just Love it... The start than how Maan met her with family allience how her first look told him her heart and than how he took care of her feelings when she told him abt her past how he felt dejected still maintained his love for her how at each step he took care o her and their relation...how he took care of everything with all his love and care and finally was paied back with her love...she was forced to love him...the same way...aoww I just love the while story...U indeed with no dobt the best in poems and trust me ur poems make me smile even when they touchy...and trust me aaj b yahi hua...n today i actually wnna ask u something...i wnt u to be with me each tym i cry!! To make me smile...!! I love U sooo much


Aww... I had lil tears in my eyes reading this cmnt... I luv u more my GB... and Tu is fairy ki jaadu ki chadi hai jiske bina fairy kuch nahi...
and I Promise I will be always there with you forever...
Luv ya too... and hugsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Thank u sooo much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

veryyy beautiful Ritzz... 🤗
the rhyming and stuff was bang on... 😃 👍🏼
very well done on that note...

Also... the emotions and story that u tried to put across came out evidently... so again.. hats off to you for that...

This MILAN truly tells that all u need to do is keeping loving the one u love... and wateva will happen will be correct... 😃

Awesome Ritzz...
love u GF... 🤗


Thank u meri BF...
Luv ya sooo much... hugsss

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